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Defiant vs. namix {namix wins}
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check - somewhere between 24-48?
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It'll never get voted on
12-16 or il match if u drop first |
hey fellas im going to need a 24hr ext, but will hit this up tomorrow
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it’s okay to look up to me – but please, close ya eyes as I’m bustin
as I shake my ass ‘n the last of my rust off from several levels above him I can kick it solo in the dojo… um wait.. eyo admins, hold the grin thanks for putting me against the name we use to give away no-show wins if not I’ve got a demodulator, built to expose a bitch when its spotted; ‘n GOWs gotta demodulator, built on the idea ya shouldn’t be modded! when kids see vs. me, some do a 360, others flip gracefully but the second that I said I said Hi Def, this kid did a damn 1080p but yo, on the cupid tip - if he met my last opponent, it’d be funny son cuz on the town or in the casino, he’d be the only playa hittin on 21 this kid was even named after a night I took his mom backwards in bed ya’ll want nameplay? put Defiant in a mirror ‘n reflect on the t-n-a i feD the hour is neigh, hop off that high horse and on down to my sack or be on the ground, hands down -like a throwback powerpad match! and what the hell is that?i if 5-5 is his record, he has no chance if its poker, it means he got a small pair in his hand AND his pants! ;) |
these kids your meant to be teaching are wack, but u cant deny none
ironic u offer a cross trainer service, but id have you tied to tracks and ran over by one apprentely u was decent, but now you've spat in every fans face cause when i say namibia poor excuse, its not a opinion of the african place heard the old names but never u, so now im colder than december that even w/ a 'kungfugrip' we dont 'oneduh' why your a 'username' we'l never remember no bitch is gonna find you attractive, even ya lover lie i mean the way your such a down and out, ya girl does it to every other guy ya ideas are pathetic, its crazy how dark they've got ya career now is so still n ineffective it came with its own disabled parking spot every concept is forced, the type to make the site view n plea ya fake flips'll get hit w/ so many aggressive counters, it'd explain why wrestlers join UFC ive not cared recently, but now im around to win ive been saving this battle for a rainy day, just 2 find a puddle to drown you in i grab 2 broke girls in a club, but w/ nam here you'll see thats his nights end differently, he grabs 2 broke girls to watch the dvd |
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Battle is closer than I thought it would be, but looking back on my breakdown Namix had maybe 1 more bar I was feeling but also 1-2 bars more that I thought were standouts v/ Namix coo battle |
but yo, on the cupid tip - if he met my last opponent, it’d be funny son
cuz on the town or in the casino, he’d be the only playa hittin on 21 and what the hell is that?i if 5-5 is his record, he has no chance if its poker, it means he got a small pair in his hand AND his pants! shake rust was to simple. no show wins the same, no meat to it. demod was not working for me. 1080p is a stretch. i'll give u a 21 assuming it's a chick i don't think so though. that nameplay line was a reaaach. nah @ powerpad match. closer was kind of corny but okay. vs apprentely u was decent, but now you've spat in every fans face cause when i say namibia poor excuse, its not a opinion of the african place ya ideas are pathetic, its crazy how dark they've got ya career now is so still n ineffective it came with its own disabled parking spot ive not cared recently, but now im around to win ive been saving this battle for a rainy day, just 2 find a puddle to drown you in i grab 2 broke girls in a club, but w/ nam here you'll see thats his nights end differently, he grabs 2 broke girls to watch the dvd trainer on train was a reach. onedudh kung line was eh. seen down and out. parking spot okay. puddle was cool. 2 broke girls was a cool concept so i'll give u that but worded kind of poorly. v/def |
namix had no show, demodulatorand 21 was aight
defi had African place and drown u in was aight but generic this was close but namix squeezes by |
21
Vs. Fake flips Maybe being a little stingy with the quotes but those were the only stand outs for me. The 21 line was lotb and compared to that the fake flips line didn't really stand up. So, I got namix here. Namix. |
21 was cool, no show was alright
Hi def and demodulator were okay but a little predictable V Nambia, fake flips, handicap was lolz Felt like this was pretty close, but I thought what I quoted from defiant hit harder than namix's. Cool battle guys, gotta edge it to def tho V/ defiant |
21, no show
vs. fake flips, handicap Not generous on quotes. Could have quoted one or two more from both. I liked what Def dropped here, it had an effortless feel that I usually get from nam. Nam could have made this drop worlds better wit just a few tweaks here n there. Def also could have worded some of his punches differently for the full effect. Close one here, but I like Nam's 2 a tad better than Def's 2, so I'll have to base it on that. v/Nam |
4-2, namix. First to 5 wins, must win by 2.
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it’s okay to look up to me – but please, close ya eyes as I’m bustin
as I shake my ass ‘n the last of my rust off from several levels above him NOTHING REALLY HERE..NICE SWAG TO IT BUT NO VENOM I can kick it solo in the dojo… um wait.. eyo admins, hold the grin thanks for putting me against the name we use to give away no-show wins SAME AS ABOVE..TOO SIMPLE if not I’ve got a demodulator, built to expose a bitch when its spotted; ‘n GOWs gotta demodulator, built on the idea ya shouldn’t be modded! THIS WAS NICE TO ME when kids see vs. me, some do a 360, others flip gracefully but the second that I said I said Hi Def, this kid did a damn 1080p CLEVER BUT I DIDNT REALLY LIKE IT IF IM HONEST..POINTS FOR CREATIVITY THO but yo, on the cupid tip - if he met my last opponent, it’d be funny son cuz on the town or in the casino, he’d be the only playa hittin on 21 DIDNT REALLY LIKE THIS ONE BUD this kid was even named after a night I took his mom backwards in bed ya’ll want nameplay? put Defiant in a mirror ‘n reflect on the t-n-a i feD COOL AND CREATIVE..ON SOME ARSONAL OR DNA SHIT HAHA the hour is neigh, hop off that high horse and on down to my sack or be on the ground, hands down -like a throwback powerpad match! SIMPLE HERE and what the hell is that?i if 5-5 is his record, he has no chance if its poker, it means he got a small pair in his hand AND his pants! ;) NOT FEELING THIS BUD these kids your meant to be teaching are wack, but u cant deny none ironic u offer a cross trainer service, but id have you tied to tracks and ran over by one U SHOULDA USED CROSS TRAIN AS THE REFERENCE & WORDED IT AROUND THAT. CROSS TRAINER IS JUST TOO MUCH OF A REACH FOR THE CONCEPT TO WORK apprentely u was decent, but now you've spat in every fans face cause when i say namibia poor excuse, its not a opinion of the african place DOESNT WORK CUZ IF YA SHORTENED HIS NAME YOU'D SAY NAM NOT NAMI heard the old names but never u, so now im colder than december that even w/ a 'kungfugrip' we dont 'oneduh' why your a 'username' we'l never remember NOTHING HERE REALLY. I SEE WHAT U DONE BUT NO STING TO IT no bitch is gonna find you attractive, even ya lover lie i mean the way your such a down and out, ya girl does it to every other guy THIS WAS A COOL FLIP ya ideas are pathetic, its crazy how dark they've got ya career now is so still n ineffective it came with its own disabled parking spot REACHING WITH THE CONCEPT AGAIN every concept is forced, the type to make the site view n plea ya fake flips'll get hit w/ so many aggressive counters, it'd explain why wrestlers join UFC THIS WAS AN OK UFC LINE ive not cared recently, but now im around to win ive been saving this battle for a rainy day, just 2 find a puddle to drown you in OKAY I GUESS i grab 2 broke girls in a club, but w/ nam here you'll see thats his nights end differently, he grabs 2 broke girls to watch the dvd ITS NOT DOPE TO GRAB TWO BROKE GIRLS ANYWAY, COULDA SET IT UP BETTER OVERALL NAMIX DIDNT REALLY TRY THIS WEEK..NOT UP TO HIS STANDARDS SOME OF THE PUNCHES LACKED ANY GUSTO..DEFIANT YOU NEEDS TO WORK ON YOUR SET UPS THEY'RE LAZY AND THE RHYMING CAN THROW ME OFF ALSO..SOME GOOD IDEAS BUT THE SET UPS BEING REIGNED IN A LITTLE MORE COULD HELP YOU IMPROVE IMO..PRETTY CLOSE HERE BUT I GOT DEFIANT CUZ HIS IDEAS WERE BETTER |
I must be the only one who thought the demodulator line was fire. All in all tho I feel like Def's ideas didn't get executed properly enough to have the more effective verse. This was still a cool ass battle. Def's down & out line was nice.. but nam had the modulator line which was lotb to me, iono why.. just how it came off. The mirror line was also on another level. Def was cool here tho, but namix took it off creativity & consistency. I can elaborate on my vote more if need be. Props guys.
Vote- namix |
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