SHADOW BOXING rnd1 Swerve vs Tettris - TET WINS
 

Shadow Boxing



Swerve

You battled Hush, Cronus and Lefty, that’s a feat to finish,
You’re practically a hall of famer…with all the verses that beat you in it.
You think your girl love you and you’re the only man that can tap,
But on the low she getting more pipe than the flappy birds app.
Thinking he’s got a shot against the champ, the man is insane,
Tettris failed to reach the top so many times, he probably mastered the game.
I clear my throat before I make demands, a high roller that’ll kill hostages,
You clear your throat by pushing ya tonsils aside while your boyfriend fucks your esophagus.
Any hype you EVER had was from dr, that shit doesn’t look fair to me,
Fact is Tetrode all the vets for so long it looked like military shock therapy.
Get money on this battle and the cash’ll be gone ‘fore I hit ya,
Everything you put up would disappear so fast, you’ll feel like Witty and Strikta.




Tettris


Since I’ve been gone…

I saw a glimpse into his social life n thought it was grim
This insecure bitch tried to buy the site cuz no one ever bought into him
Plus Winter Warz bombed so heed what I’m bout to share
Failure’s the first Step to success…n u need to be fitted for a powerchair
Fuck outta here. Truthfully, u ain’t even worth mentionin
Cuz to keep it 100…u couldn’t get a tourney started giving away a Benjamin
N what’s up with ur pic? Wonder why I’m clowning u chump?
I got a Hunchback in school u were a loser…and never got outta the Slump
Pimple faced punk. You knew I’d be shining and, dude…
I’m throwing shade til your crater face resembles the dark side of the moon
Comparing wits? Ur a fairy bitch that wants a bromance
This is Shadow Boxing (i.e. an albino, scared of his, has absolutely no chance)

[QUOTE=Hush;273631]Shadow Boxing

Lol gay ass name.


Swerve

Faggit^^

You battled Hush, Cronus and Lefty, that’s a feat to finish,
You’re practically a hall of famer…with all the verses that beat you in it.

Wording is awkward to me.... concept feels dated....personal is....personal lol

You think your girl love you and you’re the only man that can tap,
But on the low she getting more pipe than the flappy birds app.

This was played when mario came out....ask diode....this app is a mario rip off

Thinking he’s got a shot against the champ, the man is insane,
Tettris failed to reach the top so many times, he probably mastered the game.

This is ok....kind of a unique play on his name...tho im sure hes seen it to adnauseum(sp)

I clear my throat before I make demands, a high roller that’ll kill hostages,
You clear your throat by pushing ya tonsils aside while your boyfriend fucks your esophagus.

Not funny.... clear ur throat is an ok concept i guess...meh

Any hype you EVER had was from dr, that shit doesn’t look fair to me,
Fact is Tetrode all the vets for so long it looked like military shock therapy.

Never heard of a tetrode....guess its military shock therapy? Lol....seems obscure

Get money on this battle and the cash’ll be gone ‘fore I hit ya,
Everything you put up would disappear so fast, you’ll feel like Witty and Strikta.

Blegh. I kno....their posts disapeared.... that shits boring tho.




Tettris




Since I’ve been gone…

Like a few months....settle down guy.

I saw a glimpse into his social life n thought it was grim
This insecure bitch tried to buy the site cuz no one ever bought into him

Did he? ..... i think he may have offered....this is so so concept wise tho

Plus Winter Warz bombed so heed what I’m bout to share
Failure’s the first Step to success…n u need to be fitted for a powerchair

Ok....dont like powerchair....but concept is good

Fuck outta here. Truthfully, u ain’t even worth mentionin
Cuz to keep it 100…u couldn’t get a tourney started giving away a Benjamin

Nice.

N what’s up with ur pic? Wonder why I’m clowning u chump?
I got a Hunchback in school u were a loser…and never got outta the Slump

Hunchback lines r played as fuck. This was worded clean tho an he is a lumpy back goon


Pimple faced punk. You knew I’d be shining and, dude…
I’m throwing shade til your crater face resembles the dark side of the moon

Nah. Swervs got that facial genetics of a porcelain god. Word association is played too.

Comparing wits? Ur a fairy bitch that wants a bromance
This is Shadow Boxing (i.e. an albino, scared of his, has absolutely no chance)

Lame.


This is tuff. I read it back a few times..... tett started out strong but then tapered off....i didnt like his last few bars much at all..... swerve was hot an cold.....all in all i had swerve with less misses and the misses he did have didnt miss as bad as some that tett had....


V swerve

Hi...

You battled Hush, Cronus and Lefty, that’s a feat to finish,
You’re practically a hall of famer…with all the verses that beat you in it.
I clear my throat before I make demands, a high roller that’ll kill hostages,
You clear your throat by pushing ya tonsils aside while your boyfriend fucks your esophagus.
Any hype you EVER had was from dr, that shit doesn’t look fair to me,
Fact is Tetrode all the vets for so long it looked like military shock therapy.

The opener was is played but I like the way u worded it...
I honestly have a Strikta post line already so now I have to change it...
I used a flappy bird line last week but yours was decent...
Not a bad verse...

I saw a glimpse into his social life n thought it was grim
This insecure bitch tried to buy the site cuz no one ever bought into him
Plus Winter Warz bombed so heed what I’m bout to share
Failure’s the first Step to success…n u need to be fitted for a powerchair
Fuck outta here. Truthfully, u ain’t even worth mentionin
Cuz to keep it 100…u couldn’t get a tourney started giving away a Benjamin
N what’s up with ur pic? Wonder why I’m clowning u chump?
I got a Hunchback in school u were a loser…and never got outta the Slump
Pimple faced punk. You knew I’d be shining and, dude…
I’m throwing shade til your crater face resembles the dark side of the moon

solid verse but I wasn't feeling your closer...
personals were on point...

I think Tettris was a bit more consistent here...

vote- Tettris...

Bye...

Swerve had the opener and the shock therapy but felt some played stuff in there specially the tettris top line

Tett had the 100 which was dope and the hunchback hit as a personal, I felt ur verse was a bit more creative

I got Tettris in a close one

Opener, shock therapy, closer


Vs


Opener, step to success, 100


V/ swerve, this was a closer one both had some nice bars an some played to tbh.
I think swerves qouted hit harder an his non were a lilt better than tett but Tett
Opener was dope. This real close could go either way tbh. Props on the battle yahll.

Shock therapy

Vs

100 and the Hunchback

V/Tettris - felt his punches landed more consist. And effectively. Flappy bird pun killed it for me, tbh after reading that concept for the 4th time this week. And just read it like 3 days ago from some medoicre dude on R B, lol.

This was a great fucking battle, so props to both of you.
I was feeling a lot of these punches. I'd say for me, swerve just had a couple more misses, maybe some just over my head. but, hard as it is to pick a winner, I'm gonna have to roll w/ tet here.

v/tettris

You battled Hush, Cronus and Lefty, that’s a feat to finish,
You’re practically a hall of famer…with all the verses that beat you in it.
Thinking he’s got a shot against the champ, the man is insane,
Tettris failed to reach the top so many times, he probably mastered the game.
Any hype you EVER had was from dr, that shit doesn’t look fair to me,
Fact is Tetrode all the vets for so long it looked like military shock therapy.

^those where nice .. the opener was fire .. I don't remember seeing that flip on his name .. and I looked up the sock therapy line .. which made it connect other then that it woulda fell flat ..

vs

I saw a glimpse into his social life n thought it was grim
This insecure bitch tried to buy the site cuz no one ever bought into him
Plus Winter Warz bombed so heed what I’m bout to share
Failure’s the first Step to success…n u need to be fitted for a powerchair
Fuck outta here. Truthfully, u ain’t even worth mentionin
Cuz to keep it 100…u couldn’t get a tourney started giving away a Benjamin
N what’s up with ur pic? Wonder why I’m clowning u chump?
I got a Hunchback in school u were a loser…and never got outta the Slump
Comparing wits? Ur a fairy bitch that wants a bromance
This is Shadow Boxing (i.e. an albino, scared of his, has absolutely no chance)

^that last bar is all I need to say ...




Vote Tett welcome back ..

good shit swervy swerve

You as well, Tett.

Stupid RB losers coming up with lines before me. I feel dirty.

You battled Hush, Cronus and Lefty, that’s a feat to finish,
You’re practically a hall of famer…with all the verses that beat you in it.
seen it waaay too many times, setup was relevant.
You think your girl love you and you’re the only man that can tap,
But on the low she getting more pipe than the flappy birds app.
nice attempt, just mario kinda played it out forever ago
Thinking he’s got a shot against the champ, the man is insane,
Tettris failed to reach the top so many times, he probably mastered the game.
decent angle on the nameplay.. tett mighta seen it before but i haven't
I clear my throat before I make demands, a high roller that’ll kill hostages,
You clear your throat by pushing ya tonsils aside while your boyfriend fucks your esophagus.
while the punch had some potential in it, i'm struggling to get over the rhyme, isn't it pronounced a-soph-o-gus also?
Any hype you EVER had was from dr, that shit doesn’t look fair to me,
Fact is Tetrode all the vets for so long it looked like military shock therapy.
i see what you tried to do, it's a bit obscure to have any sort of big impact.. but not bad
Get money on this battle and the cash’ll be gone ‘fore I hit ya,
Everything you put up would disappear so fast, you’ll feel like Witty and Strikta.
didn't enjoy the rhyme, setup felt a tad forced. punch was too straight forwards

i liked that you tried to go fresh with the flappy birds it just didn't pull through, a few highlights in your verse, some really creative parts and it was well written for the most part. enjoyed the read but i have seen better from you

vs

Since I’ve been gone…
I saw a glimpse into his social life n thought it was grim
This insecure bitch tried to buy the site cuz no one ever bought into him
nice try at the personal touch on the flip, it's been done a few times though
Plus Winter Warz bombed so heed what I’m bout to share
Failure’s the first Step to success…n u need to be fitted for a powerchair
real relevance in the setup, good personal flip on the concept and well worded
Fuck outta here. Truthfully, u ain’t even worth mentionin
Cuz to keep it 100…u couldn’t get a tourney started giving away a Benjamin
building up a momentum here, strong personal bar
N what’s up with ur pic? Wonder why I’m clowning u chump?
I got a Hunchback in school u were a loser…and never got outta the Slump
haha, i've seen it once or twice but fresh flip worded well
Pimple faced punk. You knew I’d be shining and, dude…
I’m throwing shade til your crater face resembles the dark side of the moon
naa, the setup felt forced and the punch was too obvious
Comparing wits? Ur a fairy bitch that wants a bromance
This is Shadow Boxing (i.e. an albino, scared of his, has absolutely no chance)
good closer, setup built the flow and gave the punch more impact, nice shit

started slow but had a strong section in the middle and closed it off really well.. kept it personally direct throughout, wording was strong mostly.. still a little rusty on a few lines. but i think it was verse i enjoyed most, more clowning and some real creative angles.

v/tett

Thinking he’s got a shot against the champ, the man is insane,
Tettris failed to reach the top so many times, he probably mastered the game.
I clear my throat before I make demands, a high roller that’ll kill hostages,
You clear your throat by pushing ya tonsils aside while your boyfriend fucks your esophagus.
Any hype you EVER had was from dr, that shit doesn’t look fair to me,
Fact is Tetrode all the vets for so long it looked like military shock therapy.

vs

I saw a glimpse into his social life n thought it was grim
This insecure bitch tried to buy the site cuz no one ever bought into him
Plus Winter Warz bombed so heed what I’m bout to share
Failure’s the first Step to success…n u need to be fitted for a powerchair
N what’s up with ur pic? Wonder why I’m clowning u chump?
I got a Hunchback in school u were a loser…and never got outta the Slump
Comparing wits? Ur a fairy bitch that wants a bromance
This is Shadow Boxing (i.e. an albino, scared of his, has absolutely no chance)

this battle was dope, all in all tett was more consistent and his quotables also hit harder then swerves. hunchback was lotb imo with shadow boxing right behind it.. his non quotables had more impact as well. swerve had some semi played ish and had a couple bars that just didn't connect as hard as tetts did so for that i'm giving the lean to tettris by +1 in quotables and his non quotes having more impact. again dope battle, was a good read.

Swerve- opener was good. Top of the game was cool. Esophagus was lol.

Tettris-keep it 100 and hunchback lines were good. Wasn't really feeling the rest. I mean if its not a pic battle and you start going on about the way the guy looks the whole verse I feel like its a little bit of a cheap shot...that being said the crater face line was aight.

I feel like swerve came harder here...more punches that hit for me

Vote-swerve.

Good shit guys.

You battled Hush, Cronus and Lefty, that’s a feat to finish,
You’re practically a hall of famer…with all the verses that beat you in it.
[nothing too witty here. straightforward. somewhat harsh i suppose]
You think your girl love you and you’re the only man that can tap,
But on the low she getting more pipe than the flappy birds app.
[nah bad bar. shuda said sumtn like i keep tapping & she hits the pipe. idk. im full of shit]
Thinking he’s got a shot against the champ, the man is insane,
Tettris failed to reach the top so many times, he probably mastered the game.
[this was a fresh nameplay on someone who's always getting tettris flips. gooood]
I clear my throat before I make demands, a high roller that’ll kill hostages,
You clear your throat by pushing ya tonsils aside while your boyfriend fucks your esophagus.
[nah this was very RBish man. too straightforward]
Any hype you EVER had was from dr, that shit doesn’t look fair to me,
Fact is Tetrode all the vets for so long it looked like military shock therapy.
[this was cool. creative]
Get money on this battle and the cash’ll be gone ‘fore I hit ya,
Everything you put up would disappear so fast, you’ll feel like Witty and Strikta.
[set up killed it. shuda been slicker. concept is cool just fell a tad flat man]

vs

I saw a glimpse into his social life n thought it was grim
This insecure bitch tried to buy the site cuz no one ever bought into him
[too straightforward. personal wasn't hard enuff for me]
Plus Winter Warz bombed so heed what I’m bout to share
Failure’s the first Step to success…n u need to be fitted for a powerchair
[this was slick. slick set up slick punch. slick]
Fuck outta here. Truthfully, u ain’t even worth mentionin
Cuz to keep it 100…u couldn’t get a tourney started giving away a Benjamin
[nice. personals win battles.]
N what’s up with ur pic? Wonder why I’m clowning u chump?
I got a Hunchback in school u were a loser…and never got outta the Slump
[seen too many Hunchback lines on him but the flip was cool]
Pimple faced punk. You knew I’d be shining and, dude…
I’m throwing shade til your crater face resembles the dark side of the moon
[noooo. bad]
Comparing wits? Ur a fairy bitch that wants a bromance
This is Shadow Boxing (i.e. an albino, scared of his, has absolutely no chance)
[nice wording. didn't like the concept tho]

gooood battle. nice to see ya both back. i felt like Tet went a little more personal and tied in his set ups really well. it could go either way i just felt Tet's angles a little more. well done to both. vote Tet

Thinking he’s got a shot against the champ, the man is insane,
Tettris failed to reach the top so many times, he probably mastered the game.
Any hype you EVER had was from dr, that shit doesn’t look fair to me,
Fact is Tetrode all the vets for so long it looked like military shock therapy.
Get money on this battle and the cash’ll be gone ‘fore I hit ya,
Everything you put up would disappear so fast, you’ll feel like Witty and Strikta.

Vs.

Failure’s the first Step to success…n u need to be fitted for a powerchair
Fuck outta here. Truthfully, u ain’t even worth mentionin
Cuz to keep it 100…u couldn’t get a tourney started giving away a Benjamin
Pimple faced punk. You knew I’d be shining and, dude…
I’m throwing shade til your crater face resembles the dark side of the moon
Comparing wits? Ur a fairy bitch that wants a bromance
This is Shadow Boxing (i.e. an albino, scared of his, has absolutely no chance)


Close but I got Tett by 1 and an overall better structured and consistent verse, dope shit guys.

Vote- tettris

You battled Hush, Cronus and Lefty, that’s a feat to finish,
You’re practically a hall of famer…with all the verses that beat you in it.
I liked this
You think your girl love you and you’re the only man that can tap,
But on the low she getting more pipe than the flappy birds app.
No
Thinking he’s got a shot against the champ, the man is insane,
Tettris failed to reach the top so many times, he probably mastered the game.
Cool
I clear my throat before I make demands, a high roller that’ll kill hostages,
You clear your throat by pushing ya tonsils aside while your boyfriend fucks your esophagus.
kinda simple but still lold tbh
Any hype you EVER had was from dr, that shit doesn’t look fair to me,
Fact is Tetrode all the vets for so long it looked like military shock therapy.
Cool
Get money on this battle and the cash’ll be gone ‘fore I hit ya,
Everything you put up would disappear so fast, you’ll feel like Witty and Strikta.
Cool idea but it didn't hit hard imo

vs

I saw a glimpse into his social life n thought it was grim
This insecure bitch tried to buy the site cuz no one ever bought into him
Did swerve try to buy the site? I don't know if that's true....if it is, this was cool
Plus Winter Warz bombed so heed what I’m bout to share
Failure’s the first Step to success…n u need to be fitted for a powerchair
lol
Fuck outta here. Truthfully, u ain’t even worth mentionin
Cuz to keep it 100…u couldn’t get a tourney started giving away a Benjamin
Nice and also true lol
N what’s up with ur pic? Wonder why I’m clowning u chump?
I got a Hunchback in school u were a loser…and never got outta the Slump
Cool wordplay, played concept tho
Pimple faced punk. You knew I’d be shining and, dude…
I’m throwing shade til your crater face resembles the dark side of the moon
ehhh, not feeling it
Comparing wits? Ur a fairy bitch that wants a bromance
This is Shadow Boxing (i.e. an albino, scared of his, has absolutely no chance)
Nice wording, decent punch

This was a kinda on/off battle, both had some cool lines and both had lines that just should never have been written. I think both had 2 real quoteables, Swerve's first and the tetrode line were his best imo Tettris had the power chair line and the keeping it 100 line which I think was lotd so I'm gonna give it to him - vote Tettris.

Tettris- 10
Swerve- 3


I'll vote soon
@Tettris @Swerve


Salute

Thinking he’s got a shot against the champ, the man is insane,
Tettris failed to reach the top so many times, he probably mastered the game.
I clear my throat before I make demands, a high roller that’ll kill hostages,
You clear your throat by pushing ya tonsils aside while your boyfriend fucks your esophagus.
Any hype you EVER had was from dr, that shit doesn’t look fair to me,
Fact is Tetrode all the vets for so long it looked like military shock therapy.

vs

Fuck outta here. Truthfully, u ain’t even worth mentionin
Cuz to keep it 100…u couldn’t get a tourney started giving away a Benjamin
N what’s up with ur pic? Wonder why I’m clowning u chump?
I got a Hunchback in school u were a loser…and never got outta the Slump
Comparing wits? Ur a fairy bitch that wants a bromance
This is Shadow Boxing (i.e. an albino, scared of his, has absolutely no chance)

this was kind of a toss up to be real close in quoteables, misses & hits.. but I'd slightly edge it to.. Swerve

V/Tet...

11-4 Tettris wins