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Kiki 02-09-2014 01:22 AM

The Worst
 
THE WORST
I'd never thought I'd fall so hard, till I hit the pavement bike bones and got scarred
Till that pulsing organ slowly pried apart other fish in the sea but I'm swimming with sharks
Other places to be but I'm still in ya palm willingly cuz you know what to do with that tongue
I mean the perfect picture of us got washed away in a salty sea of tears
I keep paddlin' hopin' land is near..
While I'm straddlin' ya hips, moanin' bittin' at ya lips I question is it true love or lust
Till everything I question is slowly being forgotten gettin' distracted as you go deeper with each thrust
This is the worst type of love this whole thing is over I need you to understand
I love you and sick of bullshit, I got the disease and vaccine in the same hand


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=npB9gNLC2_g

Idk why I'm on this love song fever but I'm just gonna keep writing till in sick of it I guess lol I might add more to this since it's just one short verse. tell me what you think about my vocab or structure it probly sounds better spoken but fuck it...

Kiki 02-09-2014 01:23 AM

Starts at 22 sec for those who want to know


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