Allen Knight vs Pyro - ALLEN WINS
 

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you must be on that ego medicine so your dreams sweet?
he ain't a vet, I thought i was gonna vers-a-'tile' but this was a 'clean sweep'
Allen's known for having the heat, throwing verses lacking defeat
you have all them 'titles' and still haven't dropped a 'classic release'
ya flatulence peak with faggots you traveling meak, Check'em
you breed best with open 'Scars' so ain't no need to infect shun.
I do question if he's good here, all them battles and you had a Good year?
All i see is people 'Kickin Allen' around like 'Edmond's Footwear'
So when he say he's nice, I'm like iight bruh, you saving'em half the crap
Then i Jump Ship & snuff'em but this ain't no Alien Acrobats!

Ur a cross dressing homo thug, cock ur bound to lick
Plenty of dudes seen this fag python right before he wraps his mouth around there dick
I murda niggas in battles faggot, ill rip off ur jaw u scrub
Only thing pyrex is the container i put his body in from leaking out all his blood
Got goons to handle my beef, Ill get this sucker bitch touched
Id beat u to death row but knight rather pay someone to shoot u & cover it up
Spraying a mattic at yah faggot crew, straight up trashing dude
Till the bullets rip Jude'n die like a german firing squad lining up & blasting jews
Ur virgin ass neva fucked a bitch, an i leave hos torn
U wouldn't even plow out a bitch if ur own mother was stuck in a snow storm

Sorry my computer froze

ima get my links in and edit them in this post

you must be on that ego medicine so your dreams sweet?
he ain't a vet, I thought i was gonna vers-a-'tile' but this was a 'clean sweep'
- when u say u thought he was gonna verse a tile .. What does that mean ? Battle a bathroom floor? I don't get it



Allen's known for having the heat, throwing verses lacking defeat
you have all them 'titles' and still haven't dropped a 'classic release'
-/ why did u put titles and classic release inside apostrophes ? That shit make no sense. Those words have no relation to my mind

ya flatulence peak with faggots you traveling meak, Check'em
you breed best with open 'Scars' so ain't no need to infect shun.
-/ lmao aight this is just wack . Worst setup ever. Sound like a retarded loaded lux



I do question if he's good here, all them battles and you had a Good year?
All i see is people 'Kickin Allen' around like 'Edmond's Footwear'
-/ lol no clue what u speak of


So when he say he's nice, I'm like iight bruh, you saving'em half the crap
Then i Jump Ship & snuff'em but this ain't no Alien Acrobats!
-/ hell.fucking.no

Vs



Ur a cross dressing homo thug, cock ur bound to lick
Plenty of dudes seen this fag python right before he wraps his mouth around there dick
-/wack


I murda niggas in battles faggot, ill rip off ur jaw u scrub
Only thing pyrex is the container i put his body in from leaking out all his blood
-/ could of been so dope. Good wp lazy execution



Got goons to handle my beef, Ill get this sucker bitch touched
Id beat u to death row but knight rather pay someone to shoot u & cover it up
-/ wack

Spraying a mattic at yah faggot crew, straight up trashing dude
Till the bullets rip Jude'n die like a german firing squad lining up & blasting jews
-/ u can't be this wack

Ur virgin ass neva fucked a bitch, an i leave hos torn
U wouldn't even plow out a bitch if ur own mother was stuck in a snow storm
-/ lol ok



Allen got this

you must be on that ego medicine so your dreams sweet?
he ain't a vet, I thought i was gonna vers-a-'tile' but this was a 'clean sweep'

Made no sense. Not sure the message you tried to get across here while trying to execute a play on word.

Allen's known for having the heat, throwing verses lacking defeat
you have all them 'titles' and still haven't dropped a 'classic release'

I think I can see where you TRIED to go with this. Failed to execute it properly, IMO.

ya flatulence peak with faggots you traveling meak, Check'em
you breed best with open 'Scars' so ain't no need to infect shun.

??? - This really doesn't make any sense to me.

I do question if he's good here, all them battles and you had a Good year?
All i see is people 'Kickin Allen' around like 'Edmond's Footwear'

Weird. Good year and Foot wear don't rhyme. At least not in my language.

So when he say he's nice, I'm like iight bruh, you saving'em half the crap
Then i Jump Ship & snuff'em but this ain't no Alien Acrobats!

Nah

[vs]

Ur a cross dressing homo thug, cock ur bound to lick
Plenty of dudes seen this fag python right before he wraps his mouth around there dick

Nah, forced, IMO. Unless I'm reading this incorrectly.

I murda niggas in battles faggot, ill rip off ur jaw u scrub
Only thing pyrex is the container i put his body in from leaking out all his blood

Think you could have went in a different direction with the Pyrex play/concept. Didn't like the execution.

Got goons to handle my beef, Ill get this sucker bitch touched
Id beat u to death row but knight rather pay someone to shoot u & cover it up

Eh, weird, IMO. Think you could have worked with this concept a little more.

Spraying a mattic at yah faggot crew, straight up trashing dude
Till the bullets rip Jude'n die like a german firing squad lining up & blasting jews

Nah

Ur virgin ass neva fucked a bitch, an i leave hos torn
U wouldn't even plow out a bitch if ur own mother was stuck in a snow storm

Ok'ish

Overall: Allen takes this. I'm not sure what the other guy was trying to do with a lot of his attempts to play of words but seemed forced. That verse-a-tile concept was there but how you executed it made no sense to me at all. I get the verse a tile - tile - clean sweep but how you worded it came off forced as all hell because it made no sense. Allen, just seems you rushed a quick key and put up the bare minimum in which you felt would do for the W. Well, it worked.

MVGT: Allen

Pyro verse was full of forced concepts that lead to punchlines that didnt make any sense. The only bar that made any sense was that allen edmonds shit.....an it was mediocre. Allen verse sucked too lol dudes name is 4 letters long an u had to cut it in half to do name plays? Wack. Allens closer was dope tho.... an his verse was still on a different skillset then pyros easily.


V allen.

you must be on that ego medicine so your dreams sweet?
he ain't a vet, I thought i was gonna vers-a-'tile' but this was a 'clean sweep'
I see the attempt, it felt a bit off on the wording though. lacked sting.
Allen's known for having the heat, throwing verses lacking defeat
you have all them 'titles' and still haven't dropped a 'classic release'
once again i see where u were goin with this, wasn't hitting that hard
ya flatulence peak with faggots you traveling meak, Check'em
you breed best with open 'Scars' so ain't no need to infect shun.
lol were u trying to say he has a pussy? made me giggle a bit.
I do question if he's good here, all them battles and you had a Good year?
All i see is people 'Kickin Allen' around like 'Edmond's Footwear'
best bar so far
So when he say he's nice, I'm like iight bruh, you saving'em half the crap
Then i Jump Ship & snuff'em but this ain't no Alien Acrobats!
good punchline but not quite that effective towards ur opponent.

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Ur a cross dressing homo thug, cock ur bound to lick
Plenty of dudes seen this fag python right before he wraps his mouth around there dick
i must be missing something here.
I murda niggas in battles faggot, ill rip off ur jaw u scrub
Only thing pyrex is the container i put his body in from leaking out all his blood
cool this was nice, feeling it.
Got goons to handle my beef, Ill get this sucker bitch touched
Id beat u to death row but knight rather pay someone to shoot u & cover it up
okish, could of been worded better imo.
Spraying a mattic at yah faggot crew, straight up trashing dude
Till the bullets rip Jude'n die like a german firing squad lining up & blasting jews
nicee.
Ur virgin ass neva fucked a bitch, an i leave hos torn
U wouldn't even plow out a bitch if ur own mother was stuck in a snow storm
heh, nothing crazy here. good joke tho.


vote:Overall i'd go with allen on this one. Pyro, i'm feeling your writing style/lyrics as a whole, they just didn't effective your opponent that much. your concepts could of been more personal/harsher. on the other hand, allen had a couple of quoteables that were very effective. I'd give this to allen, but not as much as i expected. Good show, both of you.

mvgt:Allen Knight

@Pyro I added an extra loss to your account, I'll take it off if you provide 2 links