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Sharp Nine vs. Flo Real {Sharp Nine wins}
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Your lines so overused they on every Site - this bitch *is a tart
right click n view source an you'll see thousands of lines - yup you will see sharp(c#) nine why lie you know im the sharpest tool in this box* your round... heavy... look like your face has been smashed of some rocks Your flows ridiculous, the stupid bitch! e doesnt have a clue! only time youll be mentioned next to flow- is after flo gets a w when this battles through when you 'c(see) sharp nine' you think hes somethin 'major' but you 'c(see) sharp' prefers the 'minor' and ironically its minors that he endangers* Sharp knows I 'preciated his feedback,wasn't a lie *it was a subtle surprise suppose its true when they say 'The worst men often give the best of advice' (c# whatever you may think half this site is wrote in it - it's a programming language.* C sharp 9 minor and major are chords I recently gave him a shout out for some feedback in his votes) |
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Son's outmatched, he should be scared With concepts, I got an overflow - so the votes'll put me there Philly boy? BS, n that expo aint close this L gettin you pity Reviews'll show Flo lost so bad you'd think he got dropped off in Center City His days are numbered, we wont have this cat stick I mean, we could all see Flo's ass way before he uploaded that pic You lost to CB in UW? I'm bout to wreck him - my gall's known But you had such a hard time with Camp I was thought you needed to call home his best is still shit, fact is this a known fake Even if flomax out, he wouldnt come close to reaching that pro state |
Sharp
His days are numbered, we wont have this cat stick I mean, we could all see Flo's ass way before he uploaded that pic [Smooth, nothing to major] You lost to CB in UW? I'm bout to wreck him - my gall's known But you had such a hard time with Camp I was thought you needed to call home [Funny nice personals goin on] his best is still shit, fact is this a known fake Even if flomax out, he wouldnt come close to reaching that pro state [Clever, and worded to make it read smoothly] vs Flo Real Your lines so overused they on every Site - this bitch *is a tart right click n view source an you'll see thousands of lines - yup you will see sharp(c#) [Could've been worded way better, still clever mate] Your flows ridiculous, the stupid bitch! e doesnt have a clue! only time youll be mentioned next to flow- is after flo gets a w when this battles through [Better cool hit, pretty smooth] when you 'c(see) sharp nine' you think hes somethin 'major' but you 'c(see) sharp' prefers the 'minor' and ironically its minors that he endangers* [feel like ur cramming/ trying a lil too hard to make it work flow is off] Sharp knows I 'preciated his feedback,wasn't a lie *it was a subtle surprise suppose its true when they say 'The worst men often give the best of advice' [Cool, could've been worded better but i see the angle ur taking u do have nice concepts just ur wording is what holds them back from bein as lethal as they should've been] MVG2 - Sharp nine..he had better wording & more lands for me used his personals well to craft his punch |
when you 'c(see) sharp nine' you think hes somethin 'major'
but you 'c(see) sharp' prefers the 'minor' and ironically its minors that he endangers* Could've been better, expos hurt the punch. vs. You lost to CB in UW? I'm bout to wreck him - my gall's known But you had such a hard time with Camp I was thought you needed to call home his best is still shit, fact is this a known fake Even if flomax out, he wouldnt come close to reaching that pro state Sharp took this pretty easily. I think the LOTB was the flomax line. I think he had better non quoteables as well. V/SHarp Nine |
Your lines so overused they on every Site - this bitch *is a tart
right click n view source an you'll see thousands of lines - yup you will see sharp(c#) Kinda clever I guess, but not very hard hitting...explanations aren't necessary nine why lie you know im the sharpest tool in this box* your round... heavy... look like your face has been smashed of some rocks Nah Your flows ridiculous, the stupid bitch! e doesnt have a clue! only time youll be mentioned next to flow- is after flo gets a w when this battles through ehhh when you 'c(see) sharp nine' you think hes somethin 'major' but you 'c(see) sharp' prefers the 'minor' and ironically its minors that he endangers* Decent, wording could have been better, again..don't explain ur punches Sharp knows I 'preciated his feedback,wasn't a lie *it was a subtle surprise suppose its true when they say 'The worst men often give the best of advice' Wasn't feeling it vs Son's outmatched, he should be scared With concepts, I got an overflow - so the votes'll put me there cool np, not very hard though Philly boy? BS, n that expo aint close this L gettin you pity Reviews'll show Flo lost so bad you'd think he got dropped off in Center City didn't get it :( His days are numbered, we wont have this cat stick I mean, we could all see Flo's ass way before he uploaded that pic lol'd You lost to CB in UW? I'm bout to wreck him - my gall's known But you had such a hard time with Camp I was thought you needed to call home lol'd again, nice punch his best is still shit, fact is this a known fake Even if flomax out, he wouldnt come close to reaching that pro state dope Flo can drop a lot better than this, I think the explanations definitely weren't needed, he had some pretty cool ideas but the execution just wasn't there a lot of the time. Sharp came cool, he said he keyed it and I could tell cuz he can drop better too, but he did make me lol a couple of times, the camp line was lotb for me, closer was cool too. Vote - Sharp Nine |
when you 'c(see) sharp nine' you think hes somethin 'major'
but you 'c(see) sharp' prefers the 'minor' and ironically its minors that he endangers* this^ had an idea but execution is off , overall, explanations are for noobs and you need work on your flow (pun intended) vs. You lost to CB in UW? I'm bout to wreck him - my gall's known But you had such a hard time with Camp I was thought you needed to call home his best is still shit, fact is this a known fake Even if flomax out, he wouldnt come close to reaching that pro state i saw this as an easy win for Sharp V/Sharp |
Nothing tbh, stop explaining ur punches, this is a battling league and we'll understand ur wp and shi,t so the expos and references were pointless and noobish as fuck. Da see sharp np coulda been flipped better and i thought da concept was clever, keep coming with stuffs like that and word them to make em hit directly w/out them expos
vs opener(simple np but okay, coulda been harsher) the pic personal and camp line were also cool, so this was a pretty one sided match and sharp wins comfortably. V/sharp |
when you 'c(see) sharp nine' you think hes somethin 'major'
but you 'c(see) sharp' prefers the 'minor' and ironically its minors that he endangers* vs Son's outmatched, he should be scared With concepts, I got an overflow - so the votes'll put me there You lost to CB in UW? I'm bout to wreck him - my gall's known But you had such a hard time with Camp I was thought you needed to call home his best is still shit, fact is this a known fake Even if flomax out, he wouldnt come close to reaching that pro state I felt like Flo just went for a lot of c sharp wordplays and really only one of his lines hit remotely, overall i thought most of it lacked or jsut executed better in some cases. Sharp came nice with some good concepts and exceptional execution..got him taking this v/ Sharp Nine |
when you 'c(see) sharp nine' you think hes somethin 'major'
but you 'c(see) sharp' prefers the 'minor' and ironically its minors that he endangers vs You lost to CB in UW? I'm bout to wreck him - my gall's known But you had such a hard time with Camp I was thought you needed to call home his best is still shit, fact is this a known fake Even if flomax out, he wouldnt come close to reaching that pro state flo real needs to work on making concepts more clear (and dont make them if they too complex), less expo better wording. the expo overall ruined the verse. endanger line concept was decent but it waasnt pulled off like it should have been. sharp came up pretty solid here with basic stuff. flomax out and camp line was enough to win this battle. this is one sidded battle so i'll go for sharp nine. keep writing fellas |
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