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StarFaggot 01-11-2014 02:19 PM

To Conquer Open Mic
 
The text battling scene is dying here. Mostly just no shows or key styled verses. Great thing about open mic is you don't have to battle anyone.

My thing is this, how can I become a good Open Mic writer of all time? How do you guys write a piece if there's no punchlines?

What is considered good? Do I need imagery, alliteration any other poetic things metaphors etc.

Can I get by with a decent vocab?


Any suggestions would be helpful. I expect OTG to pitch in as well.

StarFaggot 01-11-2014 02:21 PM

Lavender bubbles was a funny punchlines and was well received.

dull boy 01-11-2014 02:23 PM

Lol @ how do you write if there's no punchlines

StarFaggot 01-11-2014 02:23 PM

@Witty please give me one bit of advice

Witty 01-11-2014 02:23 PM

Definitely use vortex as much as possible.

StarFaggot 01-11-2014 02:25 PM

Nah man, I need honest advice on writing

CtrlF4 01-11-2014 02:26 PM

I think you need your girlfriend back.

Witty 01-11-2014 02:26 PM

I dunno....be really good at writing and the things you write will be really good.

The Rape 01-11-2014 02:27 PM

Has any one seen @Natural?

I wanted to give him this thank you card

StarFaggot 01-11-2014 02:28 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by CtrlF4 (Post 248221)
I think you need your girlfriend back.

You might be right. Maybe I'll write a piece on that.

oats 01-11-2014 02:40 PM

the trick to being good at writing, I've found, is....



....writing a lot. just read other people, write your own shit, and it'll steadily improve. I've written way more wack - mediocre shit than I have mediocre - dope shit, just gotta keep writing and it'll come.

uh-oh 01-11-2014 02:42 PM

just be dope

i could never write punchlines so i dont have this problem

just say dope shit and make sure it flows and rhymes dope

Split 01-11-2014 02:48 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by uh-oh (Post 248242)
just be dope

i could never write punchlines so i dont have this problem

just say dope shit and make sure it flows and rhymes dope


StarFaggot 01-11-2014 02:50 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by oats (Post 248239)
the trick to being good at writing, I've found, is....



....writing a lot. just read other people, write your own shit, and it'll steadily improve. I've written way more wack - mediocre shit than I have mediocre - dope shit, just gotta keep writing and it'll come.

Makes a lot of common sense. I'm going to get on it.

What uh oh said is true as well

Geno 01-11-2014 03:01 PM

What makes you think punchlines don't go into. Om's? I think they can work just fine sometimes.

ill nik-A 01-11-2014 03:03 PM

So u want to be the goat by being the most versatile textcee ever huh

I charge

Goat

Witty 01-11-2014 03:06 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Aero
Thanks for the great advice Witty

You're welcome bro.

StarFaggot 01-11-2014 03:10 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Genocide (Post 248252)
What makes you think punchlines don't go into. Om's? I think they can work just fine sometimes.

Don't seem to go into topic pieces. A flex verse yea

big baby 01-11-2014 03:14 PM

I would give you advice but you said I am worthless/useless.

StarFaggot 01-11-2014 03:15 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by big baby (Post 248274)
I would give you advice but you said I am worthless/useless.

Your advice would be appreciated


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