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Wise’s sig needs some major poon again. My rhymes is sick I say the flu and spit vaginas clits and labias too, it stinks. I’m rabies and croup with spits, invading ya nucleus. I came in a future ship with alien fusion kits to basically neuter kids of their anciently fruitless scripts. The faithfully ruthless kid..smashing. Amazingly stupid with rapping. How lame can you groupies get? Laughing, cause you ain’t in a movie but acting. I stay to the truest exactly, never claimed to be shooting or stabbing. But my brain’s a bazooka I’m flattering. And not with praise, in the booth I am shattering. The greatest to do this? Well actually nay, but I do it just casually. Played with the music and dabbled away. Created amusement and that was the way I came to be super. Relax, it’s okay. The latest and newest of Pat is a page of the craziest coolest paragraphical phrase. The zaniest, you just act like u cray, but baby I lose it when rappin this way

nice drop copy, i was feelin this one. Glad your in the tourney too. You're one of the main people i want to read a topical from (hopefully that's motivation) i'm betting the flows gunna be bonkers but i want to see that story telling ability. As far as this goes my favorite part was the you aint in a movie but actin lol that was nice. Keep at it bro. If u get a sec cook you peep my game of love drop. Thanks

I'm really not a big fan of these paragraph form shit. Id prefer this to be structured and presented in a way that looks clean. However pushing my preference of structure aside I gotta say for some reason I enjoyed this pretty thoroughly.
Good rhyming prowess as always....but in particular I had a much more difficult time predicting what your next rhyme would be and I like that.
It kept me drawn in to find out what you'd do next.
Stay up.

needs more rhymes. this didnt rhyme enough. lack of rhymage here brag

lol, dope shit pat. We gotta get down on another cypher soon. loved this:

I came in a future ship with alien fusion kits to basically neuter kids of their anciently fruitless scripts. The faithfully ruthless kid..smashing. Amazingly stupid with rapping. How lame can you groupies get? Laughing, cause you ain’t in a movie but acting. I stay to the truest exactly, never claimed to be shooting or stabbing. But my brain’s a bazooka I’m flattering. And not with praise, in the booth I am shattering. The greatest to do this? Well actually nay, but I do it just casually. Played with the music and dabbled away. Created amusement and that was the way I came to be super. Relax, it’s okay. The latest and newest of Pat is a page of the craziest coolest paragraphical phrase

^^fuckin' dope bro.

Scheme is sick, content is tight and as always your multies are flawless.Honestly wasn't feelin' the bar or so before what I quoted and the last line...I don't think anyone should use 'cray' in just general conversation let alone a verse lol, but yeah what I quoted which is pretty much the whole thing is fire man...great shits.

Stay upwards aye.

lol. you posted a block of butter homie. nothing bad to say about it. another classic copy flex.