Witty vs. R!canTheoryz {Witty wins by NS}
 

Rules

Due Dates:

• Verses are due Thursday,
  March 7th 2013 11:59 PM PST.
• Voting ends Sunday 11:59 PM PST.
• Battles that lack votes may close later.
• One sided battles may get closed early.
• Extensions are normally 24 hours
  (unless requested otherwise, that is),
  can be no longer than 36 hours
  and have to be granted by your opponent.

Line Limit:

• Min. = 10 lines
• Max. = 16 lines
• The max. can be higher if different is agreed upon by both.

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• Must vote on 5 battles and post your links.
• Post the links in the thread titled "Week 3 Voting Links".
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• 1st person to post can't edit after the 2nd person posts.
• 2nd person to post can't edit after a vote has been made.
• Feeding = DQ.
• Recycling = DQ.
• Biting = DQ.
• No freeposting, swaying or bitching.
• Unless a picture battle is agreed upon,
  linking to your opponent's picture or posting it
  means you will disqualified.
• Competitors should agree on a line limit in their check in.
• If no line limit is agreed on, then the 2nd person to post
  must match the 1st person's line amount.

Let's do this thanggggg

Going 10...g'luck.

Yessir 10 is good.

You one ugly muh fucka, what's wrong with ur face u tard?
Looking like ur mom got halfway thru an abortion then had a change of heart
Fucking potato head don't make no bread, this fraud be broke
After this punch he'll be a vegetable, so don't be surprised when u see RT choke
Hit a stripclub, got a dance from ur sisters, they talented bitches
So if you ever do well on a poll, its just cuz u joined the family business
I saw ur face on bags avy, when u got them rows u was playing, right?
Looking like u got em braided in prison for favors of the anal type
You get given soooo many L's, and nothing else, I swear to God son
If this was words with friends u'd be screwed, but its all good cuz u ain't got none

Witty wins by NS.

He will appreciate feed on his verse, though. And if that feed is done well enough (i.e. more than "decent verse, I liked X and Y"), it counts as a voting link.

here's how I would break it down. Enjoyable 10 lines overall

You one ugly muh fucka, what's wrong with ur face u tard?
Looking like ur mom got halfway thru an abortion then had a change of heart
^^^nah seen this concept long time ago i swear i heard it as a joke to but this wasnt flipped really well
Fucking potato head don't make no bread, this fraud be broke
After this punch he'll be a vegetable, so don't be surprised when u see RT choke
^^^lol funny but wasnt hitting really
Hit a stripclub, got a dance from ur sisters, they talented bitches
So if you ever do well on a poll, its just cuz u joined the family business
^^^cool i liked this one
I saw ur face on bags avy, when u got them rows u was playing, right?
Looking like u got em braided in prison for favors of the anal type
^^^didnt like
You get given soooo many L's, and nothing else, I swear to God son
If this was words with friends u'd be screwed, but its all good cuz u ain't got none
^^^solid closer

solid verse overall i'd say work on ur concepts try to be fresher but ur wording is good.

You one ugly muh fucka, what's wrong with ur face u tard?
Looking like ur mom got halfway thru an abortion then had a change of heart
(meh ...not the place for this perhaps in a pic battle this'll do but otherwise eh)
Fucking potato head don't make no bread, this fraud be broke
After this punch he'll be a vegetable, so don't be surprised when u see RT choke
(haha nice wordplay here artichoke)
Hit a stripclub, got a dance from ur sisters, they talented bitches
So if you ever do well on a poll, its just cuz u joined the family business
(really old line..but i thought this was a damn good flip)
I saw ur face on bags avy, when u got them rows u was playing, right?
Looking like u got em braided in prison for favors of the anal type
(haha)
You get given soooo many L's, and nothing else, I swear to God son
If this was words with friends u'd be screwed, but its all good cuz u ain't got none
(naaaaaaaah)

3 of those couplets were heaters imo

nicely done

You one ugly muh fucka, what's wrong with ur face u tard?
Looking like ur mom got halfway thru an abortion then had a change of heart
I haven't seen it myself, but it feels played
Fucking potato head don't make no bread, this fraud be broke
After this punch he'll be a vegetable, so don't be surprised when u see RT choke
Fresh np, never seen it before
Hit a stripclub, got a dance from ur sisters, they talented bitches
So if you ever do well on a poll, its just cuz u joined the family business
Decent flip on an old concept
I saw ur face on bags avy, when u got them rows u was playing, right?
Looking like u got em braided in prison for favors of the anal type
Cool
You get given soooo many L's, and nothing else, I swear to God son
If this was words with friends u'd be screwed, but its all good cuz u ain't got none
I recall seeing a words with friends punch recently, so it seems kind of played

Thought it was a pretty decent verse. Didnt have any complete misses. Some really good material in the verse. And you had pretty good wording.