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Jimmy (0-0) vs Texcellence (0-0) - JIMMY WINS
NBL Season 7 Week 7 Due Wednesday, January 8th Minimum - 10 lines Max - 16 lines Line limit can increase if both agree NO biting NO swaying NO feeding You must check in Don't edit after your opponent has posted 2nd person to post can't edit after the first vote comes in Don't be an idiot You MUST vote on 4 battles & post your links in the Voting Thread Don't use your opponent's pic unless it's a pic battle Agree on a line limit May God have mercy on your souls @Jimmy @Texcellence |
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@Jimmy - 12 lines? |
You’re trying really hard now, but why Chief?
Call it the Wild Card when my Colt 45 touchdown…on this guy’s cheek So go cry geek your style hardly is awesome In fact it’s so taxed that T’s going overboard...like a party in Boston He’s kinky as fuck but has trouble with love So if you ever get a Lay Tex, it’s probably from your favorite rubber glove I have battled the best. Left, Hush, Ill-Nik and Neigh smacked me You’re not a heavy contender; you just struggle with your weight fatty Nothing but head shots from the Cannon that I hold and clap ….That’ll remove ‘Lence cap like I’m getting ready to take a photograph @Texcellence |
That storms a trip..
A state emergence, -51, crazy, you wonder how people are coping? Just know that Jimmy's typing cold, with his bedroom window open* I'll leave your <body> in the Cloud, I'm not talking hosting pal That'll be where I leave you after I uppercut you off the ground ^ See I can include filler, heck I'll even force some punches too These shots will have your abdominal ache, more than crunches do It's odd, this J is only ever grinning when a dick is on his chin* Cos' guys looking to shed some pressure will always hit the Jim These days you'll get a vote for effort and I can't get the gist It's like winning a game of golf, for every hole that you miss So excuse me for being pissed, but the irony's exposing the fony Cos I last witnessed shots that played watching gamer on my sony You've got me explaining bars like it's 2001! * Jimmy is from New York, the current storm * J is another nickname for a Vagina |
He’s kinky as fuck but has trouble with love
So if you ever get a Lay Tex, it’s probably from your favorite rubber glove I have battled the best. Left, Hush, Ill-Nik and Neigh smacked me You’re not a heavy contender; you just struggle with your weight fatty Some bars missed the opener i get it but its gun play in text lol ... the second bar was a Boston Tea Party flip which is hella played .. the 3rd & 4th were decent nothing crazy but connected & did the job .. the closer was a miss on the name/word play ... vs These days you'll get a vote for effort and I can't get the gist It's like winning a game of golf, for every hole that you miss Lots of played bars in here Tex i see that you are shaking some rust off .. keep at it your definitely showing improvement but the misses hurt you badly .. ---------------- This battle wasnt one sided but it was an easy decision .. Vote- Jimbo |
Contender, closer
Vs Golf V/jimmy, ok one both had alot of played concepts tho...yah both got decent wording Just try to.stay current an fresh. This was pretty close but jim had one more quote. |
Both had internally delicate verses. While text had a very smooth and jabbing style, it wasn't potent. The <body> line couldve been soo better, by reading it I had about 3 things that couldve been hard hitting punches. But he just landed a slow jab. The whole rhyme was crisp. While Jimmy's was a bit erratic and over the top, it still had some elements of punch factor in them. Both verses weren't amazing, but I enjoyed jimmy's verse more, well I enjoyed both verses equally, but if I'm judging over a certain premise, then, Jimmy has the edge here.
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Jim had
Contender...glove vs Text had Pressure V/jimmy...for consistency his misses were better imo I like the pressure off bar from text just not his other lines too much honestly but jim |
You’re trying really hard now, but why Chief?
Call it the Wild Card when my Colt 45 touchdown…on this guy’s cheek I have battled the best. Left, Hush, Ill-Nik and Neigh smacked me You’re not a heavy contender; you just struggle with your weight fatty Nothing but head shots from the Cannon that I hold and clap ….That’ll remove ‘Lence cap like I’m getting ready to take a photograph vs nothing I just felt like one didn't have any hits they were okay lines but nothing that stuck imo .. v/ Jim |
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You wasn't saying much Tex. Abdominal ache was close but it ended pretty bland. |
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