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Simon SeversTons VS. Jimmy - JIMMY WINS

@Jimmy... 4 bars, due in 24 hrs, g'luck to you.

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Originally Posted by Simon SeversTons (Post 239619)

@Jimmy... 4 bars, due in 24 hrs, g'luck to you.

Go and vote on some battles.

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Originally Posted by Texcellence (Post 239698)

Go and vote on some battles.

Yeah Ima have links ready real soon on both the drops I posted.

This guy has bled and bruised, time to heal your wounds little faggot
and put more Red and Blue on ice……than the 2014 Winter Classic
you’ll need a gun to get anybody to raise their hands above their head
and they still won’t play your games because nobody gives a fuck what Simon Says
you’re bound to make the top eight in the cypher series but get it straight
it’s only because nobody wants Chyeahh to participate
so chill, you are one person I’d love to kill
because nobody will even care when you’re dead…..#Uncle Phil

I need a little extension.

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Originally Posted by Jimmy (Post 236867)

I never liked this dude but don’t get Jimmy wrong

There is something wrong with you Ryan I can’t put my Finger on it but I’ll try

I hope you burn in hell and after you die and you’re lyin’ in dirt

^ This is his setups in his battle with Ryan. YIKES.

Jims not clever at battlin'! Plus his ^ "setups were all over the place" - "Kevin McCallister"
But we dont gotta look at a "skateboard" to know that youre a "REGULAR" ...amatuer!

JESUS, youve written your lines weak... AND ALSO dont scribble more rhymes PLEASE!
So I dont mean craved frozen dessert whenever you see "Jimmy's on ice?" *SCREAM*

G'luck, Jimmy.

@Simon SeversTons vote on two battles and drop the links here please

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Originally Posted by Simon SeversTons (Post 241244)

Sorry for the delay. Caught up on something else, much focus wasnt on this.

Expos:
- Kevin McCallister is played by Macaulay Culkin in Home Alone.

At 10:50, here we go...

I present: Simon deading this mark - so fuck if this clown had wrote a rhyme for me!
Since he's "Jim?" Then Im "flexing with bars" with-out even "sculpting my physique!"

Funny how Jimmy wanna type with a hot free, but his shook type wouldnt CROSS ME!
His last battle WHEW - its like Jim has a bad knack with food, the way "Ry's wasnt salty!"
(rice/Rys=Ryan 12)

^ This is his setups in his battle with Ryan. YIKES.

Jims not clever at battlin'! Plus his ^ "setups were all over the place" - "Kevin McCallister"
But we dont gotta look at a "skateboard" to know that youre a "REGULAR" ...amatuer!

JESUS, youve written your lines weak... AND ALSO dont scribble more rhymes PLEASE!
So I dont mean craved frozen dessert whenever you see "Jimmy's on ice?" *SCREAM*

G'luck, Jimmy.

Is this a verse? It looks like the remnants of a peer-editing session from a high school introduction to poetry class.

This is my verse. I didnt go my hardest as you can tell.

vote jimmy
simon you don't need to explain bars that don't have punches in them let alone format them like we're stupid.

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Originally Posted by Art (Post 250420)

vote jimmy
simon you don't need to explain bars that don't have punches in them let alone format them like we're stupid.

Wow, indeed. Hate votes, let them continue. Obviously concepts arent shit now days.

Simon SeversTons: I don't recall reading many worse verses in my 13 years on text rap websites. Your stuff in the cypher somehow was better.

Jimmy: The opener was OK. The Simon Says line was OK enough. The last line was stupid and untrue. You did enough.

Vote: Jimmy

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Originally Posted by Simon SeversTons (Post 251014)

Wow, indeed. Hate votes, let them continue. Obviously concepts arent shit now days.

No I was saying wow at how wack u verse was faggot haha

Damnit, I suck.

Smh...