The Black Jesus Christ
 

Jesus Christ appeared in the golden flood lights; captive in joy;
basking in joy; he waved me forward; through the field of jasmine;
overjoyed - with happiness; I blushed a blasphemous, flash of the void:
I was ecstatic; I acted coy; In a trance; poised; in rags of decoy;
under the sequoia tree; furthest expression; from that of annoyed.
enchanted; the voice was pure passion deployed
toying with the emotions; of those who inhabited troy;
the masked-men; the black smith; the rabid, the droid
all caught in my auras omega-blast and destroyed.
the rabbit - runs across the field; faster then noise;
the non-believers are captured; dispatched as employed
angels; wing spans; that caused drafts that dampened the spirits of 'bad';
who Sigmund Freud would later psycho analyze; as cracked,
language the lord would not entertain;ears clasped to avoid;
4 corners of earth - unknown to maps and tabloids;
knowledge was power he had; in a bronze grasp of alloy;
From the western alps that lined france - the geograph of Savoy
to the windy city, ferocious flags of Illinois
to the Vietnam veterans of the capital of Hanoi
smiling; with gold teeth; dipping dumplings; splashing in soy
in south east china; chatting in Amoy;
decorative fish, ponds of red, white, yellow patterns of Koi
the Hawaiian woman offers him a bowl of; 'Sweetest mashings of Poi'
he travels around the world met with ever-lasting "Ahoy"
he is elite - Hoi Oligoi
his name is Roy Al.
''Captain Roy''
here to save planet earth from asteroid hemorrhoid

'king, you are not the Lord - perhaps it's a ploy' -

Jesus Christ had returned -


a black little boy

cool little flex thingy

stop posting this

its just about my least favorite of your verses

What's dead bra talking about.

I love it

Reposting a verse already on page one, this time with your main account and different title?

Lol

Someday, my sons will repost it too

Interesting. Why do you say that?

stadilz, Frank? See u still handling business.

lol i don't know how to feel about this, tbh. In some cases, the wording seemed kind of forced - with the obvious purpose to carry that 'oy' rhyme scheme. ex:

or maybe i'm just reading it wrong. This may or may not be a flexercise judging by the train-of-thought'esque approach. Nonetheless, i still enjoyed it. To echo a previous poster's sentiment, i too felt this wasnt your strongest piece but there was still finger prints of obvious talent.

this was interesting. a little off your usual 'thang', but i thought it was interesting. a little funny too. i'm gonna read this again.