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dead man 12-15-2013 02:02 AM

insomniatic, she wrote
 
murder





cigarette electric. diminutive, my intro: introspection
salutations Mr. Black. meet Mrs. Misconception
this is a test. it's been an honor. time to go, goodbye
tie a rope. you're Robert Paulson. fight until you die
hyper focused, isotopic, rhyme consultant, why
do i spark with twice the voltage only trying half the time
watching others follow til it almost seem cliche
to write away your pain. hey, farewell, auf wiedersehen
honey's home. i waited, shrinking children in my comfort zone
rushing home from social events to catch a buzz alone
nothing new, but nothing old. lunchables and tea for 2
after all, it's me and you. cafe cups and vehicles
landing where the eagle flew. bask in my ineptitude
asking for recluse while i imagine standing next to you
breakfast food is symbolistic of a happier place
pancakes and bacon. nostalgia is my dragon to chase
pencil graphite arrangement. rubber pads to erase
passive mistakes. sweaty palmprints masking your face
make me your fate. it's already late, i'm already close
to falling from grace. make it okay, make me your ghost
i'll follow your notes. melody plays, harmony floats
we are one. beyond bipartisan votes. carbon and codes
artist's remorse. garbage or gold? scrap it or post
i am jack's dual lives. insomniatic, she wrote





deadman

NYCSPITZ 12-15-2013 02:06 AM

this nigga posts in a thread about pancakes, witnesses niggas smoking fake stogies and watches fight club youtube clips then posts a nice lil collage about it. lmao!!!

dead man 12-15-2013 02:17 AM

nyc i think you are my spirit animal

Wise Wiggles 12-15-2013 04:15 AM

lol..

slide

dead man 12-19-2013 12:14 AM

you/
don't know where i've been, Lou/

dead man 12-19-2013 12:14 AM

you/
don't know where i've been, Lou/

big baby 12-19-2013 12:27 AM

Quote:

watching others follow til it almost seem cliche
to write away your pain. hey, farewell, auf wiedersehen
honey's home. i waited, shrinking children in my comfort zone
stellar

PancakeBrah 12-19-2013 12:32 AM

big baby only liked that part because of the foreign language part to try and seem uber smart.

he only liked the uber part of this post.

Destroyer 12-19-2013 12:34 AM

I like this

NYCSPITZ 12-19-2013 12:34 AM

word...the fuck is auf weidershen my nigga...

dead man 12-19-2013 12:44 AM

its ok.. his au revoir/warped cigar sort of inspired that anyway

pancake did you ever play return to castle wolfenstein

PancakeBrah 12-19-2013 12:46 AM

idk what that is bro. your allusion is lost on me.

Certain 12-19-2013 01:12 AM

stop posting this

its just about my least favorite of your verses

Certain 12-19-2013 01:12 AM

I'm kidding, though.

dead man 12-19-2013 01:18 AM

i get it

pancake it was a ps2 game with difficult bullshit enemies called uber soldats or literally "super soldiers"

NYCSPITZ 12-19-2013 01:20 AM

[QUOTE=NYCSPITZ;230999]word...the fuck is auf weidershen my nigga...[/QUOTE

auf wiedershe n akjhdslehwkjbsdkj da fuck it mean

anybody doesnt have to be dead man black diabetes

dead man 12-19-2013 01:21 AM

goodbye

NYCSPITZ 12-19-2013 01:25 AM

dawg thats 2 words tho germans r weird nazis imo

Wise Wiggles 12-19-2013 01:51 AM

cigarette electric. diminutive, my intro: introspection
salutations Mr. Black. meet Mrs. Misconception
this is a test. it's been an honor. time to go, goodbye
tie a rope. you're Robert Paulson. fight until you die
hyper focused, isotopic, rhyme consultant, why
do i spark with twice the voltage only trying half the time

^ butt‘r

Although I felt the Bob part was a tad lazy.. The muh‘fucka was running and got dome blasted. Lol not a big deal. I know you probably didn't take all that much time on that line..

big baby 12-19-2013 02:50 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by PancakeBrah (Post 230996)
big baby only liked that part because of the foreign language part to try and seem uber smart.

:o

Quote:

Originally Posted by dead man (Post 231011)
its ok.. his au revoir/warped cigar sort of inspired that anyway

:)

The following line of what I quote I liked as well.


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