Netcees - Unfukwitable (3-1) vs Phuck Yew (3-1)

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Unfukwitable (3-1) vs Phuck Yew (3-1) - PHUCK YEW WINS

NBL Season 7
Week 5

Due Saturday, December 7th

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@Unfukwitable @Phuck Yew

ghost fucking ----
Doing doggy to your girlfriend/lover infront of a window, getting another guy to take over and going outside/inside to stand infront of the window the girl is looking out of.
Ghost fucking is cruder name for ghosting.

UNFUKWITABLE aka GR8 aka Dissizit
Tag Team Partner --- Bare Ryu

stop acting like ur a man .. for you that act is to light!
cuz when theres beef, you turn to a 'Ghost Fuk' & let ur friends do that w/ ur wife
i would be a hypocrite to even attempt a Fuk Nameplay
but if we talk about anything that 'Un Achieved' .. all his goals end, the same way
his wifeys a slut, she 'Nuts' how she act w/ the 'Seed'
ur girl has new guys 'Take Ctrl w/ a Nine' weekly, probably named after the league
'Stupid' fuck ur trash, but thats not even the top of it
cuz on Netcees ur future is 'Dim Wit' & ur exactly that for thinking the opposite
reminds me of 'Akers', either way you could never see 'Neigh'
ur Wordplay is a miss & cause such an 'Air Force' ur eligable for coverage @ The VA
coming back for more? could have waited til it healed right
ur getting 'Phuckd Twice', so you've now accomplished something you couldnt IRL
his bitch is a fuckin Hooker .. now im nailing this rookie
'After The Bars' leave 'Fuk Split', like 'Two Broke Friends' .. sharing the pussey

Quote:

Originally Posted by Phuck Yew (Post 220160)

here is your casket ..

12-14 lines?

lol yeah ok , 14

Phuck Yew aka Kwality

Quote:

Originally Posted by Phuck Yew (Post 220151)

ur no swet! yet its like you've been fuckin for hrs!
cause anytime we have to talk about this Orchid .. it ends in nothing but flowers

"I mow down the competition its as easy as walking, so take note kid
he saw me mowing down the pansys around him and shit it - yeah fair to say Orchid"
-Jimbo

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You computer bar swiper, It's almost New Years, make a Resolution, Honestly
What a Backwards predicament... KwaLity bit 16's using 16bit quality .
you make bad songs,
So I don't wanna hear'em on any Ipod, cd player or Walkman
His hooks make for sucha dead delivery I'm surprised if you're against Hanger abortions .
He'll need Limb & Bone support.. When I leave both arms quickly broke
So as I put Yew two braces- on display, He'll wish it was sports car videos .
He said his ground & pound is better & he's the truth with a clinched fist
Him teachin me more on mountin- follows with Space Jam tryna sue for Infringement .
You got DQ'd vs. Alvin Karpis, You was scared ya verse was of a Average standard
But like Kanyes radio rant - them Swayed comments didn't have the Answer .
Seen his Ratchet bitch in the Salon acting like her hair Grew to perfection,
Her scalp is the epitome of Fall Brawl II battles- How it's so use to Extensions .
This Queer travels the world looking for men to try & orgy
So If I Bang cocktails it's after a Toast- while his Bangkok Tales is gay Thailand stories .

Quote:

Originally Posted by Phuck Yew (Post 220160)

ghost fucking ----
Doing doggy to your girlfriend/lover infront of a window, getting another guy to take over and going outside/inside to stand infront of the window the girl is looking out of.
Ghost fucking is cruder name for ghosting.

UNFUKWITABLE aka GR8 aka Dissizit
Tag Team Partner --- Bare Ryu

stop acting like ur a man .. for you that act is to light!
cuz when theres beef, you turn to a 'Ghost Fuk' & let ur friends do that w/ ur wife
Cool wordplay. Not huuuge on the "& let ur friends" part though.
i would be a hypocrite to even attempt a Fuk Nameplay
but if we talk about anything that 'Un Achieved' .. all his goals end, the same way
Not sure what you did there on the setup, considering you just used a Fuk nameplay. But cool punch.
his wifeys a slut, she 'Nuts' how she act w/ the 'Seed'
ur girl has new guys 'Take Ctrl w/ a Nine' weekly, probably named after the league
This was dope.
'Stupid' fuck ur trash, but thats not even the top of it
cuz on Netcees ur future is 'Dim Wit' & ur exactly that for thinking the opposite
I liked this.
reminds me of 'Akers', either way you could never see 'Neigh'
ur Wordplay is a miss & cause such an 'Air Force' ur eligable for coverage @ The VA
Air Force is a bit played
coming back for more? could have waited til it healed right
ur getting 'Phuckd Twice', so you've now accomplished something you couldnt IRL
Ehh. Should've typed out 'in real life,' even still, not my fav.
his bitch is a fuckin Hooker .. now im nailing this rookie
'After The Bars' leave 'Fuk Split', like 'Two Broke Friends' .. sharing the pussey
Lol ok, cool.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Unfukwitable (Post 223829)

Phuck Yew aka Kwality

"I mow down the competition its as easy as walking, so take note kid
he saw me mowing down the pansys around him and shit it - yeah fair to say Orchid"
-Jimbo

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.
.
You computer bar swiper, It's almost New Years, make a Resolution, Honestly
What a Backwards predicament... KwaLity bit 16's using 16bit quality.
Liked this as an opener.
you make bad songs,
So I don't wanna hear'em on any Ipod, cd player or Walkman
His hooks make for sucha dead delivery I'm surprised if you're against Hanger abortions
This was dope.
He'll need Limb & Bone support.. When I leave both arms quickly broke
So as I put Yew two braces- on display, He'll wish it was sports car videos .
Not my favorite.
He said his ground & pound is better & he's the truth with a clinched fist
Him teachin me more on mountin- follows with Space Jam tryna sue for Infringement .
Wordplay was dope. Wish you would've set it up better though.
You got DQ'd vs. Alvin Karpis, You was scared ya verse was of a Average standard
But like Kanyes radio rant - them Swayed comments didn't have the Answer .
Ehh. Not a big fan of this one
Seen his Ratchet bitch in the Salon acting like her hair Grew to perfection,
Her scalp is the epitome of Fall Brawl II battles- How it's so use to Extensions.
I liked this.
This Queer travels the world looking for men to try & orgy
So If I Bang cocktails it's after a Toast- while his Bangkok Tales is gay Thailand stories.[
Ha. Funny & clever, I wouldn't have used it for your closer though.

This was a dope battle.

Phuck - Un-achieved / Take Ctrl / Dim Wit / Fuk split
Wit - 16 bit / Space Jam / Extensions / Dead delivery

This was a real close battle. Both had a couple misses, but not many. This was a tough battle to call....I didn't pick up on that Ctrl w/a Nine line until a few reads, but that was dope. So was that hanger / abortion line. Phuck slipped with that played air force line, otherwiseI could see this going either way, but I got Wit edging this by a hair for creativity and slightlyyy better execution. BOTW.

Vote - Wit

Quote:

Originally Posted by Phuck Yew (Post 220160)

UNFUKWITABLE aka GR8 aka Dissizit
Tag Team Partner --- Bare Ryu

stop acting like ur a man .. for you that act is to light!
cuz when theres beef, you turn to a 'Ghost Fuk' & let ur friends do that w/ ur wife

this was a decent flip, set up could've been better

i would be a hypocrite to even attempt a Fuk Nameplay
but if we talk about anything that 'Un Achieved' .. all his goals end, the same way

i see what you were attempting. You didn't set this up correctly, Had you worded your set up, to be about champing something and no gives a fuk or anything along those lines then yes, this would've been dope.

his wifeys a slut, she 'Nuts' how she act w/ the 'Seed'
ur girl has new guys 'Take Ctrl w/ a Nine' weekly, probably named after the league

ehh

'Stupid' fuck ur trash, but thats not even the top of it
cuz on Netcees ur future is 'Dim Wit' & ur exactly that for thinking the opposite

this was solid

reminds me of 'Akers', either way you could never see 'Neigh'
ur Wordplay is a miss & cause such an 'Air Force' ur eligable for coverage @ The VA

ehh, should've connected the va better with your set up.

coming back for more? could have waited til it healed right
ur getting 'Phuckd Twice', so you've now accomplished something you couldnt IRL

a hit, although it is ehh

his bitch is a fuckin Hooker .. now im nailing this rookie
'After The Bars' leave 'Fuk Split', like 'Two Broke Friends' .. sharing the pussey

angle is cool wording is Forced

Quote:

Originally Posted by Unfukwitable (Post 223829)

Phuck Yew aka Kwality

"I mow down the competition its as easy as walking, so take note kid
he saw me mowing down the pansys around him and shit it - yeah fair to say Orchid"
-Jimbo

.
.
.
You computer bar swiper, It's almost New Years, make a Resolution, Honestly
What a Backwards predicament... KwaLity bit 16's using 16bit quality .

no, its creative but you worded it in an uncreative manner

you make bad songs,

So I don't wanna hear'em on any Ipod, cd player or Walkman
His hooks make for sucha dead delivery I'm surprised if you're against Hanger abortions .

harsh, but walkman and abortions doesnt rhyme not even in a slant manner.

He'll need Limb & Bone support.. When I leave both arms quickly broke
So as I put Yew two braces- on display, He'll wish it was sports car videos .

yew two braces/ youtube races..this was cool

He said his ground & pound is better & he's the truth with a clinched fist
Him teachin me more on mountin- follows with Space Jam tryna sue for Infringement .

to many &'s lol..choppy commas work still in 2013? not really feeling this to strung out

You got DQ'd vs. Alvin Karpis, You was scared ya verse was of a Average standard
But like Kanyes radio rant - them Swayed comments didn't have the Answer .

[B]ouch at the set up, punch should've been scrapped. Set up is better[/B

Seen his Ratchet bitch in the Salon acting like her hair Grew to perfection,
Her scalp is the epitome of Fall Brawl II battles- How it's so use to Extensions .

Cool generic

This Queer travels the world looking for men to try & orgy
So If I Bang cocktails it's after a Toast- while his Bangkok Tales is gay Thailand stories .
ehh nah

V/ Phuck better lands and misses

his wifeys a slut, she 'Nuts' how she act w/ the 'Seed'
ur girl has new guys 'Take Ctrl w/ a Nine' weekly, probably named after the league
'Stupid' fuck ur trash, but thats not even the top of it
cuz on Netcees ur future is 'Dim Wit' & ur exactly that for thinking the opposite
coming back for more? could have waited til it healed right
ur getting 'Phuckd Twice', so you've now accomplished something you couldnt IRL

vs

You computer bar swiper, It's almost New Years, make a Resolution, Honestly
What a Backwards predicament... KwaLity bit 16's using 16bit quality .
So I don't wanna hear'em on any Ipod, cd player or Walkman
His hooks make for sucha dead delivery I'm surprised if you're against Hanger abortions .
He'll need Limb & Bone support.. When I leave both arms quickly broke
So as I put Yew two braces- on display, He'll wish it was sports car videos

dope battle guys got this one so close liked the bolded quoteables the most in each work i think if un's opener was worded better he could of took this, but i think phucks punches hit harder liked the sharp & ctrl line thought that was dope and un i thought the yew two braces was dope but phuck just took it on better misses

v- phuck

dope battle

2-1

To the top we go ...

Not a fan of this battle, didn't like either really, I thought they came really forced with
really cheesy concepts, only thing going for them is wording them alright.
But what it came down to with me was the rhyming, and Unfuks wasn't good.
so -Phuck Yew coz half of unfuks didn't rhyme properly.

this shit was off expected more from phuck shit I've been pullin 14-18 hrs at work y my verse was shitty whats ur reason unfuck shit was off 2 both didn't really have any good concepts I guess ill go with phuck off rhyming at least

V/Phuck

Quote:

Originally Posted by Apex (Post 226013)

Lol you feel a way . lets take it to BA . don't toss a vote stemed from hate that I voted honestly in ya battle vs. plot bro that's not cool .

Quote:

Originally Posted by Unfukwitable (Post 226019)

Lol you feel a way . lets take it to BA . don't toss a vote stemed from hate that I voted honestly in ya battle vs. plot bro that's not cool .

No hate at all just my honest opinion I know my verse was shitty had other shit 2 do but so were urs n phucks.... u wanna take it 2 BA its whatever but there was no hate vote at all both of yall dropped shitty point blank n simple his just rhymed slitly better even though phuck is some shit

Nothing crazy.

V wit

Abortions was gonna be decent but it fell off. Better hits.

Hi...

'Stupid' fuck ur trash, but thats not even the top of it
cuz on Netcees ur future is 'Dim Wit' & ur exactly that for thinking the opposite
coming back for more? could have waited til it healed right
ur getting 'Phuckd Twice', so you've now accomplished something you couldnt IRL

Both of these lines were dope...
wording was precise on these but the rest of your verse was the complete opposite....

So I don't wanna hear'em on any Ipod, cd player or Walkman
His hooks make for sucha dead delivery I'm surprised if you're against Hanger abortions .
was of a Average standard
But like Kanyes radio rant - them Swayed comments didn't have the Answer

Hanger line was line of the battle and swayed line was cool...
but the rest of your verse didn't have the same sting to me...

This was too close but I liked PY's two more than I liked Un's two...

Vote- PY...

Bye...

This is basically the league name after, phuk'd twice and dimwit vs the abortion line which was ok based on a super played concept such as delivery whatever, things like the 16bit and the YouTube thing really turned me off,

Vote broward

Greed's vote isn't counted .. Due to his obvious hate towards me .. but either way if all votes count 6-2(counting greeds & apex) & if they dont count its 5-1 ..

Quote:

Originally Posted by Phuck Yew (Post 226539)

grow up yo... real shit its a vote..

I accept your vote unless he dis-credits Apex's vote .. then your's will be looked past ..

6-2 ... Apex said it wasn't hate I'll take his word for it .