a.m. showers
 

i'd love you to keep walking
in the rain, you listen to the cloud cover
instead of holding a grudge-
-you are secretly cold,
i know because i am, too, cold,
i will probably rephrase my array of captions-
a study of art- "vanished perspectives"
those thousands of abstract points
near and yet far- the sort of thing to put behind you
as this world is too pretty an abstraction to chase
in the way i have spent too much time watching the rain









will feed later today srs ive been slacking.

Poems!

yay

Meh ok for what it is

To me it's vague

The vanished perspectives was the highlight just not captivating no pun intended

This makes me want to write some man poems

i will probably rephrase my array of captions-

good one.

I agree with nik's "meh" comment. It wasn't generous. I wanted moar. I wanted moar moar.

Keep doing fume

Particularly liked this run. Keep doing.

Cimm