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Neighbor vs. Dominate - DOM WINS
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I'm thinking 24?
Good luck, bro |
word... I've been pretty unmotivated lately, but this is a dope match up... I will try to pull out a decent number of lines for it
g/l man |
Dominate aka Im_Pissed
No one's doubtin you're Aussie.. any punch you string up is nonsense I mean, this faggot's wrestled w/ a croc EVERY time he's had to think of a concept & your girl's down to deep throat me 'til her jawbone gets damaged That bitch lies on her back & does grunt work that'd undercut most auto mechanics Stick C4 to your front door.. this pussy blindfolded w/ both arms tied I'll put a packet to IP address that'll send him straight to a Cloud when it goes online Ruin ya plans.. act untouchable, I'm on the next flight w/ Uzis in hand It's nothin to get you drawn & quartered across the border like the Vetruvian Man Heard you went to the clinic, but givin head's like your reason to live This fag's idea of a tissue culture's the shrine in his bedroom made of Kleenex & jizz You got carried in TTT, then tried givin ya broham the third degree? Ain't even land anything & still slowed up Aer traffic worse than Homeland Security This ain't a classic, it's painful.. watchin you get battered & mangled We all know you're Sugar Shane, punches'll put you in retirement like his match w/ Canelo Run up w/ the mask.. let you take a swing before I murder ya set of twins & the second Domicile make sure the ceiling's their brains' new permanent residence I throw the beastliest shots, so catchin a win here's the easiest odds I'm the go-to decision.. or there's a Bigg Rigg in this fight worse than the one GSP robbed |
Neighbor aka Outlaw
U get ripped off buying groceries. That story made u look like a faggot brah I mean, you Spaced Out & got Jewed Law… and I ain’t talkin bout Gattaca Your mom’s a dating site slut. Tell her stank ass to hit the showers Anyone that Smelt that bitch or Mackerel be back on Plenty of Fish within hours Neigh’s pussy & a wretched vet. He’ll go into hiding when the techs are flexed Pfft… I’ll shake ‘em up and this Doodle disappear like a fuckin etch a sketch You juice & get assfucked. Either could put u in shock & have ya heart in pain Fuck it, stay taking a Pole or Roid… u’ll get the picture when u start to shake I’m in the tub getting sponged down by hoes w/ extravagant skills - Getting lathered by milfs, while only time u get a backwash is drinking the last of the milk This frail faggot got Rabdo from lifting, & I gotta see this as weakness If we seeing Neigh bodybilled … it’s as 'the most feminine physique with a penis' & he wonders about his girl’s past. I told em “Neigh she did an orgy” But the way he denies that Big Bang Theory it could fuel the Creationism story Stop pretending you’ll land that 6 figure job. We’ve had enough dude Only reason ur money’s where ur mouth is is cuz ur poor & have a Buck tooth & I feel like I gotta tell ya… your girl is carrying my bastard homie I went from playing tonsil hockey with her to slipping one past the goalie |
No one's doubtin you're Aussie.. any punch you string up is nonsense
I mean, this faggot's wrestled w/ a croc EVERY time he's had to think of a concept -I liked this. Solid punch, good execution & your girl's down to deep throat me 'til her jawbone gets damaged That bitch lies on her back & does grunt work that'd undercut most auto mechanics - This was just ok to me. As usual, you executed it well but it didn't hit hard. Stick C4 to your front door.. this pussy blindfolded w/ both arms tied I'll put a packet to IP address that'll send him straight to a Cloud when it goes online - Not a fan of the letter name plays....don't think you are either. So, I was surprised to see this. All the connections were cool but I didn't think this hit either. Ruin ya plans.. act untouchable, I'm on the next flight w/ Uzis in hand It's nothin to get you drawn & quartered across the border like the Vetruvian Man - Ehhh. Just ok to me. Heard you went to the clinic, but givin head's like your reason to live This fag's idea of a tissue culture's the shrine in his bedroom made of Kleenex & jizz - I thought this was good. I did have to look up tissue culture, but I liked this. You got carried in TTT, then tried givin ya broham the third degree? Ain't even land anything & still slowed up Aer traffic worse than Homeland Security - I've seen wayyyyyy to many Aer/Air concepts in the past few months. This ain't a classic, it's painful.. watchin you get battered & mangled We all know you're Sugar Shane, punches'll put you in retirement like his match w/ Canelo - I didn't know his name was Shane. Would've liked to see another flip or connection along with the name instead of just a fight reference. Normally you have like 8 connections in one line. Run up w/ the mask.. let you take a swing before I murder ya set of twins & the second Domicile make sure the ceiling's their brains' new permanent residence - The wp works but this didn't hit for me. He has twins and you're going to kill them? I'd like to see something more direct and I think you could've done that with the domicile wp. I throw the beastliest shots, so catchin a win here's the easiest odds I'm the go-to decision.. or there's a Bigg Rigg in this fight worse than the one GSP robbed - Had to look up the reference cause I don't follow mma. Not really feeling it. Would've rather seen a play on an actual big rigg.... like the truck. U get ripped off buying groceries. That story made u look like a faggot brah I mean, you Spaced Out & got Jewed Law… and I ain’t talkin bout Gattaca - Kinda cool. Got all the connections but didn't have much sting. Your mom’s a dating site slut. Tell her stank ass to hit the showers Anyone that Smelt that bitch or Mackerel be back on Plenty of Fish within hours - The smelt/type of fish reference I wasn't familiar with until a google. I'm guessing Plenty of Fish is a dating diet...kinda feel the same as the first. I like all the different connections but didn't hit too hard. Neigh’s pussy & a wretched vet. He’ll go into hiding when the techs are flexed Pfft… I’ll shake ‘em up and this Doodle disappear like a fuckin etch a sketch Seems like it could be played but this was decent enough. I can't remember seeing it. You juice & get assfucked. Either could put u in shock & have ya heart in pain Fuck it, stay taking a Pole or Roid… u’ll get the picture when u start to shake This was ok. I think the Polaroid concept could've been dope but was kinda disappointed with the ending. I know the "shake" is a connection but I think you could've made this hit harder w/o that part, even though it would've been less complex. I’m in the tub getting sponged down by hoes w/ extravagant skills - Getting lathered by milfs, while only time u get a backwash is drinking the last of the milk Decent. Very clean (no pun intended). Maybe my favorite so far. This frail faggot got Rabdo from lifting, & I gotta see this as weakness If we seeing Neigh bodybilled … it’s as 'the most feminine physique with a penis' - I think the "billed" verb is a bit of a stretch in the sense I don't hear anyone using that word in that context ever. So, this didn't do it for me. & he wonders about his girl’s past. I told em “Neigh she did an orgy” But the way he denies that Big Bang Theory it could fuel the Creationism story Eh. Ok. A bit simple. Stop pretending you’ll land that 6 figure job. We’ve had enough dude Only reason ur money’s where ur mouth is is cuz ur poor & have a Buck tooth - I like the buck tooth concept. Pretty good. & I feel like I gotta tell ya… your girl is carrying my bastard homie I went from playing tonsil hockey with her to slipping one past the goalie - Decent. Nothing great, but ok. Read this multiple times through. You guys are prolly my two favorites right now, but this was kinda a let down. As usual, both of you had great execution and strong connections which make an overall concept significantly better, but there just wasn't the normal dope concepts that I'm used to seeing in your verses. That being said, I think Dom was stronger in that area. I thought IP and Aertraffic were misses for Neigh. Only ones I was feeling were croc and Kleenex. I wasn't feeling bodybilled and Big Bang from Dom but liked them better than Neigh's misses. I liked buck tooth and backwash from Dom. I think he edges this. Super close but I think his concepts were a bit more impactful. Props, gize. Dom. |
I have croc & sugar shane from neigh. rest were good worded punches in a readers aspect but felt lackluster in a battling format. meaning it didn't have strong enough wording imo to penetrate a opponent but it's something I'd enjoy reading, if that makes sense.
I find dominate word play stretch. tho I went back to read some of his older battles & saw in most cases he pulled it off pretty nicely. case & point - the doodle line was nice, it took me 3 reads to see what you were doing but I got it. but I thought the following line Polaroid, was a stretch.. didn't dig at all. I felt dom verse just hit stronger as a whole than neighs. big bang theory, etch a scetch, lather/milk backwas, bucj tooth,wording of everything was a more enjoyable read. neigh had great wording, just didn't hit strong to me. I got the feel it was more of a showcase of what he can do w.wording things rather than what he can do w. wording things wbile attacking his opponent.. like it was more in vain. dope nevertheless, but yea imnot going to keep reiterating.. lls. vote dom |
No one's doubtin you're Aussie.. any punch you string up is nonsense
I mean, this faggot's wrestled w/ a croc EVERY time he's had to think of a concept Ruin ya plans.. act untouchable, I'm on the next flight w/ Uzis in hand It's nothin to get you drawn & quartered across the border like the Vetruvian Man Heard you went to the clinic, but givin head's like your reason to live This fag's idea of a tissue culture's the shrine in his bedroom made of Kleenex & jizz You got carried in TTT, then tried givin ya broham the third degree? Ain't even land anything & still slowed up Aer traffic worse than Homeland Security Run up w/ the mask.. let you take a swing before I murder ya set of twins & the second Domicile make sure the ceiling's their brains' new permanent residence vs U get ripped off buying groceries. That story made u look like a faggot brah I mean, you Spaced Out & got Jewed Law… and I ain’t talkin bout Gattaca Your mom’s a dating site slut. Tell her stank ass to hit the showers Anyone that Smelt that bitch or Mackerel be back on Plenty of Fish within hours Neigh’s pussy & a wretched vet. He’ll go into hiding when the techs are flexed Pfft… I’ll shake ‘em up and this Doodle disappear like a fuckin etch a sketch You juice & get assfucked. Either could put u in shock & have ya heart in pain Fuck it, stay taking a Pole or Roid… u’ll get the picture when u start to shake & he wonders about his girl’s past. I told em “Neigh she did an orgy” But the way he denies that Big Bang Theory it could fuel the Creationism story Stop pretending you’ll land that 6 figure job. We’ve had enough dude Only reason ur money’s where ur mouth is is cuz ur poor & have a Buck tooth & I feel like I gotta tell ya… your girl is carrying my bastard homie I went from playing tonsil hockey with her to slipping one past the goalie -------Damn good fucking battle here but i have to give this to @Dominate his wordplay was smoother his direction was fierce & his approach was very clean ... neigh had a good overall verse i liked the homeland security bar & the domicile ... but dom had the the first 4 that were straight murderous ... |
No one's doubtin you're Aussie.. any punch you string up is nonsense
I mean, this faggot's wrestled w/ a croc EVERY time he's had to think of a concept Kind of funny, but i'd expect more from you. 7/10 & your girl's down to deep throat me 'til her jawbone gets damaged That bitch lies on her back & does grunt work that'd undercut most auto mechanics This is cool, executed well. I digs it. 8/10 Stick C4 to your front door.. this pussy blindfolded w/ both arms tied I'll put a packet to IP address that'll send him straight to a Cloud when it goes online Not really feeling this one to be honest. 6/10 Ruin ya plans.. act untouchable, I'm on the next flight w/ Uzis in hand It's nothin to get you drawn & quartered across the border like the Vetruvian Man This is dope, and a fresh flip on the border concept. 9/10 Heard you went to the clinic, but givin head's like your reason to live This fag's idea of a tissue culture's the shrine in his bedroom made of Kleenex & jizz This was funny, and it was creative. 9/10 You got carried in TTT, then tried givin ya broham the third degree? Ain't even land anything & still slowed up Aer traffic worse than Homeland Security Aer lines are kind of played. This is okay. 7/10 This ain't a classic, it's painful.. watchin you get battered & mangled We all know you're Sugar Shane, punches'll put you in retirement like his match w/ Canelo Solid. 8/10 Run up w/ the mask.. let you take a swing before I murder ya set of twins & the second Domicile make sure the ceiling's their brains' new permanent residence Wasn't crazy about the wording on this one, but it's okay. 7/10 I throw the beastliest shots, so catchin a win here's the easiest odds I'm the go-to decision.. or there's a Bigg Rigg in this fight worse than the one GSP robbed This is alright. Wasn't crazy about the way you executed it. 7/10 --> 75.5% U get ripped off buying groceries. That story made u look like a faggot brah I mean, you Spaced Out & got Jewed Law… and I ain’t talkin bout Gattaca Dope. 9/10 Your mom’s a dating site slut. Tell her stank ass to hit the showers Anyone that Smelt that bitch or Mackerel be back on Plenty of Fish within hours Not really feeling this. 6/10 Neigh’s pussy & a wretched vet. He’ll go into hiding when the techs are flexed Pfft… I’ll shake ‘em up and this Doodle disappear like a fuckin etch a sketch Dope. I think I've seen etch a sketch/shake em up lines, but this is a fresh flip. 8/10 You juice & get assfucked. Either could put u in shock & have ya heart in pain Fuck it, stay taking a Pole or Roid… u’ll get the picture when u start to shake Not a fan of the fact that you used Shake concepts back to back, but the wordplay is all well done. 8/10 I’m in the tub getting sponged down by hoes w/ extravagant skills - Getting lathered by milfs, while only time u get a backwash is drinking the last of the milk Kind of dumb, but also funnyish. Overall it's okay. 7/10 This frail faggot got Rabdo from lifting, & I gotta see this as weakness If we seeing Neigh bodybilled … it’s as 'the most feminine physique with a penis' Well executed, and kind of funny. I like it. 8/10 & he wonders about his girl’s past. I told em “Neigh she did an orgy” But the way he denies that Big Bang Theory it could fuel the Creationism story Ehh this is really just a played concept disguised, but very well worded. 8/10 Stop pretending you’ll land that 6 figure job. We’ve had enough dude Only reason ur money’s where ur mouth is is cuz ur poor & have a Buck tooth Lol kind of funny but also a bit more on the simplistic side. 7/10 & I feel like I gotta tell ya… your girl is carrying my bastard homie I went from playing tonsil hockey with her to slipping one past the goalie Solid closer, but you've had a couple better lines. 8/10 76.6% This was a good battle on both sides, but when it comes down to it, I think Dominate was much more consistent throughout his verse, which is what ultimately set the two apart MVGT - Dom |
No one's doubtin you're Aussie.. any punch you string up is nonsense
I mean, this faggot's wrestled w/ a croc EVERY time he's had to think of a concept [ok] & your girl's down to deep throat me 'til her jawbone gets damaged That bitch lies on her back & does grunt work that'd undercut most auto mechanics [ok] Stick C4 to your front door.. this pussy blindfolded w/ both arms tied I'll put a packet to IP address that'll send him straight to a Cloud when it goes online [dnt like] Ruin ya plans.. act untouchable, I'm on the next flight w/ Uzis in hand It's nothin to get you drawn & quartered across the border like the Vetruvian Man [this is nice] Heard you went to the clinic, but givin head's like your reason to live This fag's idea of a tissue culture's the shrine in his bedroom made of Kleenex & jizz [nah not feeling] You got carried in TTT, then tried givin ya broham the third degree? Ain't even land anything & still slowed up Aer traffic worse than Homeland Security [old np] This ain't a classic, it's painful.. watchin you get battered & mangled We all know you're Sugar Shane, punches'll put you in retirement like his match w/ Canelo [cool np] Run up w/ the mask.. let you take a swing before I murder ya set of twins & the second Domicile make sure the ceiling's their brains' new permanent residence [forced imo] I throw the beastliest shots, so catchin a win here's the easiest odds I'm the go-to decision.. or there's a Bigg Rigg in this fight worse than the one GSP robbed [ok cool] v U get ripped off buying groceries. That story made u look like a faggot brah I mean, you Spaced Out & got Jewed Law… and I ain’t talkin bout Gattaca [nice, had to google gattaca] Your mom’s a dating site slut. Tell her stank ass to hit the showers Anyone that Smelt that bitch or Mackerel be back on Plenty of Fish within hours [didn't like] Neigh’s pussy & a wretched vet. He’ll go into hiding when the techs are flexed Pfft… I’ll shake ‘em up and this Doodle disappear like a fuckin etch a sketch [doodle wp been done] You juice & get assfucked. Either could put u in shock & have ya heart in pain Fuck it, stay taking a Pole or Roid… u’ll get the picture when u start to shake [liked this] I’m in the tub getting sponged down by hoes w/ extravagant skills - Getting lathered by milfs, while only time u get a backwash is drinking the last of the milk [aiming for funny but fell short imo] This frail faggot got Rabdo from lifting, & I gotta see this as weakness If we seeing Neigh bodybilled … it’s as 'the most feminine physique with a penis' [this was cool] & he wonders about his girl’s past. I told em “Neigh she did an orgy” But the way he denies that Big Bang Theory it could fuel the Creationism story [nothing here man too obv] Stop pretending you’ll land that 6 figure job. We’ve had enough dude Only reason ur money’s where ur mouth is is cuz ur poor & have a Buck tooth [ha. buck tooth was a ok flip] & I feel like I gotta tell ya… your girl is carrying my bastard homie I went from playing tonsil hockey with her to slipping one past the goalie [this was bad] i think neighbor edged it w. one more bar that i liked. 5 bars to 4. the problem i had w/ both verses is that they were so formulaic, it felt like i knew what was coming when i read the middle of the punch. maybe thats just how text in general is now w/ ppl sticking to one style that gets votes idk. but yea neighbor had more that i liked so i'll go with neighbor. thanks for showing |
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Vote - Neighbor |
I got this b4 it closes
Do not close.till i vote |
Dominate aka Im_Pissed
No one's doubtin you're Aussie.. any punch you string up is nonsense I mean, this faggot's wrestled w/ a croc EVERY time he's had to think of a concept ...Decent opener & your girl's down to deep throat me 'til her jawbone gets damaged That bitch lies on her back & does grunt work that'd undercut most auto mechanics ...lol ok Stick C4 to your front door.. this pussy blindfolded w/ both arms tied I'll put a packet to IP address that'll send him straight to a Cloud when it goes online ...This was a dope concept, I liked Ruin ya plans.. act untouchable, I'm on the next flight w/ Uzis in hand It's nothin to get you drawn & quartered across the border like the Vetruvian Man ...Cool, like the wordplay Heard you went to the clinic, but givin head's like your reason to live This fag's idea of a tissue culture's the shrine in his bedroom made of Kleenex & jizz ...Ok You got carried in TTT, then tried givin ya broham the third degree? Ain't even land anything & still slowed up Aer traffic worse than Homeland Security ...Cool This ain't a classic, it's painful.. watchin you get battered & mangled We all know you're Sugar Shane, punches'll put you in retirement like his match w/ Canelo ...Ok Run up w/ the mask.. let you take a swing before I murder ya set of twins & the second Domicile make sure the ceiling's their brains' new permanent residence ...Ehh I throw the beastliest shots, so catchin a win here's the easiest odds I'm the go-to decision.. or there's a Bigg Rigg in this fight worse than the one GSP robbed ...Ehh closer Vs Neighbor aka Outlaw U get ripped off buying groceries. That story made u look like a faggot brah I mean, you Spaced Out & got Jewed Law… and I ain’t talkin bout Gattaca ...Niice Your mom’s a dating site slut. Tell her stank ass to hit the showers Anyone that Smelt that bitch or Mackerel be back on Plenty of Fish within hours ...Ok Neigh’s pussy & a wretched vet. He’ll go into hiding when the techs are flexed Pfft… I’ll shake ‘em up and this Doodle disappear like a fuckin etch a sketch ...Cool, flipped this nice.. I've used this concept before but u did well w/ it here You juice & get assfucked. Either could put u in shock & have ya heart in pain Fuck it, stay taking a Pole or Roid… u’ll get the picture when u start to shake ...Nice I’m in the tub getting sponged down by hoes w/ extravagant skills - Getting lathered by milfs, while only time u get a backwash is drinking the last of the milk ...Cool This frail faggot got Rabdo from lifting, & I gotta see this as weakness If we seeing Neigh bodybilled … it’s as 'the most feminine physique with a penis' ...Ok & he wonders about his girl’s past. I told em “Neigh she did an orgy” But the way he denies that Big Bang Theory it could fuel the Creationism story ...Concepts tired, ehh Stop pretending you’ll land that 6 figure job. We’ve had enough dude Only reason ur money’s where ur mouth is is cuz ur poor & have a Buck tooth ...lol, ok & I feel like I gotta tell ya… your girl is carrying my bastard homie I went from playing tonsil hockey with her to slipping one past the goalie ...Ok close This was close as hell.. had to go thru & read twice to determine a winner. It was hard to come up w/ the winner too. I have like 5-4 quotes.. edging it to Dom. Neigh had better wording tho.. & tbh this could go either way, no question. Dom gets this one by a cunt hair in a pretty nice battle. Props to both. Vote- Dominate |
I'm sorry, guys. But I highly doubt either of you end up voting.
But I hope you prove me wrong! |
No one's doubtin you're Aussie.. any punch you string up is nonsense
I mean, this faggot's wrestled w/ a croc EVERY time he's had to think of a concept cool & your girl's down to deep throat me 'til her jawbone gets damaged That bitch lies on her back & does grunt work that'd undercut most auto mechanics ok Stick C4 to your front door.. this pussy blindfolded w/ both arms tied I'll put a packet to IP address that'll send him straight to a Cloud when it goes online ehh Ruin ya plans.. act untouchable, I'm on the next flight w/ Uzis in hand It's nothin to get you drawn & quartered across the border like the Vetruvian Man nah Heard you went to the clinic, but givin head's like your reason to live This fag's idea of a tissue culture's the shrine in his bedroom made of Kleenex & jizz meh You got carried in TTT, then tried givin ya broham the third degree? Ain't even land anything & still slowed up Aer traffic worse than Homeland Security ok This ain't a classic, it's painful.. watchin you get battered & mangled We all know you're Sugar Shane, punches'll put you in retirement like his match w/ Canelo ok Run up w/ the mask.. let you take a swing before I murder ya set of twins & the second Domicile make sure the ceiling's their brains' new permanent residence ok I throw the beastliest shots, so catchin a win here's the easiest odds I'm the go-to decision.. or there's a Bigg Rigg in this fight worse than the one GSP robbed decent vs U get ripped off buying groceries. That story made u look like a faggot brah I mean, you Spaced Out & got Jewed Law… and I ain’t talkin bout Gattaca coo Your mom’s a dating site slut. Tell her stank ass to hit the showers yone that Smelt that bitch or Mackerel be back on Plenty of Fish within hours ok Neigh’s pussy & a wretched vet. He’ll go into hiding when the techs are flexed Pfft… I’ll shake ‘em up and this Doodle disappear like a fuckin etch a sketch decent/nah You juice & get assfucked. Either could put u in shock & have ya heart in pain Fuck it, stay taking a Pole or Roid… u’ll get the picture when u start to shake seen w/p n didn't like it I’m in the tub getting sponged down by hoes w/ extravagant skills - Getting lathered by milfs, while only time u get a backwash is drinking the last of the milk ok This frail faggot got Rabdo from lifting, & I gotta see this as weakness If we seeing Neigh bodybilled … it’s as 'the most feminine physique with a penis' nah & he wonders about his girl’s past. I told em “Neigh she did an orgy” But the way he denies that Big Bang Theory it could fuel the Creationism story decent Stop pretending you’ll land that 6 figure job. We’ve had enough dude Only reason ur money’s where ur mouth is is cuz ur poor & have a Buck tooth lotb & I feel like I gotta tell ya… your girl is carrying my bastard homie I went from playing tonsil hockey with her to slipping one past the goalie decent v/dom....lotb won it 4 me |
Congrats, Dom
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My word has become worthless in regards to text endeavors. I lied. :( |
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Lol @ Bags/Strik Edit: O wait Strik voted. Thanks |
Thought u barely won that tho.
Had Neigh brought a tad harder of a bar anywhere in his verse he woulda got u. |
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