Deadman: Ropes
 

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half moronic, magna karma, student of change
only blackbird who spread his wings and flew to the cage
stupid, forsaken, youths in a basement, practicing bondage
bleeding ropes for every goal we haven't accomplished
do we have to be honest? i'd rather shatter a promise
abandon my apartment. head back to the cottage,
passive. subtle nuances like genetical code
bloodline syndromic, telegraphing punches to throw
semi-morose, fully corrosive settled in smoke
filter larynx through a gravel pit. Inspectah Verbose
chemical dosage, mescaline Motrin. plastic and paper
addicts are saviors, viewed as lepers now cause habit is nature
indulgence is nature, food is a drug. who's pulling the plug?
everybody plays the fool .. if they're foolish enough
translucent, Zab Judah when shadowboxing your fate
napping lucid awake. camouflage and oxygen tanks
democracy, pick-pocketing, apocryphal, fake
now apologize again, just for apologies' sake
nodding away those labor pains on leather recliners
my homie used to put the wet to a lighter, setting the fire
never higher. February paints a painful maroon
Thorazine blues settled in. you wouldn't make it to June
crescent moon, powder boom, kegstand naked at noon
life's a black dinner spoon - insufflate it or lose
hatred is useless, drop the mask, face your confusion
pick the pieces up and make it your movement.






MATE

1rd post


Was really dope, I'll feed you in a bit. Kinda dropped off at the end but the rhymes were nasty

ugh....

I will be reading this, I'd imagine later on tonight in the depths of dawn, coming down off Molly with a freshly loaded bowl of og kush in front of me just like ........... Gone

Edit: just read it. dope shit. sporadic. kind of different from your usual stuff.

wise is half a fag.

Another dope drop from you, people are making feeding easy lately. Enjoyed the uhm.. what can I call it? The somewhat repetitive lines where you build on to what you started to say.

I'm talking about this shit:
everybody plays the fool .. if they're foolish enough
& this:
now apologize again, just for apologies' sake

Enjoyed the phrasing of those lines and they fit well with their previous lines as well. Kinda agree with Split about the last few lines, but overall you did a really great job with this and I enjoyed the read. Keep droppin'.

This was killer man, it did sorta taper off towards the end, but still. The way you can use high intelligence vocabulary like child's play is incredible. Usually its just using big words to sound smart, but every one was relevant, clever and perfectly played. Diggin the subject matter of over indulgence and the affects on those who care about the user.
Straight from the top with the blackbird flying back to the cage, nodding away the labor pain's, powder boom/kegstands naked at noon... such meaningful, atypical metaphor/wordplay really kept my attention throughout... Deep shit man, lovin it

good shit as usually. hit me back with a little feed brah, check out my emo shit called better days, i did something different! i wrote it specifically with u in mind and i got nothing!!!!! ur a jerk!!!

then i went back to my regular style and it was much more fun

have a little fun black...


Inspectah Verbose. was the dopest part, you wouldn't make it to june.. ha.
good work. u've had better, but this is till better than most, keep posting. ever try any audio shit man? would be interesting to see for sure

lmao @ wise again with his promises of feed and then none comming... u have a habit wise!!! also we should probly collab again eh?? pm me something