(snf) Address Dope Boy Fresh
 

(repost)

My sound's ridiculous, got it down to a synthesis
Push that rock on the block, around town im crowned Sisyphus
Hit the ground with a grip, on the prowl hittin licks
take they clout if they flip; lay em out n make they house into crypts
Im all about the click clack till I collect big stacks
Checks get cashed exempt with tax to graft and protect kick backs
In pitch black I hustle quick fast, my muscle gets that
so there's never trouble on the double up for the cut or pinched bags
I stop and fantasize when I plot to plan my grinds
cops get handed bribes to stand in line like they wanna pantomime
I dont drop nann in dimes with a hot frantic mind
When I got grams to pies cramped inside of my pants grand design
I let them cannons fly, a quick burst gets em sick hurt
Done did dirt, grab a tricks purse n stomp em out till I kick curbs
Let that whip work while the wrist stirs with a sifter
my mixtures blister on the bubble up and comes to a tinctured simmer
I re-up like an anagram with all the back and forth
When I handle grams its ambulance crash'n course on path to court
I've ran the dance with plants, coke, crack and horse
all leaving tracks and sores, and fiends with long sleeves grabbin more

.. Believe I give them what they askin for

We dont need your tips...,,

Pretty smooth shit, rawn
Still got it when you want to, ood to see this

Lol Frank knows

I liked this, nice grimy new York feel to it, almost like the crack commandments elaborated with higher intelligence
Enjoyed the east reading of it even though there were tons of intricasies, I felt the flow change in my brain seamlessly without wondering how you intended it...
The stomping through a bitch til you kick curbs was a nice visual
And the beginning, pushing rocks like Sisyphus was such a good meta I'm surprised I've not heard it more... But, well, most crack dealing rappers probably aren't much for Greek mythology
If this would've had a hook and a how you got there and what's going on now verse before and after I think this could really kill as a complete track
But its just another sellin substances versequip and the topic is so boring, but you did pull off what you did pretty grand
No complaints in the lyricism, just wanted more really

Rawnie ol' boy, I enjoyed this for the most part...
you have that slick as a banana peel flow when you want
you really shine through your flow, it's audio ready
I forget whose style this reminds me of, then again
when I think of it...I believe dude was someones alias...
either way the flow on this was on point...topic doesn't translate well with the OM pieces
but it still shines with the technical aspects of what most try to accomplish
nice work my dude, keep writing

Word good looks