The Realest Shit I Ever Wrote.
 

Also an aowl no show verse.

You ever heard that story..
The one about the guy who gets in a relationship for a while, until finally.. he realizes the bitch he's with is everything he dislikes in a woman?
So he leaves her, only to be told that she's pregnant.. right after he breaks up with her?

Well, I'm living that shit.
And this may quite possibly be..
The realest shit I ever wrote.

True story. Listen..
Pregnant bitches pop up, moneys all they want from me
At's why I party every night, cause mysery love company
Sympathy -come fuck with me, symphonies -doves, covetry!
sip with me, drunk!, drugs in me!!, figure to fuck suffering!!!
Cause somebodies been sleeping in my bed, I fucking hope
She's with baby, and her name is the biggest joke I fucking know!
I mean, it started off typical like
Another chick who needs dick in'er life
Wore condoms, cause I take all my niggas advice
You don't wanna catch the drip, fucking bitches are tryfe
Its all pretty logical feed
Couple weeks go by, and we still ain't stopping to eat
The bitch loves cock, she's a freak
Couple times without a hard hat, hope I didnt drop any seeds
Next thing you know, I'm waking up with her ass
On the way out the door, has my lunch in a bag
I'm thinking.. "ya -that's what's up, make'r work for the sex"
A year later, bitch served me a paternity test!!!
Stressed...
So here's the negatives, already had two kids and two babyfathers
I'm like -cool, if you all handle business I ain't making no drama
The kids were outta control, but their dads weren't a problem
I met the fagits, first class addicts, bitch asses, i'd stomp'em
My comfort level was growing, I'm sure you probably guessed it
Had'r own house, and a refridgerator full from lasagna to lettuce
Forget it, figured I found a good girl I could fuck for a while
Pussy was plump, plus my whole level of hunger was down
I started coming around more, and I began noticing shit
Like she never went to work, how she afford groceries and kids?
So to myself I'm like, we need to have a social event
And talk about the type of things she has to go through for rent
At this point, I'm tryina figure out what her hustle about
Came straight forward and said HUD pays every month for her house!!
Plus, wow, she's a product of the government with welfare on the fork
And she be paying all her bills through her childrens support!!!
I'm like whoa fucking nelly, something compelled me to snap
Broke up with her ass, told me she was pregnant..
I'm like who the hells kid in your belly is that!?!?!?
You either gonna have abortion or adopt it away
Cause when it comes to that support shit, I'm not opting to pay
We parted ways, I took my shit and headed back to the county
Spoke a few times, that was that..
Until the sherriff captain had found me
Surround me at work, appearance due for a date -surely
Been bout a week since they swabbed my cheeks -poor me
Still not sure who's to blame, unfortunately
Forced to be deep, As I try to defend my glory -cause..
You see, every real story is a never ending story ..FUCK!!!

Damn b...

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That's some shit dude, so glad I never got caught up like that. Bitches like this seriously sicken me, never hit it raw without doing research on broads. That's like being face to face catfished. Hope it turns out not yours, but damn, verse wise this shit killed throughout, I always have trouble keeping true personal stuff in full rap form.

So here's the negatives, already had two kids and two babyfathers
I'm like -cool, if you all handle business I ain't making no drama
The kids were outta control, but their dads weren't a problem
I met the fagits, first class addicts, bitch asses, i'd stomp'em
My comfort level was growing, I'm sure you probably guessed it
Had'r own house, and a refridgerator full from lasagna to lettuce

Real nice... I was expecting the culmination of her funding to be stripping or hooking, shit, that'd be more commendable than raping the system.

This took a few pages from my life fa reals. This resonated with me thoroughly on dif levels. Some things either happened to me, or to close ppl around me. Glad you could share.
Very well written in terms of accessibility and technical consistency. Smooth read and not distracting.

On a real note, keep your head up. I might write a life piece. This has me inspired a bit. Keep dropping.

nice shit a good perspective. easily related too for most guys i think in one way or another. nice keep it comming.

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I don't know why I never got around to feeding this before. This, unlike the second part, was one of my favorite things from you. The emotion was palpable but never seemed fake or over the top. The details were strong, and the rhymes were stronger. The ending was the weak point, and I don't mean the very last line as much as how you set up that scene with the sheriff's deputy. If that was real, it wasn't clarified enough. But overall, this was one of the better verses I read this season.