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veritas 10-22-2013 01:46 PM

you stupid limbic lizards, you unevolved heathen
 
These limbic lizards can’t comprehend the pentacle Dodecanese fractal harmonic series,
Let alone V making laws, while shooting holes in all of your idiotic theories
The celebrity of kinesthetic tensegrity, build with the highest math that my kind knows
My eyes wield a Meissner field, it’ B4C circle expansion ratios erases foes
Perfected phase conjugation, as time is broken down into the energy of masses equivalent
At a rate of nine times ten to the sixteenth power, joules are sub atomically ambivalent
Longitudinal and transverse photons along the axis, scatter-plot the Master’s hand
Call it Heisenburg’s uncertainty, we call it “you see too slow to know their span”
Nine levels of portals in the realm of devils’ and mortals at the helm of their morals
The creator of worlds and all HIS saints and their morsels all paint with their laurels
…… while the fake take the path of least resistance:
We compute the math of earthly existence…….
In a society of credit, modern man is all in debt
Cliché: I know more than what you could forget
And it starts with nothing, and ends in the all, all in the end
Off with his head, heads off in the frequencies that I send
Plastic swipe to spend, plastic coffins, plastic surgery, and plastic plants
You are still blind, and for all you know this could be your second chance.

Diode 10-22-2013 02:02 PM

ok aesop.

veritas 10-22-2013 02:17 PM

case in point. thanks for the feed.

Frank 10-24-2013 02:30 AM

i want you to branch off of this and write a piece about plastic

Concrete 10-24-2013 12:59 PM

I know complex pieces like this ain't everybody's cup of coffee but I can dig it. Some of the content was perhaps too intricate for my feeble human brain to appreciate but overall it was an interesting read indeed.

veritas 10-24-2013 01:11 PM

thank you. remember the future.

zygote 10-25-2013 09:01 AM

Enjoyed the different references and the general approach but some parts are inaccessible. E.g., beginning with the "pentacle Dodecanese fractal harmonic series" seemed like too much and it was a bit alienating especially to start with it. If that was the purpose of that line (perhaps it was considering the title) then good job, but if it creating some confusion was unintentional then maybe consider setting up or making clearer connections to clarify an obscure phrase. Favorite part was this: "Nine levels of portals in the realm of devils’ and mortals at the helm of their morals
The creator of worlds and all HIS saints and their morsels all paint with their laurels"

veritas 10-25-2013 04:24 PM

fair enough. thanks for the feed.


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