Battle Scars
 

Battle Scars like a lasting art...
some skin deep, while others last in heart
some wars end, while others start
some love begins, while others abort
new life springs summer, and falls apart
while winter hits, like a contact sport
you begin to wonder, how you came this far
but still reminisce, the times when you came up short
some days you have patients, and other days you can't take no more
we're all in the healing process, because life is war

Cool little poetic piece. not my cup of tea
but I see what you were expressing
pretty good for what it was though
write longer.....keep it up

word...this is my comfort zone right here...I need to start writing poetry again...

ths was fucking cool man...loved the poetic vibe this had..simple yet it was riddled with so much depth and imagery. man this was cool

I can relate to this...very cool piece bro.

Thanks for the feed!

patience*
simple piece, expand more and go out of your comfort zone.
ramble with a flow, write with a sense.
it'll do wonderful things for your work.

Epic advice

Thanks for the feed!

quaint, concise, and very meaningful. definitely a piece that speaks to this place. Cool.

Thanks

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I concur.

not really much here to critique .... the concept of it was kind of non existent to me, the title and the lyrics didnt match up to me @ all .. & this is really shit short to even create anything in it ...


4/10

nothing much to say love, cool piece.