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DrunkenSickTwistedNastyFuckRhyme - BeeGee <I'm back>
fuck rhyme'n, ya'll can't even breathe with me I'm a virus in the booth, call the CDC see round town, i'm known to snatch mic's spit.. and freestyle chapters of past lifes who is he? shit, some'll say plain but son's flows' like a runaway train motherfuck game, i'm the box it comes in a few shots of somethin, just to function grave plots and dungeons, nigga I get deep archive hundreds of bars in dead sleep cooler then ya bed sheets, im focused son ride'n on the track till them locust's come see my feet shake the ground like thunder do and my words burn my throat, 200 proof spitting till my lungs go poof, hocus pocus my verse's where the bible's oldest scrolls is just a trained killer under soldiers orders hotter than the sun's summer solstice scorches I hold them torches, so ya'll can see the way tapped into that brain matter beneath the gray keep thinkin you nice, go head admire ya self I feel the same way, I only inspire myself straight murderer, running from siren's at 12 destined to hear the scream'n choirs of hell while im on this earth the seeds been planted stretchin flows till i leave this planet long before my mothers grief and panic BeeGee that sick nigga from the East Atlantic it never stops... |
flow is on point. some points were super corn. so much so i almost felt like you went for that. did you? w.e. freestyle chapters of past life was the highlight for me, i fuck with that concept.
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after cooler than ya bed sheets it was sick..
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Decent flex. Feel like it deserves to be recorded not shown in a open mic. Flow was good, some shit was just blah. Not the flow, some parts simply read weak. The begining I thought the bars or the syllable rhymes were too small, the middle was perfect, but the end was stretched. Overall decent drop, solid flex though
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it was almost as if another dude wrote the second half of this lol. this joint had a gradient effect.
"I hold them torches, so ya'll can see the way tapped into that brain matter beneath the gray keep thinkin you nice, go head admire ya self I feel the same way, I only inspire myself" i liked that part. this will go down as a warm up piece in my book. I look forward to more of your stuff as you get in your zone. good shit. |
Yo nice flex bg. Its no good from rmc
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How you been son. Still Mil? We should post some of our collabs on here. |
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keep thinkin you nice, go head admire ya self
I feel the same way, I only inspire myself This was dope, thought the second part was better. The bar i quoted above is a standout for two reassons. 1 it was my favorite. Almost. This leads me to reason 2. I don't know if it was a typo or what but I think you should have put "only I inspire myself"n the current way it makes it seem like you inspire only yourself but nobody else. Annd that's me reaching lol. I did enjoy this though, I'm down to do the collab though, maybe me you and no good can get sumn goin. Thanks for the feed man. Peace |
Enjoyed this...flow is on point the grave plots and dungeons was dope
the summer solstice line was interesting overall a dope piece I believe Ill keep reading you keep dropping |
Throw the first four lines away. Those were terrible. The rest sort of built into something really, really slick by about the three-quarters point.
This part was as good as anything from any flex I've read here: Quote:
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I agree with wise here
After the bedsheets shit this was dope Welcome back btw, beegee |
awesome. super enjoyable read. mad puns up this mahf, haha good wordplay, flow was smooth as shit. good bar length. nothing wasted, no filler. really good drop. looking forward to more, shit was nice
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