~Smoke and Mirror~



Music drowned by laughter,
Heathen ***kles in Satan's playground and pasture,
Vibrant hues covering such natural beauty,
A birds eye view as I sit... sipping and drooling,
This coffee is costly; Wedding band in a pocket,
I'm a man and honest, missing happiness in logic,
Faithful to a fault, married awfully young,
Missed the chance to slum, I sit; Gawking for fun,
Same age as my seeds, still fantasize of planting in one,
A garden trimmed as her sweat, glares in the sun,
I'm wrong and admit; but I'm seasoned with bliss,
A walking dream so serene emitting Tantric secrets,
Time stands still... As the door swings agape,
Red heels shake earth, with every step she takes,
Never ending stockings, with the legs to match,
Haven't seen her face, but I know, she's an ageless catch,
A red dress slit, elegantly, for viewing pleasure,
Showing enough skin to be surprised, when she removes it later,
A pair of hips that are, doomed for labor,
Although I can't see her ass, I presume it's flavor,
A bubble incomparable, beside her cleavage shown,
Not quite a peep show, because, she keeps her secret's home,
Dainty and graceful, revealing enough to be tasteful,
Including the lack of cosmetics to conceal the look of an angel.
Closer she creeps; captivating my stare for weeks,
As God's breath brushes her silky hair from cheeks,
Hazel eyes capture mine, with the whitest smirk,
It's time I meet my maker...God's creator; concealed by red skirt.

~Twenty Feet Away~

I'm prepared now, I'll willingly toss aside my past,
My wife was a catch, but I deserve the best this world can hash,
The kids grown, so it's not like I'll struggle financially,
No child support for adults, they're over the pampering,
I'm sure what we're doing's wrong, but when a connection's so strong,
You learn to let the soothing music simply string you along,

~Five Feet Away~

With your permission, my first words will simply be: “Marry Me”,
As your locked eyes grant request I stand carelessly,
The moment of truth, as soon as I get my first whiff of perfume,
She passes me...And greets a different loser, who sits in this room.

Originally Posted by Just Write (Post 169657) very descriptive piece man, too bad it got no showed. mine did too, although you predicted I was gunna no show you faggot lol jkjk but for real this was a solid effort man I'm wrong and admit; but I'm seasoned with bliss, A walking dream so serene emitting Tantric secrets, Time stands still... As the door swings agape, Red heels shake earth, with every step she takes, Never ending stockings, with the legs to match, Haven't seen her face, but I know, she's an ageless catch, A red dress slit, elegantly, for viewing pleasure, Showing enough skin to be surprised, when she removes it later, A pair of hips that are, doomed for labor, Although I can't see her ass, I presume it's flavor, super vivid righthere, puts a sorta scarlet johhanson thought in my head, chuckles at the last line too. I'm prepared now, I'll willingly toss aside my past, My wife was a catch, but I deserve the best this world can hash, The kids grown, so it's not like I'll struggle financially, No child support for adults, they're over the pampering, I'm sure what we're doing's wrong, but when a connection's so strong, You learn to let the soothing music simply string you along, this has got to be my favorite part, flow, cadence.. simply effortless and the message is way more powerful than the 6 lines they're in. can't say it enough, this part really stood out to me overall this was a very poetic piece. one of those pieces that, I don't know how to word this.. seems to just float and is full of light when you read it, ionno. dope stuff though, like I said before it's a shame it was no showed. stay in for next week though man. talented writer, peace if you don't mind, I got no-showed too http://www.netcees.co/showthread.php?t=22871