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Arch vs Hotdogvendorman - ARCH WINS
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you'll get kicked in the dirt, then sent to a hurst Arch ill dominate beyond belief like they worshiped at the same temple or church make me come to your crib for popping that stupid shit smash ur face into a case of stairs n watch ya fam give me that look for doing it i carve kids up. its levels to this shit so act hard n get struck bitch mickey ds 86'd a burger cuz it sounds stupid sayin Arch Deluxe while ur girl thinks of ur sex n gets left w/ empty regrets she combed over the facts but left her comb over my house the minute she left idk if its love or lust but you shouldn't trust the slut when the same game had dudes packed inside her for a ride like a shuttle bus i flex first, get fresh sir, just to pick up the next skirt while deportes in clothes you sport would make espn discontinue the network bang. |
Well...
I don't know what drugs Swerve ingests but you winning ain't how this ends If you're considered the favorite's a girl taking your fat ass out for a friend You're wack as fuck lately. I'm not lying. I hope you haven't been trying D's been on such a steep slope his verses need to be marked w/ black diamonds Orc said you're Reuben and I agree, but not in how your queer face is You're like the sandwich... sloppy as fuck with meat hanging in weird places Bitches flock to you to fuck them? I'm calling it horse shit Any broad trying to turn Deon... will need a license to operate forklifts Deon da Gawd? Pfft... no one worships this fat swine Shit... you could barely God, Des cuz all your shit is as awful as THAT line Shoot kid in a crowd. You're delusional if you think my aim needs work I'll have D's face on his man's chest like "In Memory Of" t-shirts ...blah... |
one had a strong start then had a sorta decline and the other was more consistent .
v/ Arch |
i carve kids up. its levels to this shit so act hard n get struck
bitch mickey ds 86'd a burger cuz it sounds stupid sayin Arch Deluxe while ur girl thinks of ur sex n gets left w/ empty regrets she combed over the facts but left her comb over my house the minute she left idk if its love or lust but you shouldn't trust the slut when the same game had dudes packed inside her for a ride like a shuttle bus vs You're wack as fuck lately. I'm not lying. I hope you haven't been trying D's been on such a steep slope his verses need to be marked w/ black diamonds Orc said you're Reuben and I agree, but not in how your queer face is You're like the sandwich... sloppy as fuck with meat hanging in weird places v/deon, cool little battle here, but i thought hot was more consistent in his verse both dropped some good shit but deon had the lotb and his verse overall was solid |
hotdog:
you'll get kicked in the dirt, then sent to a hurst Arch ill dominate beyond belief like they worshiped at the same temple or church could've been good but too random make me come to your crib for popping that stupid shit smash ur face into a case of stairs n watch ya fam give me that look for doing it uhhhhm no? i carve kids up. its levels to this shit so act hard n get struck bitch mickey ds 86'd a burger cuz it sounds stupid sayin Arch Deluxe multis off, bar was aiiight... while ur girl thinks of ur sex n gets left w/ empty regrets she combed over the facts but left her comb over my house the minute she left coolish, could've been better idk if its love or lust but you shouldn't trust the slut when the same game had dudes packed inside her for a ride like a shuttle bus better set up needed here, liked the same game concept i flex first, get fresh sir, just to pick up the next skirt while deportes in clothes you sport would make espn discontinue the network Dee poor taste... lol cant let that slide at all.. deportez Arch I don't know what drugs Swerve ingests but you winning ain't how this ends If you're considered the favorite's a girl taking your fat ass out for a friend no You're wack as fuck lately. I'm not lying. I hope you haven't been trying D's been on such a steep slope his verses need to be marked w/ black diamonds I like how you have a straight forward talk to him style.. but this bar is just ok Orc said you're Reuben and I agree, but not in how your queer face is You're like the sandwich... sloppy as fuck with meat hanging in weird places decent but could've been way better Bitches flock to you to fuck them? I'm calling it horse shit Any broad trying to turn Deon... will need a license to operate forklifts nah Deon da Gawd? Pfft... no one worships this fat swine Shit... you could barely God, Des cuz all your shit is as awful as THAT line could barely God? makes no sense.. liked the reference to that horrible wp though Shoot kid in a crowd. You're delusional if you think my aim needs work I'll have D's face on his man's chest like "In Memory Of" t-shirts NO Both of you are way better than this... Neither tried which doesn't make me want to take time out n vote. Luckily I gave you two the benefit of the doubt. I've got Deon here based on polish |
i carve kids up. its levels to this shit so act hard n get struck
bitch mickey ds 86'd a burger cuz it sounds stupid sayin Arch Deluxe idk if its love or lust but you shouldn't trust the slut when the same game had dudes packed inside her for a ride like a shuttle bus vs. Orc said you're Reuben and I agree, but not in how your queer face is You're like the sandwich... sloppy as fuck with meat hanging in weird places Okay battle, i've seen you both drop a lot better but it's obvious both were pretty quick drops... Deon won this, more styandouts and the comb over flip was pretty dece as well... thought Arch had a lot of pretty average and meh lines in this one... props to both Vote - Deon |
you'll get kicked in the dirt, then sent to a hurst
Arch ill dominate beyond belief like they worshiped at the same temple or church while ur girl thinks of ur sex n gets left w/ empty regrets she combed over the facts but left her comb over my house the minute she left idk if its love or lust but you shouldn't trust the slut when the same game had dudes packed inside her for a ride like a shuttle bus vs I don't know what drugs Swerve ingests but you winning ain't how this ends If you're considered the favorite's a girl taking your fat ass out for a friend Bitches flock to you to fuck them? I'm calling it horse shit Any broad trying to turn Deon... will need a license to operate forklifts Shoot kid in a crowd. You're delusional if you think my aim needs work I'll have D's face on his man's chest like "In Memory Of" t-shirts Cool battle. Dominate Beyond belief wasn't that bad of a 'Beyond' flip. Seen worse. Stairs/stares? I'm not entirely sure if that's what you meant, but if so, verrry played. Not really feeling the McDonald's line. See you got food on your mind, though. Multies just distracted me. They were off. I like combover. That's good. Shuttle bus was good, too. Wasn't feeling Deportes at all. Favor it's was a good opener. Steep slope was alright. Something of a throwaway line, IMO. Reuben was decent. Not my type of punch. Or perhaps just needed a stronger connection. Idk. Forklift is funny. Wasn't feeling God, Des. Thought the original play was fine and Bags was being a faggot, tbh. This flip was much worse than the actual line, IMO. Closer was good, though. Clever. Overall close battle. Deon had stairs and Arch had Goddess. Those cancel eachother out as worst lines. The other two I quoted from Deon I wasn't feeling as much as Arch's. Arch's nonquotes were just personal taste and still borderline while Deon's I genuinely didn't like. Could go either way, obviously, but I got Arch taking it. Props to both. /v arch. |
you'll get kicked in the dirt, then sent to a hurst
Arch ill dominate beyond belief like they worshiped at the same temple or church while ur girl thinks of ur sex n gets left w/ empty regrets she combed over the facts but left her comb over my house the minute she left vs. I don't know what drugs Swerve ingests but you winning ain't how this ends If you're considered the favorite's a girl taking your fat ass out for a friend You're wack as fuck lately. I'm not lying. I hope you haven't been trying D's been on such a steep slope his verses need to be marked w/ black diamonds Orc said you're Reuben and I agree, but not in how your queer face is You're like the sandwich... sloppy as fuck with meat hanging in weird places hmm. so idk. y'all didn't try too hard it seems. but since both of y'all didn't, this is pretty close. i got deon at 2 quotes and arch at 3. ur misses were about even. so it comes down to the standouts. and arch's got more. that's why i gotta vote for him. could see it going either way tho. v/arch |
More votes plz
its 3-3 |
I have Arch taking this by a slim margin. I think he worded his punches better so that they landed more effectively. Not a bad battle, but I didn't feel like you guys were really swinging at each other. Both of you had decent ones and terrible ones. Best advice to both is work on wording your punches so they land with more ferocity.
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i carve kids up. its levels to this shit so act hard n get struck
bitch mickey ds 86'd a burger cuz it sounds stupid sayin Arch Deluxe vs You're wack as fuck lately. I'm not lying. I hope you haven't been trying D's been on such a steep slope his verses need to be marked w/ black diamonds v/ arch. yo real talk, for some vets, this battle was trash. no zingers here, ya'll might be rusty or just falling off into a steady decline but from the stuff i quoted, arch had the better quote and had another bar that could've been quoted but didn't cause of the horrible wording here. it was just horrible tbh how this battle turned out |
idk if its love or lust but you shouldn't trust the slut
when the same game had dudes packed inside her for a ride like a shuttle bus vs Bitches flock to you to fuck them? I'm calling it horse shit Any broad trying to turn Deon... will need a license to operate forklifts Orc said you're Reuben and I agree, but not in how your queer face is You're like the sandwich... sloppy as fuck with meat hanging in weird places v/ arch for having +1 in quotables the lotb w/ the reuben line shit was funny as fuck, deon just didn't have anything that really was on point super solid imo.. could be style preference but i got arch taking this. |
i carve kids up. its levels to this shit so act hard n get struck
bitch mickey ds 86'd a burger cuz it sounds stupid sayin Arch Deluxe while ur girl thinks of ur sex n gets left w/ empty regrets she combed over the facts but left her comb over my house the minute she left vs Orc said you're Reuben and I agree, but not in how your queer face is You're like the sandwich... sloppy as fuck with meat hanging in weird places Bitches flock to you to fuck them? I'm calling it horse shit Any broad trying to turn Deon... will need a license to operate forklifts Even on quotes... Wasn't feeling the stair/stare line or the closer from Deon. Downward slope/black diamond I've seen before and I didn't like the goddess line either from Arch... lol even on misses as well Close battle Of the OK bars... I dug favour its & face on mans shirt a little more than dominate beyond belief and shuttle bus, just a little more creative IMO and the favour its hit better as a punch than the ur moms a slut line... so edge to Arch here v/ Arch |
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