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Wise Wiggles 12-19-2024 07:31 AM

10 STEPS
 
Ben's at the bench, welding the claws
What's a healthy response to Elm St macabre?
Vitriol bitch, I'm melting it off
Taking it fucking further when you tell me to stop
It's so taxing. No limits, no maxxing
Get lost and the flow grabs me and i glow happy
Poor bastard. Taking it easy is more hazard
Nothing in the stores matter. It takes from your majick
So many things. So many dreams
Thoughts trickle into so many streams
Honing potions more vast than the holy ocean
That'll cause you pain like scolliosis
The world hectic. Gotta buckle down like your girls pregnant
Still ain't touch this feral essence
Thats fucking IT.. YOU ARE DONE
10 STEPS BACK IF YOU WANT TO KEEP YOUR TONGUE
Cold blooded spitting shit Eskimos dont fuck with
Hole cutting your soul pumpkin, it's so lovely
Kill it with smirnoff. Fuck your energy, weird sauce
Reflect better than what any mirror gots
Barely any check to see if I'm okay
All this Child's Play. Damn near fucking Chucky me and I will stay
Mad toxicity.All you do is talk shit to me
And expect me to have pad locked teeth
So warm and cuddley, but cats plot
Demonize me. I'd give all my blood, til the last drop
Oh is I vivid?? Got my own spot in the spectrum
Lets see all the hearts you've collected
Why you think they throw a star in the darkest of sections?
Breath is key, gotta harness ya weapons
Cuz your entire world can be ripped apart within seconds

PancakeBrah 12-19-2024 09:55 AM

Ben's at the bench, welding the claws
What's a healthy response to Elm St macabre?
Vitriol bitch, I'm melting it off
Taking it fucking further when you tell me to stop
It's so taxing. No limits, no maxxing

Oh is I vivid?? Got my own spot in the spectrum
Lets see all the hearts you've collected

Best parts of a great piece. Soul pumpkin, majick, Chuck me and I, and weird sauce. You're a top 7% rhymer and always come up with great turns of phrase. Phrasing that is unique fit well into v clean and clever schemes. Great piece.

Diablo 12-20-2024 03:54 PM

Got my own spot in the spectrum
Lets see all the hearts you've collected
Why you think they throw a star in the darkest of sections?

was my fave line too. seemed wrote quickly, which I always like as I tend to do the same for these drops really. they’re just word vomit soup effectively spews out. that’s a good open mic piece title actually, might use it

stay upwards!

JESODIST 12-20-2024 08:11 PM



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Slayer of Ancient Demons,
I'm hate on a date with Mischievous,
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Like the joker I'm Serious
Mysterious hero
See you on the previous
J to the E to the S to the U
Stressful stem cells
Pharaohs and Rebels
I'm a zygote a pirate
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Any defiant survivor Attempt
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It's more than a sin to Tempt
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Even the deceiving can tell
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It was built to enslave that friend
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only came to befriend
Ending the spill of this pen by Pressing send
In this case post nevertheless...the End
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An explosion of sulphur and Burning Arsenic Radiation,



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