Twin Tourney Regular Division Semi Finals: Saint vs Regulator - OPEN FOR VOTES
 

@Saint @Regulator

You’re king of the hill? The shit I do to bitches you couldn’t bare to watch
I’ll cure ur girls migraine leaving nothin behind but a calling card and a pair of socks
You’re fuckin with a sinner and with a name like saint you ain’t no one to fear.
ur so fake ur ghost writers visit me, telling me how I changed over the years.
He not posing a threat, flowing with vets, only thing he has is a long list of champs.
aint is even in ur name, that's what voters say, followed by he's dog shit and can't.
If you complain about votes, the fucked up part is you didn't choose to die bitching.
Because dominate's sharing the blame too, he forced you into a suicide mission.
You think ur best punch is the rock, but when I swing I'm handing you the boulders.
The way I brush saint off, u would think I only want the devil standing on my shoulders.
Bring that bull shit against me, this battle will be like showing ur red rag to a crip set.
Post first when its AI, but a real battler? like the tourney graphic ur ink aint even drip yet.

http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=160009

Eviction, Dia!sick.. bro

Title belts in 2025!? lol...this loser thinkin "how can this NOT fail!"
Lil Shrimp is a trophy catch he'd 3D print & hang in glass like a cocktail
If Dia has a top bar in the mag know Dom wasn't strict to quote shit
that'd make such an uproar a Don't Disturb sign will be next to the Eviction notice
Ur concepts + wording got me so lost; problem is ur flows off
Those lines like every diss-solving filler.. they'd followup a botched botox
A dying moms wish had 'em binge eat allll up in her basement
Fatass let himself go at-will so fast his waistline sued for wrongful termination
Ur girl stay on corners.. cardates anytime/place schmoes like to stick it
within 15 mins she'll jump a Hotrod & get AAA for her Roadside assistance
&Bro don't raise ur voice without sack or blood to back it up
cuz 'id beat Reggaton down w/ hooks more repetitiously than Latin clubs

Regulator

Saint
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Both of you started off slow but finished really strong. Honestly, it comes down to the last three bars for each, and in my view, they were pretty much neck and neck. This one's tough. I have to go back and re-read both verses.

Done.

Okay, I think Saint edges it out by a slim margin. Regulator had the better finisher, but Saint's sequence of final lines just slightly landed better. It’s almost a draw. That’s just my take, though – it could really go either way

Regulator had suicide mission, with the opener and devil standing bars being decent. You should work on your concepts and wordplay. If your bar doesn't have something thats clever or deliver a strong diss to your opponent it's not really effective in text battles. Also, you're not using your first bar to set up your punch. It's not a requirement to do, but it makes it easier to develop your concept so you can focus the second bar on an effective punchline. This is a notable difference between the verses in this battle.

Saint had the opener mostly, but eviction notice, botox, AAA were all notable as well. Didn't love all of the wordplay attempts but the verse was well constructed and you had a solid flow going throughout. enjoyed the read overall, seems like you know what you're doing.

Vote: Saint. Looking back punch by punch Saint didn't blow me away with anything, but he had a consistent level of quality. Enjoyed 1 bar from Reg, but he didn't have enough behind that to pull off the win.

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both were good, but mvgt Saint, took it with the Reggaton bar.

yo this shit was a mess but there was def no chat gpt used here i got saint cause he sounded more mean and drunk


V- SainNT

You’re king of the hill? The shit I do to bitches you couldn’t bare to watch
I’ll cure ur girls migraine leaving nothin behind but a calling card and a pair of socks
I’m familiar with the idea of curing a migraine with sex, but if finding a calling card and pair of socks is a trope for getting cucked I don’t know it. The implication is there anyway and it’s creative.
You’re fuckin with a sinner and with a name like saint you ain’t no one to fear.
ur so fake ur ghost writers visit me, telling me how I changed over the years.
[B]Ah you mean like the ghost of Christmas past? That’s a creative idea. Needed a bit more clarity. [/B]
He not posing a threat, flowing with vets, only thing he has is a long list of champs.
aint is even in ur name, that's what voters say, followed by he's dog shit and can't.
the idea is okay. I don’t like the execution. It reads like voters are going to say “ain’t he’s dog shit can’t”.
[B]If you complain about votes, the fucked up part is you didn't choose to die bitching.
Because dominate's sharing the blame too, he forced you into a suicide mission.
Straightforward. A bit generic. Not bad.
You think ur best punch is the rock, but when I swing I'm handing you the boulders.
The way I brush saint off, u would think I only want the devil standing on my shoulders.
[B]Cool. I like the imagery in the flip. Best line so far./B]
Bring that bull shit against me, this battle will be like showing ur red rag to a crip set.
Post first when it’s AI, but a real battler? like the tourney graphic ur ink aint even drip yet.
Creative angle. So so punch.


Vs

Title belts in 2025!? lol...this loser thinkin "how can this NOT fail!"
Lil Shrimp is a trophy catch he'd 3D print & hang in glass like a cocktail
Great angle. I would have tried to tweak the wording to make the wordplay a bit cleaner but shrimp + hang in glass / cocktail is good as is.
If Dia has a top bar in the mag know Dom wasn't strict to quote shit
that'd make such an uproar a Don't Disturb sign will be next to the Eviction notice
Great idea (I think) but execution not quite there for me. “Make such an uproar” needed some clarity. Who is in uproar? If it’s the voters/general crowd, why does that lead to a do not disturb sign? I think the stronger angle and possibly what you intended was to continue on from the previous bar and be trying to say that me handing him a “top punch” had him so excited he needed to fap one out and hence the do not disturb. But in that case, “make such an uproar” wasn’t the right word choice. Maybe “got him so excited” instead.
Ur concepts + wording got me so lost; problem is ur flows off
Those lines like every diss-solving filler.. they'd followup a botched botox
Nah. Ironically this one is a bit of a mess lol. Diss-solving doesn’t work for me either phonetically or conceptually
A dying moms wish had 'em binge eat allll up in her basement
Fatass let himself go at-will so fast his waistline sued for wrongful termination
Ha. I think this would be stronger without the at will tie in actually. Still funny.
Ur girl stay on corners.. cardates anytime/place schmoes like to stick it
within 15 mins she'll jump a Hotrod & get AAA for her Roadside assistance
Bang. Nice one.
&Bro don't raise ur voice without sack or blood to back it up
cuz 'id beat Reggaton down w/ hooks more repetitiously than Latin clubs
raise ur voice -> get beat a tone down. Might be a stretch for some but I fuck with it. All the wordplay tie ins are clever. I dig it.

This was closer than I thought it would be. Regulator had good ideas, and creative ideas. But Saint’s personal angles worked better than Reg’s more generic ones. And the roadside assistance bar was LOTB.

V/ Saint

Saint wins 5-0