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2tripple0 01-28-2013 11:27 AM

2triple0 vs lox - LOX WINS
 
10 lines due whenever by tonight really


first to five wins

LOX 01-28-2013 01:52 PM

how much $ do we get if we win?

and kk ill post tonight

2tripple0 01-28-2013 04:58 PM

alright i thot imight not even drop but ill try to come with something later

2tripple0 01-28-2013 05:30 PM

yeah man lets ggo to amsterdam we on a boyage
this a transplant call me your chinese soysauce
jerking off b-boys redefined any choice that you like
you need to stop cyphering your topics never detach on site
whenever you post you lost half the message
i think doc cut u off my deepest condolence
spare me this battle my descent remains real
i pack punches your dentures could feel
you may pay me now i dont blow dick for carrots
but pack me like a gat and make way for triples sabatoge

LOX 01-28-2013 11:00 PM

you begged me for this battle, said im the one you needed next
cause getting past lox would open doors...but u dont got the key to sucess
right now he's acting calm , but he won't later
once he loses this battle 'triple flip on the board' like a pro skater
i'm a jiu jitsu master, in a fight you wouldn't last
if you even tryed to pass my guard, dog... it would bite you in the ass
the whole site wants you dead asap , this kid sucks
we all want you too go fast,. but starving yourself to death would not be quick enough
i'm a fuckin chick magnet, and i aint lyin.. trick
i know 2 girls in love with me...plus like five other bitches aside from his

Flow 01-29-2013 04:33 AM

Concepts with no punch vs medicore concepts with a mediocre punch.

TwoTrip I have no clue where you going with that, maybe your punches are lost on me but I could see the concepts in the build up. You need to be more direct an also rhyme... not sure what that close was about but it did neither.

Lox you take this, you didnt need to go to hard which maybe why you didn't, but you had direct punches and a few lols. Enjoyed your close even if it is a bit played now. But hey. what isnt?

V/Lox

Obey 01-30-2013 09:35 PM

the whole site wants you dead asap , this kid sucks
we all want you too go fast,. but starving yourself to death would not be quick enough

a few played shits, the guard dog wasnt so bad you needed some nicer wording


trip, Im a bit worried about you saying you dont blow dick for carrots lol what would you do it for
you didn't have anything worth quoting, just a lot of statement type punches bro you need to work on thinking of better punches when you write

easy decision here
vote - lox

Zen 02-01-2013 04:11 PM

No explanation needed here really. 2triple0 came with nothing lox came with very little but enough.
V/lox

Mr.Sinister 02-04-2013 09:15 AM

Vote-Lox
Just a better verse with decent punches atleast...Trip you got some work to do, need to work on being creative with your disses and punches and also work on having a more clean flow, a lot of your stuff didn't rhyme really at all...


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