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veritas 08-07-2022 10:19 AM

A Norse lullaby
 
I stopped rhyming on purpose.
Surely you haven’t noticed.

Because that focus is hopeless from caskets with roses.
My prose is your ghost left in repose with no postage.
My flow is the coldest we’ve always all known this
All alone where this zone is.
You can hone in an hone it
Until I suppose it’s….
I just black holed it.
Oops.
I lied. You died. Preside where you can’t reside.
Either hands or mind, fucking wit mines, is like signing for suicide
I influence ya mind like genjutsu, using your mind as it’s own disguise
Ain’t never been what your used to, aborting tries from beyond the skies
Never penning no lies, never pensive, I strive.
Realize.

One in a million ain’t even a fraction close
Quantum electron leader of the faction
Jon Connor folks
Wit no need for grammar spinning phantom spokes
Wheel in a wheel
Do you see the pattern folks?
You can’t even die-gest, so why should I rhyme or?
should I get vie-lent, and then they all die, yes?
Not my circus, not my monkeys, nothing survives pure.
Still close to the streets like San Francisco junkies pushing the cure.

Eŋg 08-12-2022 09:16 PM

this was genuinely pretty dope. so much so i was about to cypher off it as my highest form of approval.

but i'ma have to leave that to the real vikings @Soule @Objective

PancakeBrah 09-18-2022 12:36 AM

Because that focus is hopeless from caskets with roses.
My prose is your ghost left in repose with no postage

Way I read this made it cool. I'm such a good reader.

The Northman is a dope movie.

veritas 09-19-2022 01:02 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by PancakeBrah (Post 826066)
Because that focus is hopeless from caskets with roses.
My prose is your ghost left in repose with no postage

Way I read this made it cool. I'm such a good reader.

The Northman is a dope movie.

Fair and thank you. Keep reading good :)

Hush 09-19-2022 08:55 PM

Stay strong big dog

veritas 09-21-2022 03:34 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Hush (Post 826093)
Stay strong big dog

Fa sho fam. Hope you are doing well as well :)

ACTIVATE SELF 10-25-2022 11:53 PM

Like a smorgasbord of random thoughts laid on top of and spilling over into the cracks in the keyboard. A fun and effortless read. Not as deep or interesting as your usual offerings but still good enough to hold my attention for a bit.

Objective 11-17-2022 05:07 AM

Enjoyed the read. Good stuff, @veritas

Did not enjoy @ACTIVATE SELF'S writing of the Americanised word and pronunciation of "smörgåsbord" as it's completely fucking butchered. And I've seen it a lot lately so got a bit of an acid reflux seeing the word getting fucked here, too

This was a wild OM, see you again in 2 months


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