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Wanderer vs Sinacog - WANDERER WINS

Netcees SOL Season II
Week 6

Due Friday, August 5th at Midnight PST

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@Wanderer @Sinacog

I'm chosen unravling a SWEATSHIRT -- erosion casulties this dead germ//
The pen deploys comet bursts; and 'SIN DESTROYS WANDERER'' like MOSES TRAVELING THE DESERT//
I'm the best writer alive -- casulties of a dice game -- you rolled ''Sin NAKE EYES''
The cold bakes rhymes -- in the desert is the only time you'll fold snake eyes//
I got shit covered like a blanket; and the banquet--
THANKS -- SHIT -- I beat wanderer a 2nd time -- like MOSES HAD 2 quests --
I own slave ships-- ran one straight to your abdomen--
FATHOMS PHLEGM -- you don't ''eat meat'' you toss and eat salad -- ''FRIEND''

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U really think heads turn when u type that shit?
Fuck a dose of reality.. i’m hooking u up to the IV drip
If I meet u in a diner i’ll pull a blade. Fuck first impressions
See sin’s spilling out in the booth like it’s church confessions
& don’t put ya childhood out there coz nobody wanna peep it
Or get a 40 something nose to ur ear like ya uncle whispering “it’s our little secret”
Autistic fuckin’ weirdo.. chicks show no passion to this goon
If u ever tie the knot with a litter of kids it’s earning a living making animal balloons

first 4 of sins wasnt that bad lol although need a bible fact check, closer was funny

vs

U really think heads turn when u type that shit?
Fuck a dose of reality.. i’m hooking u up to the IV drip

old concept but i still like it

If I meet u in a diner i’ll pull a blade. Fuck first impressions
See sin’s spilling out in the booth like it’s church confessions

theres been 100 sin textcees so again, an old concept but wording was good n felt effortless

& don’t put ya childhood out there coz nobody wanna peep it
Or get a 40 something nose to ur ear like ya uncle whispering “it’s our little secret”

if i cant call a 9 a 3rd grader u cant call a 40 an uncle.. that standard is set, but this was a reach for a gunbar

Autistic fuckin’ weirdo.. chicks show no passion to this goon
If u ever tie the knot with a litter of kids it’s earning a living making animal balloons

im a big fan of cleverness, on that regard its a good twist on a tie the knot concept thats again old, but this just felt forced

sin was in his bag here, but wanderer’s wording and being coherent was the only positive ..

v wand

Quote:

Originally Posted by Sinacog (Post 824338)

I'm chosen unravling a SWEATSHIRT -- erosion casulties this dead germ//
The pen deploys comet bursts; and 'SIN DESTROYS WANDERER'' like MOSES TRAVELING THE DESERT//
The silly set up multis aside this is actually kinda good. Nice way to incorporate both names.
I'm the best writer alive -- casulties of a dice game -- you rolled ''Sin NAKE EYES''
The cold bakes rhymes -- in the desert is the only time you'll fold snake eyes//
I got shit covered like a blanket; and the banquet--
THANKS -- SHIT -- I beat wanderer a 2nd time -- like MOSES HAD 2 quests --
I own slave ships-- ran one straight to your abdomen--
FATHOMS PHLEGM -- you don't ''eat meat'' you toss and eat salad -- ''FRIEND''
aaaaand the rest of it is more par for the course. LOL @ "THANKS -- SHIT" and "FATHOMS PHLEGM".

Entertaining verse. Good shit Cogsworth

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Quote:

Originally Posted by Wanderer (Post 824356)

U really think heads turn when u type that shit?
Fuck a dose of reality.. i’m hooking u up to the IV drip
Cool
If I meet u in a diner i’ll pull a blade. Fuck first impressions
See sin’s spilling out in the booth like it’s church confessions
Not bad
& don’t put ya childhood out there coz nobody wanna peep it
Or get a 40 something nose to ur ear like ya uncle whispering “it’s our little secret”
LOL that's dope. I like this a lot. Great wording for the impact/humour. Kind of a waste to use a bar of this calibre here lol. Oh well
Autistic fuckin’ weirdo.. chicks show no passion to this goon
If u ever tie the knot with a litter of kids it’s earning a living making animal balloons
Cool, creative.

More than enough to take it. Good work.

V/ Wanderer

Sin NAKE EYES

vs

Wand whole verse was good. Can’t decide if 40 something is fire or doesn’t work but either it way it doesn’t really matter here

Vote - wanderer

Wand wins. 40 something to your ear was dope

Sinacog trash

I got Wand

Sin first bar was aight

But Wand had it beat in every line .

Breaking this down would be a insult to us all

Vote - Wanderer