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Sharp 07-04-2022 08:40 PM

Cred vs Dave - DAVE WINS
 
Netcees SOL Season II
Week 2


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@Cred @evaD

evaD 07-05-2022 01:17 PM

10? Pics?

Cred 07-06-2022 01:35 AM

@evaD

Who's this lame? head shot wen the toolie flame
Ruger bang. I'll push Daves shit backwards quicker than his username
Catch u in traffic n u goin to da grave wit ya bitch. AK wit da grip
Grand Theft Auto: Vice City.. this nigga gettin sprayed IN the whip
Pull up n blam first. Dracos in hand wen my mans lurk
as soon as he Drops they'll be talkin bout the Pops like last weeks bags verse
Let off a .22 in his gut jus for dog even thinkin he cud go against me
dis Shit 'll rip the whole lining out ur stomach quicker than Rawn MD
Fuck this foreign faggot s'no way u cud be my enemy bitch
U'll end up a dead man over that beef, Dave.. on some Wendy's shit

evaD 07-07-2022 03:15 AM

Born ready, You know my hands on the holster
Cred Take two steps and get clapped to the side of the head like he was dancing the salsa
& If He admits his wife is a hoe you’ better believe him
Her entire scheme is the wire theme - different dudes going way down in the hole for every season
Bitch can’t keep it to herself that’s why she walk like she got that ‘rupaul tuck’
Soon as she slide that back up a bunch of dudes start unloading like it’s a uhaul truck
I can get u benzos or perc, but homie I ain’t tryna grand stand
Creds only experience with big pharma was that affair he had with John boy the ranch hand
& Dave is nice w/ the hands but really I like the uzi better
All it take is one burst to twist up the fabric of his chest like it’s a coogi sweater
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Adverse 07-07-2022 04:26 PM

Who's this lame? head shot wen the toolie flame
Ruger bang. I'll push Daves shit backwards quicker than his username
^ feel like I’ve seen this one a few times already but okay.

Catch u in traffic n u goin to da grave wit ya bitch. AK wit da grip
Grand Theft Auto: Vice City.. this nigga gettin sprayed IN the whip
^i didn’t find this as clever as the usual cred gun bar was super generic

Pull up n blam first. Dracos in hand wen my mans lurk
as soon as he Drops they'll be talkin bout the Pops like last weeks bags verse
^ehhh ok

Let off a .22 in his gut jus for dog even thinkin he cud go against me
dis Shit 'll rip the whole lining out ur stomach quicker than Rawn MD
^ nice relevant attack. Liked it. Sorry Rawn lol

Fuck this foreign faggot s'no way u cud be my enemy bitch
U'll end up a dead man over that beef, Dave.. on some Wendy's shit
^didnt really feel this one man. See what you were trying to do but it’s been done

Dave:
Born ready, You know my hands on the holster
Cred Take two steps and get clapped to the side of the head like he was dancing the salsa
^first of all this shit doesn’t rhyme at all (fuck my American accent!) the punch was cool though

& If He admits his wife is a hoe you’ better believe him
Her entire scheme is the wire theme - different dudes going way down in the hole for every season
^ liked it but if you took “for” out of the ending it would have flowed more smoothly, might be nitpicking but idk

Bitch can’t keep it to herself that’s why she walk like she got that ‘rupaul tuck’
Soon as she slide that back up a bunch of dudes start unloading like it’s a uhaul truck
^its alright if not a little generic

I can get u benzos or perc, but homie I ain’t tryna grand stand
Creds only experience with big pharma was that affair he had with John boy the ranch hand
^LMAO...fire

& Dave is nice w/ the hands but really I like the uzi better
All it take is one burst to twist up the fabric of his chest like it’s a coogi sweater
^ decent closer

I think Cred had some played out shit and both had their missteps. Overall I think a couple of Daves bars hit harder, and big pharma was LOTB

V/Dave

Fracture 07-09-2022 03:49 PM

I didn’t really feel Creds verse at all. I’ve seen some of his stuff around and I get the Schlick is all gun lines, but these were pretty lazy compared to the other cred lines I’ve seen


Dave won with his opener alone, straight fire. But uhaul and coogi were also litty


Vote- Dave

Dominate 07-09-2022 07:02 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Cred (Post 822309)
@evaD

Who's this lame? head shot wen the toolie flame
Ruger bang. I'll push Daves shit backwards quicker than his username
Catch u in traffic n u goin to da grave wit ya bitch. AK wit da grip
Grand Theft Auto: Vice City.. this nigga gettin sprayed IN the whip
Pull up n blam first. Dracos in hand wen my mans lurk
as soon as he Drops they'll be talkin bout the Pops like last weeks bags verse
Let off a .22 in his gut jus for dog even thinkin he cud go against me
dis Shit 'll rip the whole lining out ur stomach quicker than Rawn MD
Fuck this foreign faggot s'no way u cud be my enemy bitch
U'll end up a dead man over that beef, Dave.. on some Wendy's shit

I usually do a full breakdown but my feed for every bar is pretty much the same for you here: delivery is slick as hell and makes for a really enjoyable read BUT the concepts themselves were all pretty basic and/or old with the exception of the Rawn line which was cool. Actually the Bags one was OK too bc of the current event flip even though the pops wp is old. There's obvious talent here but mostly the concepts were lacking for me this week.

Quote:

Originally Posted by evaD (Post 822419)
Born ready, You know my hands on the holster
Cred Take two steps and get clapped to the side of the head like he was dancing the salsa
Haha, nice. Rhyme works for me in my accent but you shoulda known better - I imagine it'll lose impact for north American voters.
& If He admits his wife is a hoe you’ better believe him
Her entire scheme is the wire theme - different dudes going way down in the hole for every season
I never watched it so I had to google. For anyone else: the song on the opening credits of the show The Wire is called "Way down in the hole" and is sung by different dudes in season 1 of the show vs season 2 vs season 3 etc. Objectively this is quite good but I'm kind of annoyed by how long it took me to understand all the layers of the wp.
Bitch can’t keep it to herself that’s why she walk like she got that ‘rupaul tuck’
Soon as she slide that back up a bunch of dudes start unloading like it’s uhaul truck
I like the idea but not 100% clear on what's meant by 'slide that back up'. I get it in the sense of sliding the back of a uhaul truck up but not sure what the other side of the wp is supposed to mean in reference to his girl.
I can get u benzos or perc, but homie I ain’t tryna grand stand
Creds only experience with big pharma was that affair he had with John boy the ranch hand
flip is kinda funny ... not bad
& Dave is nice w/ the hands but really I like the uzi better
All it take is one burst to twist up the fabric of his chest like it’s a corgi sweater
Meh.
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Dave got it. More creative and humorous.

White LGI 07-09-2022 08:03 PM

Vote Dave

I just felt Dave was more creative, I laughed a few times during Dave's verse, he was just better here. Cred was a lot better last week

UserName 07-09-2022 11:46 PM

Cred:
Pull up n blam first. Dracos in hand wen my mans lurk
as soon as he Drops they'll be talkin bout the Pops like last weeks bags verse
Let off a .22 in his gut jus for dog even thinkin he cud go against me
dis Shit 'll rip the whole lining out ur stomach quicker than Rawn MD


Hahaha. The bags verse line was funny af to me.

Dave:
Born ready, You know my hands on the holster
Cred Take two steps and get clapped to the side of the head like he was dancing the salsa
& If He admits his wife is a hoe you’ better believe him
Her entire scheme is the wire theme - different dudes going way down in the hole for every season
Bitch can’t keep it to herself that’s why she walk like she got that ‘rupaul tuck’
Soon as she slide that back up a bunch of dudes start unloading like it’s a uhaul truck

Some of the lines were a little wordy but the punch was fire, I.e. the first two bars. Still, Fire verse. Almost quoted coogi too. Only line I really wasn’t digging was big pharma.

V/Dave


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