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LGI vs Zuch - LGI WINS BY NS

Netcees SOL Season II
Week 1

Due Thursday, Jun 30th

Minimum - 8 lines
Max - 12 lines
24hr ext given on request

NO biting
NO swaying
NO feeding
You MUST check in
Don't edit after your opponent has posted
2nd person to post can't edit after the first vote comes in
Don't be an idiot
Don't use your opponent's pic unless it's a pic battle
Agree on a line limit
May God have mercy on your souls

@White LGI @UPN Zuch

Ding ding the fight is on

Nigger time

You will feel the pain that revanon felt in 2002

Of coward you a special type, bet it's nice, to invite ya guest to fight..
Ext? You couldn't text tonight apparently frac had WCW sets to write,
I don't stress tha hype, I'm a loser? I guess you right
But Diss my wife? I got a money trian I married Wesley Snipes
While Matt's seething whitin, struggling to feed his kin...
Screaming GOD DAMMIT I NEVER WANT TO HEAR THE WORD VEVE AGAIN...
Crypto bags slack. nft stats lag..funds Matt lacks..
Went from dreams of stacking racks to sharing finnys toothbrush, cardboard box and back packs....
Put his tongue to the fire...blaze his innards
Just fried this con's verse like cooking my Lil spades some dinner
@UPN Zuch

Quote:

Originally Posted by White LGI (Post 822020)

Of coward you a special type, bet it's nice, to invite ya guest to fight..
Ext? You couldn't text tonight apparently frac had WCW sets to write,
Don't know what WCW sets are but I don't really need to, I get the punch and it's pretty good, delivered well
I don't stress tha hype, I'm a loser? I guess you right
But Diss my wife? I got a money trian I married Wesley Snipes
This is humorous but kinda self deprecating
While Matt's seething whitin, struggling to feed his kin...
Screaming GOD DAMMIT I NEVER WANT TO HEAR THE WORD VEVE AGAIN...
It's OK. Not bad. Assumed personal helps
Crypto bags slack. nft stats lag..funds Matt lacks..
Went from dreams of stacking racks to sharing finnys toothbrush, cardboard box and back packs....
As above
Put his tongue to the fire...blaze his innards
Just fried this con's verse like cooking my Lil spades some dinner
Don't get it
@UPN Zuch

The delivery comes off like you keyed/didn't try too hard, but that actually works for you because mostly the concepts were just OK and if you'd delivered them like you thought they were better than they were they would have come off worse for it. You seem like you might have some talent. Hope to see what you can do with more effort.

I know this is a joke verse but overall it shows you're a funny writer, good at pulling personal angles, but what you did with them pretty much relies on the reader being on discord. If you show for week 2 I'm hoping you use the same variety of angles but put a little more thought into execution. Glad you're here

You're fucking trash guy

Quote:

Originally Posted by Blue Bayou (Post 822143)

You're fucking trash guy

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