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Dope girl 02-13-2022 01:20 AM

The Dancing King poem
 
"He's in his sixties"
and still love dancing
He's the dancing king
He's a dancing champion
One of the hottest dancers ever seen
He's amazing on the dance floor
He dance better than other guys he compete with
He breakdance like B-boy
He step dance like stepper

This is a poem

Candy 02-15-2022 08:14 AM

nice i like the final line the lil hot stepper diddy at the end gave it some pep

but you can def feel the royalty of the dance and the fluincy of the dance

Dope girl 02-15-2022 12:17 PM

Thanks for the feedback love


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