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Wise Wiggles 11-13-2021 11:05 AM

glow sparingly
 
Head on a spear. Grinding the fuck out it. Wrecking the gears
Testament: tears
Cool with a couple ice caps, rest of ya weird
Magic trick way affection disappear
Replica mirror edge of the sphere
Clear & present, the medicine's Here
Out the well we go, can raise hell if you're down
So linked to this soul-ink
Welcome to skeleton town
Bones clink on the elephant sound
You remember how the gelatin bounce..
Allegorically? Dorothy? fell with the house
My muse my nymph. Gotta golem with it. Times precious.
And their prime essence is vibe wrecker in five seconds
I bless it. Unconsciously gesture mundra upon zombie armada
Ain't a damn thing got in my armor. Keep your toxic bravado
And all Hell to Heaven. Zombies in slumber
Copying other's Self-expression
Repertoire breath control portal grow
You know the aura glows in floral codes for the oracles
Forty four locos and the fortress floor explode
So whats the magick thing? This magi thinks? Magic beans?
Or brooms , lamps or carpets
They all symbolize items the vampire targets
Fuck your cursed subversive mantra harness
Suffer. Brand. Of. Karma.
Had your hands on all of it
That cancer crawling in. Taking all of it
Sacred hall slave-aholic
All the ghosts scared of me. Flow therapy
Want to go there with me?
Lotta days gotta pace Self - glow sparingly
And on ocassion it hurts the soul when you take it personal
You wanna change the universal flow
Like an invasive mirage. Give all to something, no trace of the product
Not a slave to the odds
But all the goddesses want to play games with the gods
Do wrong and say that it's not
Well, that energy is marked, traced and tracked. You're not taking it off
Faking the sauce
Thunder clap - ancient applaud
Summer passed. Lumberjack- making it fall
So distractive, scrambled pressure omelet
While Eye Tri to practice ever-calmness
Then the hawk flies
Got you cross-eyed
They say you should. Have seen the red flags when you fall victim to demons
Um little secret, most don't understand energies residual agreements
NOT. So. Simple to leave it
TrinityGenie , put all towards one - give it meaning
yet all the saint's wisdom ain't make him listen
creation takes discipline. most are naked/ignorant
High life. Fuck the mainstream
Taking daydreamers on night rides
Know what's right. Know what's left
Cant go indepth. Your under soul arrest
Tragedy stricken. Rickity rackety. Full of webs
Serpent twisting twerkalicious swerving in n out of blurbs and glitches
Can't help but to lounge with sheep that's found in the zZzz's
It's a fountain of trees. Stay trying to count on what leaves

Geno 11-24-2021 02:48 AM

Oh, how ive missed you so. I used to love writing this way. Now this style is scarce. But you do it so well. Fucking awesome wise ways

El Muffin 11-24-2021 08:16 PM

Youve gotten better

veritas 11-25-2021 11:46 PM

The eye tri line was ether damn

Pharaohs Army 02-14-2023 12:33 AM

up
* reserved for feed dis week
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(2023 NEW FEED)

Really wish I saw this1 over a year ago Wise...
YOU have been/ are doing things that I do, (&like to do) & Others do &(like to do)...and that IS
Constantly Connecting Quick-hitting rhymez, whilst keeping the flow AND creativity/phraseology that makes the reader inquisitive and/or "relatable" on one end, impressed & possibly mind-fucked on the high end (of the sprectrum)... lol

And NO not every single line or couplet or 3-4 line block will be AS dope as some b4 or after it, but youuu sir keep it up for QUITE a while...in your history of writing
(OBVIOUSLy way better when you spend time & write/edit VS. a quicker-key)...
And based on the quality content here, I'd say the former was employed on this date, at the end of 2021...(u maybe) Really took some time to "make it fit", etc.

You're phraseology is inspiring, something myself &others' aspire for...
So distractive, scrambled pressure omelet
So many sick rhymes/phrasez in 'dis inquisitive/INSTRUCTIVE piece, lol.
But this one sticks out...

And, on an egotistical note, as some of you may know, I enjoy browsing the lime because of all the "connections"/avatar/pics/friends/links/walls, SOOO the CONTENT of this relates to MOST writers,,,,but especially me as I "ride" you hard all the way to the sunset on thisss verse's feed.. ONLY cuz I think it's more polished than some of your other drops when you were droppin'. and the phrasing is vintage W.W. BECAUSE it was strong Top 2 Bottom... didn't have a Wise-quick-key-we'll keep that1 in there hiccup...(not that there's many of those; just addressing the noticeable "quality gulfs").

Top Notch and Every1 should read, so I've upped after missing it.!
Inspiring, breh...Not perfect but gettin' there

neeeeextt*********


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