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veritas 10-29-2021 03:48 PM

So do we really think?
 
It’s like what Pain taught Naruto
It’s like what Naruto taught Pain
It’s nothing new under the sun
It’s always the same old thing
So you try to find the fun
And run your little race
But trees come from the air
So it’s either absorbed back into the sun
Or let the maggots eat your face
It’s to the point that any sort of style feels confining
Its the anointment that reports the miles keep grinding
Never a disappointment. Sever with perfect timing.
We can get after it. But every inch of this craft, I master it.
Praise Jesus of Nazareth. It’s a sinch to adapt towards avarice,
But who can withstand the lifespan seeking only gratitude?
Aka let V fix your stupid attitude.
Now whose mad at you? Feeling scolded and defensive?
If you hold all the cards why act molded as pensive?
As cold as each sentence. Colder even. Event horizon. Leaving.
Sooooo……really think for once your thoughts aren’t just facts cuz u think em
Woooooaaaaahhhh…..skirt skirt dual nine Kriss Kross jump if u blinking

corleone 10-30-2021 12:02 AM

this ish was corny bro.. hate to say it but it was flat out wack.. not sayin you suck but this lacked flow, imagery, and pretty much everything else.. peace

veritas 10-30-2021 08:15 AM

Any suggestions?


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