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emurgencee 10-01-2021 09:22 AM

Never Say Never
 
Life spent pitted in the trenches, a defenseless soul
Spinning gold notes from a pencils stroke
Drenched in hope
Programmed to achieve perfection
Leaving blessings within each seed im nesting
Succeed im destined!
Thoughts more clever than ever
From the root of creativity, leaving veterans severed
Searching every measure to find my mind at leisure
That's like catching butterflies with the finest tweezers
Finding creatures hung from these webs I spun
Combined with sketch1ne,
We formed the deadliest bunch
Leaving aliens lumped,
Standing eye to eye with the gods,
Defying the odds, going to war equipped with lightening rods
Shining with the brightest of stars, unbury the treasure
This culture's better than ever
NEVER SAY NEVER!!!

veritas 10-01-2021 09:54 AM


Pakistani Hand Cannon 10-07-2021 12:18 AM

was undecided on the first few lines

didnt hate them, didnt like them

& then...

Quote:

Thoughts more clever than ever
From the root of creativity, leaving veterans severed
Searching every measure to find my mind at leisure
That's like catching butterflies with the finest tweezers
absolute fuckin bunk - stopped reading there


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