-IONS rough draft. To be recorded.
 

From your verse I Sense Devastation
I'm under Sedation from Several Medications
Practicing Intense Meditation for personal Edification
Salutations
My Speculation is that my Reputation is good in this Secular Nation
In front of this Congregation
Much to my Imagination, & Elation you're a text Abomination
The Gyration of the test tube didn't stop the Titration
Now, I commence with Great Communication which will Make you do Gesticulations from my Incantations
Here to win your Devotion
I will be the cause of your Ruination
Concocting Magic Potions from Plants in the Ocean
Allow me to give an example of my Ascension
I'll put you in Detention if I'm ever Mentioned
Allow me to give a Demonstration of my Teleportation
It will be a great Sensation when I perform your Annihilation
Put your body in the ground after Asphyxiation, then begin Excavation
I spit it faster than a Croatian, or an Asian, but I'm So Patient
You can hear me on the Radio Station (or Television), coming at you from a great Elevation
Make music in Synchronization after Preparation, Volition, Conviction, and Determination
It will result in Elation and a conscious Separation
Good enough for your Satiation
What will be your Condition after I give you the Prescription, and Ammunition?
It’s Description is inscribed with my Diction
And ALL my Intuition
I give you Permission to stick to your Convictions
Put you on the best Nutrition so your body runs like a clean Ignition
Put you on shrooms so you have substantial Visions
Let’s go ahead and Demolition (the Demarcation on) the Partition
Don’t worry it won’t be a Violation and it won’t cause Friction
You’ll have to Ration your Elation if you go on Vacation for Recreation
This beat is Activation
w/ a lil’ bit ‘o Sophistication
It’s like a volcanic Eruption, or a tornado’s Suction
Think about the Coalition that created the Emancipation Proclamation
After the Succession of Secessions, for slavery’s Cessation
After its Creation came its Elimination
You should have the Suspicion that rap is my Infatuation
It’s a game of Attrition
No need for Contrition or Stagnation
It’s all about Evolution in this Vocation
Stagnation will result in Emaciation
My Inclination is I’m a Bastion of Revolution

I mean what you’re doing here is cool, I like how the words play off of each other it was nicely done in that respect, felt kinda like Eminem’s infinite. Kind of just a showmanship of vocabulary and I did enjoy it in that aspect. Feel like the flow might get lost in audio just because of the sheer amount of content you’re packing per bar, although I haven’t heard you deliver it over a beat yet so I’ll reserve my opinion on that.

It was cool for what it was, don’t think it necessarily broke any molds but it’ll all come down to how everything is delivered on the audio side of things if it’s a truly good product or not

Keep spitting

@Adverse
Thanks.

Yeah it's hard to spit and it doesn't sound great. Not sure about the audio anymore. We'll see.

lmaoooo

this absolutely killed me for some reason