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Yes
..its simple once you figure it out
That bone crunch and torn ligament sound Throwing punches, fist whistle -kapow! Temper tantrum, not sure what this ones about Collectible handgun his son picked up from the ground Target practice, lives plucked from the crowd The shoulder holster so swaggy, one tucked in his trousers The boy dont monkey around, his gun swing from the hip Silencer on the tip, safety off, talk with the clip Weightless words get lost in the wind, floating away Actions speak louder anyway, so observe what im saying Poppin off, shock and awe, verbs, action words, entertainment Ungh |
Now record it. You know that's what gotta happen next
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lucy was 7 and wore a head of blue barrett
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City born into this world
With no knowledge and no regrets |
Smooth flow as always. Enjoyed some of the sensory bits you included in the opening bars, heard the sounds you were conveying like they were in my ear. Love a piece that can do that. Content wise it wasn’t super deep or nothing but just a smooth ride through and through
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