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Geno 08-06-2021 12:58 AM

Yes
 
..its simple once you figure it out
That bone crunch and torn ligament sound
Throwing punches, fist whistle -kapow!
Temper tantrum, not sure what this ones about
Collectible handgun his son picked up from the ground
Target practice, lives plucked from the crowd
The shoulder holster so swaggy, one tucked in his trousers

The boy dont monkey around, his gun swing from the hip
Silencer on the tip, safety off, talk with the clip
Weightless words get lost in the wind, floating away
Actions speak louder anyway, so observe what im saying
Poppin off, shock and awe, verbs, action words, entertainment


Ungh

Objective 08-07-2021 06:29 PM

Now record it. You know that's what gotta happen next

Ouch 08-15-2021 11:30 PM

lucy was 7 and wore a head of blue barrett

Geno 08-17-2021 04:59 AM

City born into this world
With no knowledge and no regrets

Adverse 08-22-2021 04:11 AM

Smooth flow as always. Enjoyed some of the sensory bits you included in the opening bars, heard the sounds you were conveying like they were in my ear. Love a piece that can do that. Content wise it wasn’t super deep or nothing but just a smooth ride through and through


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