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Sharp 07-05-2021 09:56 PM

MetaSin vs Cereal - METASIN WINS
 
The Summer Classic



Due: Thursday, 7/8 @ 11:59 PST
24hr ext available but must be requested before verse is due
Line Limit: 10-16 lines
*can increase if both agree
NO biting
NO swaying
NO feeding
Don't edit after your opponent has posted
2nd person to post can't edit after the first vote comes in
Don't be an idiot
Don't use your opponent's pic unless it's a pic battle
May God have mercy on your souls

@Loot @Cereal

Cereal 07-07-2021 03:00 AM

checkety checko

Cereal 07-07-2021 07:46 PM

to me meta is a menace to society
il put berretta's through his fade - hold the sides - cheese
my cabinets full of bottles the metasin just drips
i asked bugs bunny for his carrots and loot still smelt like shit
a fake faggot fanning - hallmark card of a name
when i said rogger i didnt mean i wanted a kid to copy - and start licking paste
im predicted a loss - so ill get this out chore way
and carry his verse in an iron maiden - feed his periods to the slaves
theres not much more in the tank - this abbots been around
i would quote a tupac song but this heather would just dumb it down

Loot 07-08-2021 07:15 AM

u stay clear of the twat. unless its yours bc you're here for the cocks
u treat lonely nights like a kids breakfast... pullin toys out of the cereal box.
it's clear that you've not learned to repent
I don't get these verses u sent...
if u cried me a river it'd look like ouch trying to tell you about current events
but i ain't here to rock the boat, bc its clear you're not a joke
mental illness is no laughing matter, you've persevered, that shit is dope!...
as all that shit yo momma smoked from the first day her pussy parted...
youre so wack i took 4 entire bars just to say that you're retarded.
u did the same in ten that u wrote. as if u wouldn't be ruined
now amending his hopes...
which, from the start, is what he should've been doin.

Blue Bayou 07-08-2021 11:35 AM

Cereal props for dropping early but nothing great punchline wise... keep at it

Meta great to see you back... opener was funny and a cool concept , ouch was a funny site ref bar, amending was a nice smooth wordplay that worked well in slang.... strong wording throughout

Meta wins

UPN Zuch 07-08-2021 12:08 PM

I mean, cereal verse was better than the last one I read. Some cool ideas but nothing really connected for me.


Meta, opener was dope. Could tell you were playing around a little. Good wording throughout.


Vote meta

Mac 07-08-2021 12:15 PM

some clear improvements from Cereal compared to his last verse. keep doing your thing


u stay clear of the twat. unless its yours bc you're here for the cocks
u treat lonely nights like a kids breakfast... pullin toys out of the cereal box.
u did the same in ten that u wrote. as if u wouldn't be ruined
now amending his hopes...
which, from the start, is what he should've been doin.

decent stuff, light verse

v. metasin

UserName 07-08-2021 02:10 PM

Yeah Cereal this was better than the last battle, while Meta I think came worse than the last battle lol. But strangely, still enough to win.

Vote - MetaSin

Saint 07-08-2021 10:42 PM

Metasin won w his opener, Ouch line was funny..
Cereal i see what youre doing. Not ready yet.

Vote Loot

Swerve 07-10-2021 09:54 PM

Cereal didn't really throw any sort of creative punch, while the first 2 bars alone from Meta killed it.

V/ Meta


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