Netcees

Netcees (http://netcees.org/index.php)
-   Open Mic Section (http://netcees.org/forumdisplay.php?f=6)
-   -   Unknown Cooperations (http://netcees.org/showthread.php?t=14841)

Mr. J 09-01-2013 08:28 PM

Unknown Cooperations
 
The verbiage is care-free but the mood isn't
can't tell how it all happened or who did it
used to be hard bars kicked to a smooth rhythm
left each MC ate, a menace straight up, new fitted
old kicks sitting high in the laboratory
diabetic hooks caused the end of that story...
so since Nate Dogg left, I been hoping to witness yo' death
couldn't stay tuned in, cramped up should exercise yo' self
fitness for health, should understand the prices of wealth
precise likeness to dividends in decline, no business, no help
disregard for savings and what the idea does
got high in plain sight felt what happened to Aaliyah just rush






















to be continued

Geno 09-01-2013 11:32 PM

first half was fire, then you got lazy

would like to see sometheing more coherant from you. something less random thoughts, and more precision execution.

cool drop though, always a pleasure. short, sweet, to the point. still waiting for something irregular from you though

Mr. J 09-05-2013 06:57 PM

thnx breh

CopyPat 09-06-2013 04:22 AM

didn't really get this man??? needs to be fully explained/finished

Split 09-06-2013 07:06 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Mr. J (Post 139259)
The verbiage is care-free but the mood isn't
can't tell how it all happened or who did it
used to be hard bars kicked to a smooth rhythm
left each MC ate, a menace straight up, new fitted
old kicks sitting high in the laboratory
diabetic hooks caused the end of that story...
so since Nate Dogg left, I been hoping to witness yo' death
couldn't stay tuned in, cramped up should exercise yo' self
fitness for health, should understand the prices of wealth
precise likeness to dividends in decline, no business, no help
>didnt like
disregard for savings and what the idea does
got high in plain sight felt what happened to Aaliyah just rush


to be continued

Everything above the line I didnt like, was fire. idk I don't have much to add or throw out there but it was cool to read, and simple without being simplistic. The bold line was my favorite in a long time.. Thought you killed this tho

When's the next Issue come out?


All times are GMT -4. The time now is 02:04 PM.

Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.8.5
Copyright ©2000 - 2025, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.
User Alert System provided by Advanced User Tagging (Lite) - vBulletin Mods & Addons Copyright © 2025 DragonByte Technologies Ltd.