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Adverse 01-04-2021 09:28 AM

WEEK SIX: MMLP 3-2 vs NYCSPITZ 0-0 MMLP WINS VIA NS OPEN FOR FEED
 
AOWL Season IX WEEK SIX

@MMLP @NYCSPITZ

Verse Due: THURSDAY JANUARY 7TH @ 11:59PM


Line min: 10

Max: 60


Rules:http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=145451[/b]

Topic:
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GOOD LUCK

Adverse 01-06-2021 11:22 AM

@NYCSPITZ you here?

MMLP 01-08-2021 09:52 AM

We’ll see you on the other side …

this is Ride or die,
felt make-believe
but it was plain to see I was flying high
the skies alight right from the jump
no sign of life with no one above
things looking up,
but then all of a sudden they’re coming at ya
running faster than Forest Gump
I'm on the run, rummaging
fumbling, from the flight at the start
to fights in the yards
once the pressure come on this treasure hunt
but the fire in my belly had ignited the spark
was on the right trail but still wide of the mark
the signs were alarming as I made my descent
it was a demand to say the least, but a challenge to complete
took the wind out my sails but still landed on my feet
soon we battled in the streets
making amends in taking revenge
that was certain to start a chain of events
a race to the end as it was prophesied
spotted life, dotted I’s but it wasn’t what we signed up for
some had crossed the line as shots were fired,
missioned to stay aground
and make it out from this toxic environment
My circle closing tighter, tying up the loosened ends,
the looting stemmed
from losing friends with who we’d feud against
and that triggered a desire to win
the fire within
doing the rounds like a recycling bin
through hell fire and brimstone, we’re the horsemen,
the reinforcements
Duty called to proceed with caution
meant the melees were simply blown out of proportion
it blew em to bits, had to finish and shoot em up quick
I was losing my shit!
the man of the jungle trapped in a rumble
soon I learned to shoot from the hip
loosened abit,
no doubt the loadouts made my character switch
the damage created a savage in infamy
a passage of history I’d chosen to write
it’s sad what it did to me
but it opened my eyes
long story short this was short story longer than time
the moments revived
A warzone, foretold in the mode of the same old story
bowing out in a blaze of glory
soon, my life flashed before me..
all I remember,
was a lethal-looking semtex that came towards me
and with this lethal weapon
id seen the ending through hindsight of a new patch
second chance to be a better man
too bad, I shouldn’t of moved back, but just couldn’t hide

“ill see you on the other side, lads I’m in the Gulag,”

Adverse 01-10-2021 01:40 AM

MMLP wins via no show, give him some love

fraze 01-11-2021 11:09 PM

Just wanted to say this was one of my favorite pieces this week. Dope rhymes and imagery. Digging the internal rhymes. Looking forward to reading more.

Universe 01-13-2021 06:04 AM

Yeah, MMLP is one of my favorite writers here. The metaphorical weight behind this is heavy af... the POV of a bullet can be found everywhere in this verse and it just blends in so well with the narrative that you could miss it if not looking. It really is brilliant stuff.

MMLP = future champ. (If he stays signed in haha)

Great work here my man. Too many quotables.


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