REMATCH: Fraze VS Eviction II FRAZE WINS
 

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@fraze

@Eviction

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They told me, “Shorten up your bars.” But this week is the wrong instance.
Cause this snitch will turn bitch REALLY quick if he’s up against a long sentence
No doubt this rat gets snapped in half for letting his mouth flap,
Put cheese down to see metal make his spine crack… I call that laying a mousetrap
Recounting times you’ve pounded chicks, one is high as the count can get
Before that figure gets inflated like the doll your mother found you with
Don’t care if friends surrounding ya, our schemes ain’t the same caliber.
I’ll put the hammer to your melon, wet the crowd, and stage the scene to frame Gallagher
Hafta slum to compete with this geek. The irony’s deep as I’m ending his boring run.
I’m putting this bum on the streets while granting the league an Eviction moratorium

He’s never impactful, so I was puzzled when they fucking said fraze won.
Talkin shit about statements, bitch you’re just jealous cuz u never made one.
He has been hanging on to old concepts too long, it’s time to cut the cord.
Zuch got his vannah white swag on, and still can’t get a fraze on the board.
Think you have a position here? That wack shit won’t earn you a spot, clown.
The way you rode scout in the champ match, u have missionary locked down.
You said you don’t respect my opinions, cool because we respect yours less.
Cuz Your word is as good as lighting a bag of shit and sitting it on our doorstep.
Giving him the L is an easy decision, I’m about to catch a body like a trust fall.
u can hit his mom up and tell her I killed him, there still wouldn’t be a tough call

fraze -

They told me, “Shorten up your bars.” But this week is the wrong instance.
Cause this snitch will turn bitch REALLY quick if he’s up against a long sentence
Recounting times you’ve pounded chicks, one is high as the count can get
Before that figure gets inflated like the doll your mother found you with

Those were cool. Mousetrap was a little on the simple side, Gallagher was ok but felt statement-ish, moratorium was ok as well, overall nothing flat out bad.

Eviction -

He has been hanging on to old concepts too long, it’s time to cut the cord.
Zuch got his vannah white swag on, and still can’t get a fraze on the board.

I wanted to like this verse more, because I think stylistically, I prefer your wording over fraze's - but you had some headscratchers here. Your opener was fine, but fairly light. The scout riding/missionary idea was a whiff, and i just wasnt feeling the execution of the idea. the doorstep line was just a hard no from me, and the closer was bland.

Overall, v - fraze. Liked more of his verse.

They told me, “Shorten up your bars.” But this week is the wrong instance.
Cause this snitch will turn bitch REALLY quick if he’s up against a long sentence
this is not bad, i think if you undercapitallized REALLY and changed it to just real, it woulda hit a little harder imo
No doubt this rat gets snapped in half for letting his mouth flap,
Put cheese down to see metal make his spine crack… I call that laying a mousetrap
needs more misdirection, rat, snapped in half, cheese, spine crack, i already knew mousetrap was coming
Recounting times you’ve pounded chicks, one is high as the count can get
Before that figure gets inflated like the doll your mother found you with
just ok
Don’t care if friends surrounding ya, our schemes ain’t the same caliber.
I’ll put the hammer to your melon, wet the crowd, and stage the scene to frame Gallagher
seen a lot of gallagher lines before, again hammer, melon, wet the crowd, ur already spelling gallagher out
Hafta slum to compete with this geek. The irony’s deep as I’m ending his boring run.
I’m putting this bum on the streets while granting the league an Eviction moratorium
hmm, i like the concept

Vs

He’s never impactful, so I was puzzled when they fucking said fraze won.
Talkin shit about statements, bitch you’re just jealous cuz u never made one.
ok
He has been hanging on to old concepts too long, it’s time to cut the cord.
Zuch got his vannah white swag on, and still can’t get a fraze on the board.
ehh i would have tried a diff angle
Think you have a position here? That wack shit won’t earn you a spot, clown.
The way you rode scout in the champ match, u have missionary locked down.
ok
You said you don’t respect my opinions, cool because we respect yours less.
Cuz Your word is as good as lighting a bag of shit and sitting it on our doorstep.
miss
Giving him the L is an easy decision, I’m about to catch a body like a trust fall.
u can hit his mom up and tell her I killed him, there still wouldn’t be a tough call
not feelin

V/fraze I've got two ok bars. Fraze had better misses imo.

I got Fraze here


Better than your last couple verses. Wording is more crisp and you’re simplifying your concepts. All good things.


Eviction you were decent here. It just not enough in the stand out department. Didn’t have any haymakers which hurts extremely overall. Just a bunch of jabs that were slight hits or miss.


Vote Fraze