Netcees - WEEK 8: Fracture 2-1 VS Hotdogvendorman 2-1 FRACTURE WINS BY NS/ OPEN FOR FEED

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WEEK 8: Fracture 2-1 VS Hotdogvendorman 2-1 FRACTURE WINS BY NS/ OPEN FOR FEED

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Frac a rare vibe. Hear the snare by ya hairline
Now u have a little skull on ur shirt like punisher forgot to air dry
Not a picky eater. Ya weight fatalities dates
To women youre big boned.. Soon after he decided cali was safe
Watch how my blade makes the audience cry
Slash ya achilles. Have ya heel stand out like the Hollywood sign
Your tee tags got more Xs than me in the stands
Call u chedder bob the way you pass out after ya squeeze in the pants
Got ur girl crying when i enter her for grinding
Shirts off.. Her twins want me to play with them forever like the shining
Your last verse had me thinkin 'this fat dudes simple'
Read the mag.. If you were covered as much as me dates wouldnt leave thru a bathroom window
A frac diss throws you in a bad sitcho
I dont just roast hot dog.. I do it in the middle of camp crystal

I'll drop something tomorrow

Frac a rare vibe. Hear the snare by ya hairline
Now u have a little skull on ur shirt like punisher forgot to air dry
Your tee tags got more Xs than me in the stands
Call u chedder bob the way you pass out after ya squeeze in the pants
Got ur girl crying when i enter her for grinding
Shirts off.. Her twins want me to play with them forever like the shining
Your last verse had me thinkin 'this fat dudes simple'
Read the mag.. If you were covered as much as me dates wouldnt leave thru a bathroom window

This was all flames
First 3 esp.

opener was cool, seen punisher/skull flips the little added to it a bit.
thought the shining was dope, squeeze was solid
bathroom was funny, liked the execution of the covered concept
closer i felt needed a revision or scrapped altogether

Quote:

Originally Posted by Fracture (Post 793807)

Frac a rare vibe. Hear the snare by ya hairline
Now u have a little skull on ur shirt like punisher forgot to air dry
creative. this is pretty dope
Not a picky eater. Ya weight fatalities dates
To women youre big boned.. Soon after he decided cali was safe
nice concept. not a fan of the wording but do you
Watch how my blade makes the audience cry
Slash ya achilles. Have ya heel stand out like the Hollywood sign
a little light to me but cool idea
Your tee tags got more Xs than me in the stands
Call u chedder bob the way you pass out after ya squeeze in the pants
ok
Got ur girl crying when i enter her for grinding
Shirts off.. Her twins want me to play with them forever like the shining
this is funny.
Your last verse had me thinkin 'this fat dudes simple'
Read the mag.. If you were covered as much as me dates wouldnt leave thru a bathroom window
not feeling
A frac diss throws you in a bad sitcho
I dont just roast hot dog.. I do it in the middle of camp crystal
also misses for me

Quotes: punisher, big boned, shining
Close: Hollywood sign, cheddar bob

Started out with fire and gradually fell off. Still a nice verse