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UPN Zuch 11-09-2020 04:05 AM

WEEK 6: Kuality 1-0 VS Ahriman 0-0 AHRIMAN
 
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Minimum: 10

Maximum: 16

Verses due 11:59pm EST November 12, 2020 (Thursday)

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Good luck, gentlemen

Kuality 11-09-2020 10:17 AM

10
Gluck

Ahriman 11-10-2020 07:27 AM

Check

Ahriman 11-12-2020 12:28 PM

May need the ext

Kuality 11-12-2020 03:00 PM

Need ext too

Kuality 11-13-2020 04:52 AM

I’m way too modern with style. Ya flows not mind captivation
Mine like Twista doin a podcast n niggaz on phone playin at 2x speed when listenin
He keeps white people on a comfort level and commends.
We see owls reporting crimes. When His black buds pull 911 on his white friends
And your bitch. Screams for cream, then whining
I'm blocking her mouth from breathing. Like she took my dick when scuba diving.
Let's not even talk about decent careers. Its a capital loss
If software is eating the world.Your peers got trouble digesting applesauce.
Yeah he's a beast with a powdered face.He's airing out the NBL clearly. When verses are due every friday in the Outer space.

Ahriman 11-13-2020 10:40 PM

W/this Jurassic gun I cut! Watch the way I scalp’em
We’ll neva see Kuality Control, bars ain’t had Contact since that J5 Album!
No Family Matters when this Ruger go & rounds blow
Blick like Steve Urkel... watch it Geek out & ruin your whole household
I’ve champed tourneys & leagues while this bro light
Don’t be surprised Kual If I win! Since you ain’t done had one your whole life
I gotta Beat Sheet of legends. You on some weak shit
Your Beat sheet Is crusty towels & your mother cleans it
You deff ain’t a masked legend, this vulture is poon
I never cry, but punching your face is the Answer coz u ain’t got Culture in you

hotdogvendorman 11-14-2020 11:35 PM

I chuckled at the urkel line.. Not super good but just funny enough
Beat sheet was cool tho

Vs

Nothing tbh.. Wasnt feeling anything concept wise or the execution

Vote/Ah

evaD 11-15-2020 02:27 AM

Kuslity started with a non rhymer which isn’t great. Concepts were pretty bizarre and nothing hit for me. Ahriman had better style and wording. Best sheet would be amazing if I’d heard the term beat sheet before. Not sure if I put that down to not hearing it or it being made up. Anyway,

Vote - Ahriman

fraze 11-15-2020 07:28 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Kuality (Post 792291)
I’m way too modern with style. Ya flows not mind captivation
Mine like Twista doin a podcast n niggaz on phone playin at 2x speed when listenin
this doesn't rhyme. like the concept but punch would be better if worded to diss your opponent
He keeps white people on a comfort level and commends.
We see owls reporting crimes. When His black buds pull 911 on his white friends
not sure where you were going with this. it rhymes but lacks cleverness
And your bitch. Screams for cream, then whining
I'm blocking her mouth from breathing. Like she took my dick when scuba diving.
nice concept. wording could be better
Let's not even talk about decent careers. Its a capital loss
If software is eating the world.Your peers got trouble digesting applesauce.
not feeling this
Yeah he's a beast with a powdered face.
He's airing out the NBL clearly. When verses are due every friday in the Outer space.
didn't like this

Quote:

Originally Posted by Ahriman (Post 792419)
W/this Jurassic gun I cut! Watch the way I scalp’em
We’ll neva see Kuality Control, bars ain’t had Contact since that J5 Album!
i see what you're trying to do but wording is off. cool concept.
No Family Matters when this Ruger go & rounds blow
Blick like Steve Urkel... watch it Geek out & ruin your whole household
this is ok
I’ve champed tourneys & leagues while this bro light
Don’t be surprised Kual If I win! Since you ain’t done had one your whole life
ok wp. might be played on him. weird wording
I gotta Beat Sheet of legends. You on some weak shit
Your Beat sheet Is crusty towels & your mother cleans it
ok punch
You deff ain’t a masked legend, this vulture is poon
I never cry, but punching your face is the Answer coz u ain’t got Culture in you
this feels like random nameplay filler.

Kuality had scuba diving. Need to work on aiming your punches at your opponent. It's not a battle if you're not dissing.

Ahriman had Steve Urkel and beat sheet. Mostly a consistent verse, didn't like the closer.

Vote: Ahriman

UserName 11-15-2020 08:28 AM

Ahri -

No Family Matters when this Ruger go & rounds blow
Blick like Steve Urkel... watch it Geek out & ruin your whole household
I gotta Beat Sheet of legends. You on some weak shit
Your Beat sheet Is crusty towels & your mother cleans it

Kuality -

And your bitch. Screams for cream, then whining
I'm blocking her mouth from breathing. Like she took my dick when scuba diving.

I'm being a little generous with Kuality's quotable above. There really wasnt much to be found in there that I liked, but the scuba diving line made me laugh at the sheer imagery of it. Ahri, cool little verse, dated material a bit. J5 line felt like something I'd read in like '01-'02. Still, beat sheet was cool. Material was kind of an entire level above Kuality's.

V - Ahriman

Scout 11-15-2020 08:30 AM

Kual

No standouts
Applesauce was funny but needed more, and better wording


Ahri

No Family Matters when this Ruger go & rounds blow
Blick like Steve Urkel... watch it Geek out & ruin your whole household
I gotta Beat Sheet of legends. You on some weak shit
Your Beat sheet Is crusty towels & your mother cleans it

Voting Ahriman

Kuality 11-15-2020 09:57 AM

Sry guys. Didnt have time. Wrote it quick from phone give arih the win. Posted so wouldnt count as a no show.

Ill post better next week.

Destroyer 11-15-2020 10:15 AM

Kual rusty as fuck if it’s the same guy
Wasn’t feeling much at all

Ahri wasn’t amazing but had punches that made connections
Pretty one sided

V/ahri


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