WEEK 6: Fraze 0-0 VS Fracture 0-0 FRACTURE WINS
 

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12 it is

I only scope the freshest bars. Worded crisp to hit the dopest
So if you diss a peer from Netcees… that’s really not the type of shit I’d notice (just saying)
You’ve been wack since… What was that match I saw Frac’ in, way back when?
Fracture would have been better by now if someone had ‘set him straight’ back then…
Your crew ain’t bout math like minus. Might get overexcited
And break down Frac’s shins with side kicks until his legs are divided...
Adding up the facts, you’ve never been a factor,
But I’ll raise the metal over beef like I’m uncovering a dinner platter...
No boy scout…. pull the big toy out and will let it blast
Keep Fracture under wraps with the stick like I’m earning my field medic badge
Zuch’s been slow with the mag. This week I’ll help make reviews quick then,
Fracture: ‘Reads like poor man’s version of Fraze with irrelevant shit mixed in’

Stop tryin im godly. Dont rhyme about shottys
You only know about barrels because I know bout hiding a body
Blow for blow ill have ur liver curdled
My sniping skills is That 70s show. Got u smoking out ur inner circle
I have a brock lesnar energy. Here to torch this nerd
Give ur bitch the kind of dick that got her like ric when the figure four is turned
Fractures the best while you dont matter just yet
Fraze put his life in jeapordy, now he alex trebek
You small time. W/ awkward puss rap
None of your verses shine theyre just hard to look at
This was easy. Ur effort was wasted
Im 1-0. Moving ahead.. But ur bodies gonna be at a separate location

Fraze

No boy scout…. pull the big toy out and will let it blast
Keep Fracture under wraps with the stick like I’m earning my field medic badge

Vs

Fracture

You small time. W/ awkward puss rap
None of your verses shine theyre just hard to look at
This was easy. Ur effort was wasted
Im 1-0. Moving ahead.. But ur bodies gonna be at a separate location

More quotables from Frac plus the rest of his verse was harder and more consistent to me
Fraze had a couple of bad misses.. that closer in particular.

Vote fracture

Fraze

Adding up the facts, you’ve never been a factor,
But I’ll raise the metal over beef like I’m uncovering a dinner platter...
No boy scout…. pull the big toy out and will let it blast
Keep Fracture under wraps with the stick like I’m earning my field medic badge

Frac shins had potential, wording was bad though


Fracture

Stop tryin im godly. Dont rhyme about shottys
You only know about barrels because I know bout hiding a body
Blow for blow ill have ur liver curdled
My sniping skills is That 70s show. Got u smoking out ur inner circle
Fractures the best while you dont matter just yet
Fraze put his life in jeapordy, now he alex trebek
You small time. W/ awkward puss rap
None of your verses shine theyre just hard to look at

Lol
Nice verse. Seemed effortless, yet efficient

Voting Fracture

I only scope the freshest bars. Worded crisp to hit the dopest
So if you diss a peer from Netcees… that’s really not the type of shit I’d notice (just saying)
wording is great but this is an old wp
You’ve been wack since… What was that match I saw Frac’ in, way back when?
Fracture would have been better by now if someone had ‘set him straight’ back then…
really like your wording again here tbh.. ok punch
Your crew ain’t bout math like minus. Might get overexcited
And break down Frac’s shins with side kicks until his legs are divided...
frac shins is played
Adding up the facts, you’ve never been a factor,
But I’ll raise the metal over beef like I’m uncovering a dinner platter...
played metal/beef idea
No boy scout…. pull the big toy out and will let it blast
Keep Fracture under wraps with the stick like I’m earning my field medic badge
with the stick flip made me think this is cool.. nice np
Zuch’s been slow with the mag. This week I’ll help make reviews quick then,
Fracture: ‘Reads like poor man’s version of Fraze with irrelevant shit mixed in’
ok use of letters

vs.

Stop tryin im godly. Dont rhyme about shottys
You only know about barrels because I know bout hiding a body
niiice.. good wit
Blow for blow ill have ur liver curdled
My sniping skills is That 70s show. Got u smoking out ur inner circle
fire
I have a brock lesnar energy. Here to torch this nerd
Give ur bitch the kind of dick that got her like ric when the figure four is turned
lol funny imagery
Fractures the best while you dont matter just yet
Fraze put his life in jeapordy, now he alex trebek
played
You small time. W/ awkward puss rap
None of your verses shine theyre just hard to look at
lmao set up is fun... good swag with a cool concept
This was easy. Ur effort was wasted
Im 1-0. Moving ahead.. But ur bodies gonna be at a separate location
this is DOPE.. fire concept



Fraze some cool wording but a couple played ideas... Frac welcome back, awesome verse... dope non chalant punches liked everything excpet jeopardy

Vote Frac

Fraze - fracture under wraps with this stick is FIRE. Metal over beef is almost.

Frac - wording here is what makes you elite. Hiding body, that 70s show is one of the best bars this season, rich flair was cute


Fracture wins here

Fraze: Dinner Platter worded to hit but light
Medic Badge was a quote, more shit like dat
other bars didn't do it for me
Frac Shins for example, nah
closer was a miss too..

Frac had 70s Show
ric flair ok different angle
Moving Ahead simple but flipped well
some of the setups felt lazy but u got it

Ive got Fracture

Vote Frac


Not a terrible battle, but Frac came with it. Liked most all his lines but that Ric Flair line had me like WOOOOO!

Fracture won...

i'm going to talk about his shitty lines vs the good ones...

You small time. W/ awkward puss rap
None of your verses shine theyre just hard to look at

garbage..

I have a brock lesnar energy. Here to torch this nerd
Give ur bitch the kind of dick that got her like ric when the figure four is turned

garbage

I have a brock lesnar energy. Here to torch this nerd
Give ur bitch the kind of dick that got her like ric when the figure four is turned

woo? i'm assuming... still not good...


but the rest was dope smoking in a circle like that 70's show I'm like Hyde but meaner... the barrel one and bodies and trebek shit was dope...


had to point out fracs shitty lines but i'm sure he knew his good lines were way better than dude would put up...


obviously v - T~R~E

that fracture stick bar was bonkers

buttt frac did his thing aside from trebek.. that ric flair line.. wooo. Grade A imagery, flying under the radar..

v frac

Moving ahead
Inner circle

Vs

Stick/fmb line

Frac straight to the point but very effective.. Some witty concepts .. Fraze just keep working at it.. That one quote was pretty nice.. Some more stuff on that level and you'll be fine

V frac

Fraze -

No boy scout…. pull the big toy out and will let it blast
Keep Fracture under wraps with the stick like I’m earning my field medic badge

Frac -

Stop tryin im godly. Dont rhyme about shottys
You only know about barrels because I know bout hiding a body
Blow for blow ill have ur liver curdled
My sniping skills is That 70s show. Got u smoking out ur inner circle
I have a brock lesnar energy. Here to torch this nerd
Give ur bitch the kind of dick that got her like ric when the figure four is turned
This was easy. Ur effort was wasted
Im 1-0. Moving ahead.. But ur bodies gonna be at a separate location

Frac did his fucking thing here. Inner circle, LOTB. Ric flair was hilarious, opener and closer were dope. You've got a way of wording that's minimalist but gets to the point, says the most but uses the least amount of words to do so. I enjoyed it.

Fraze, old ideas killed you. Your wording is actually pretty damn good, but the concepts themselves kill you dead from jump. I haven't seen a diss a peer line since like, longbar writers in 02. Still, I think with a little updating you could do well here - just freshen the concepts up a bit.

V - Frac

Frac got this quite comfortable. Fraze the name anagram bars are interesting but don’t really work as a diss or funny. Frac hard to look at bar was killer.

Vote - frac

Frac won. I agree with User and a couple others that Fraze has a lot of potential. The wording is pretty solid. Just need to improve on some of the concepts.

I can’t believe Frac dropped that Jeopardy line. But, top to bottom, his verse was better.

Frac wins.

fracture is actually dope.. the barrel line was fire.. on the other hand fraze's beef over metal was dope too.. but I got fracture here with more consistency.

looking forward to see more from both, fraze seems like he can pull fire if he wants to and fracture too

Got frac here
Fraze said “I come with the freshest bars” and then proceeded to drop like a whole verse of shit I’ve seen before
It wasn’t horrible but fracture was a lot well, fresher, for lack of a better term.
Standouts were 70s show, shine, and closer

V/frac