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UPN Zuch 11-09-2020 03:57 AM

WEEK 6: Defiant 1-0 VS Hotdogvendorman 1-0 HDVM WINS OPEN FOR FEED
 
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Good luck, gentlemen

Defiant 11-09-2020 01:00 PM

Hey 12?

hotdogvendorman 11-09-2020 10:50 PM

In..

hotdogvendorman 11-13-2020 12:38 AM

Extension plz.

hotdogvendorman 11-14-2020 12:06 AM

Something quick my bad...


NBL just hype shit from Blue, Orc and Zuch.. Fuck all the praise for these nerds..
Shit while I'm stirring the pot.. all this salty bitch Def can do is wait to be served..
I'm cooking up heat when I compete w a rhyme..
Ur abt to see Hotdog on a different kinda roll like that poppyseed shit they eat in the Chi..
Ur terrible Def plus whatever synonymous words you've discovered..
But it's no point splitting hairs when the ones in my bed are ur girls & ur mothers..
& I've never let a night w them waste..
Left their faces Flushed Nd sprayed on they asses too just like a bidet..
A beast w this.. Devoured plenty in cannibal mode..
Fuck I'm a whole different animal.. U just fuck a different animals hole..

Aero 11-14-2020 01:09 AM

Zuch, if we can get this closed.

sral 11-14-2020 03:33 AM

Deon still bringing some fresh shit

UPN Zuch 11-14-2020 03:51 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Aero (Post 792433)
Zuch, if we can get this closed.

No I’m keeping it open for feed.

Fracture 11-14-2020 05:02 AM

Lmao hotdog vendor with some entertainment. Good shit man

Kuality 11-14-2020 07:13 AM

Good to see you after all this while deon. Hope that youve been doing well. Nice verse. Drop often.

Scout 11-14-2020 07:53 AM

NBL just hype shit from Blue, Orc and Zuch.. Fuck all the praise for these nerds..
Shit while I'm stirring the pot.. all this salty bitch Def can do is wait to be served..
I'm cooking up heat when I compete w a rhyme..
Ur abt to see Hotdog on a different kinda roll like that poppyseed shit they eat in the Chi..
Ur terrible Def plus whatever synonymous words you've discovered..
But it's no point splitting hairs when the ones in my bed are ur girls & ur mothers..

This was all good
Especially splitting hairs. Not feeling the last couple but who cares
Keep grinding

fraze 11-15-2020 07:38 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by hotdogvendorman (Post 792429)
NBL just hype shit from Blue, Orc and Zuch.. Fuck all the praise for these nerds..
Shit while I'm stirring the pot.. all this salty bitch Def can do is wait to be served..
cool
I'm cooking up heat when I compete w a rhyme..
Ur abt to see Hotdog on a different kinda roll like that poppyseed shit they eat in the Chi..
wordy but funny
Ur terrible Def plus whatever synonymous words you've discovered..
But it's no point splitting hairs when the ones in my bed are ur girls & ur mothers..
cool wording but this is light to me
& I've never let a night w them waste..
Left their faces Flushed Nd sprayed on they asses too just like a bidet..
not feeling this
A beast w this.. Devoured plenty in cannibal mode..
Fuck I'm a whole different animal.. U just fuck a different animals hole..
harsh closer. cool

Nice verse.

UserName 11-15-2020 08:06 AM

first two lines were pure swag lol, loved it. poppyseed made me laugh too, side note - i cant find those rolls anywhere here in VA.

some of the lines are a little long-winded for my fat lungs but i dig them nonetheless.

Good shit, Deon.


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