WEEK 5: Bleak 0-0 VS Hotdogvendorman 0-0 HDVM WINS BY NS OPEN FOR FEED
 

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Good luck, gentlemen

Yo..

oh shit yeah 10

@bleak @hotdogvendorman what’s up

I'm about to post

@bleak requested an extension

Bleak?..
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He don't satisfy his woman... it's divorce to come..
See I think her spirit bomb.. Even pounded her pussy w the force of one..
Now I'm back on the scene & leaving stuff dismantled..
But Im outta the loop.. Cuz that vibrating condom was too much for her to handle..
Yo I've spent countless hours romancing the hoes..
& with bleak they can't count less hours til they want this man to go home..
I ain't messing around. He won't be found left in the ground..
Ima leave bleak in a lake, b.. once I'm finished dissecting this clown..
When my team tryna ride I'm w it... The vibes apparent..
When ur team tryna ride U got more pressing issues dialing 911 jst like a Karen..
I'm at home on the throne. U been faced against greatness..
I'll leave ur frame unhinged..then move a new couch N fridge thru the space thats created..
Challenge? please.. Bleak you so wack it's seen..
I run a higher risk w diabetes, obesity or tight rope walkin on a balance beam..
Punchs aint working for shit. Uve betrayed all writers..
The Economy evn saw a spike in furlough days the way you lay off- fire..

Spirit bomb line was doooope.

I think the pressing issues line could’ve been reworded a little to be dope as well. Fresh concept tho.

Good to see you back at it, bro.

You’re gonna do just fine here.


Good stuff my guy.