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UPN Zuch 11-01-2020 06:42 PM

WEEK 5: Destroyer 3-1 VS iSpaz 1-2 DESTROYER WINS
 
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Good luck, gentlemen

iSpaz 11-01-2020 11:15 PM

Yo goin 12

Destroyer 11-05-2020 06:53 PM

Caught ur L last week... u ended bloodied like a tampon dude
u even came w/ twister bars & still couldn’t put one hand on blue
got swords, knives, and poisons all designed for quick kills
So... adderall up and it equals me getting a spaz to sit still
I’m highly ranked in line to champ. It’s light work to finish u
u been here for five years and we’re all still like who the fuck is this dude?
I stay blazed, kid. wax, oil or flower, there’s smoke on my breath
and this dopamine I feel a higher level of reward when I choke u to death
got a new piece just for this battle. it’s straight doom for this shifty fag
u gonna be the first to watch this mag blossom like it’s the new Mississippi flag
des a real life shooter, while u just pretend to be
&&& the four got ten shots that will ironically ensure u remember me

UPN Zuch 11-05-2020 07:04 PM

iSpaz verse:


Beat you once, bunch of years ago. Came back nd I was stunned.
..I would say your past ur prime, but it looks like you never had one.
GI Joe shit. Got the four fifth and I'm ready to peel at this whole place.
Lollllllllll @ Destro..Guess its fitting the way I'm puttin steel thru your face.
Not laughing with you, they laughing at you. They know I hit faster.
You a Clown to the site... Ironic how you won't EVER have the IT factor.
And when I come you run. This inbred could wish it wasn't.
I'll have that clip extended fam.. shots for you and that distant cousin.
I'll fade this pussy. Fuck the internet we could settle this.
Come thru nd I'll let the knuckles fly.. nd it ain't sonic 3 sega genesis.
Yeah I came cold. I'll slump and fold you cuz ur my main trigger.
..And when I break all ur limbs before I shoot it's just to show you a pain killer.

Fracture 11-05-2020 09:56 PM

Distant cousin line was pretty dope ispaz... Rest of the verse missed


Destro was better. Nothing super dope but nothing real shitty either. Spaz to sit still was good... A little awkward wording.

Vote- destro for a more consistent verse. Mostly superior wording

Ajax 11-05-2020 10:11 PM

This was tough to call. Both had pretty awkward wording and not much in terms of witty concepts. Destroyer relied on forced wordplay a couple times... and Spaz relied on gun bars, which rarely work unless they’re really well done. I think Destroyer had the line of the battle with mag blossom... but, I wasn’t a huge fan of either. Step it up, fellas.

Still, I think Destroyer took this by a hair. He wins.

Adverse 11-06-2020 11:33 AM

Honestly thought Destroyer won this pretty handily.

I don’t feel like anything honestly eviscerated your opponent but everything hit solid. Punch after punch, you left no room for a mistake from Spaz

And honestly Spaz wasn’t as solid but I can tell he hasn’t lot of potential just needs some harder concepts and more direct ones. Destro was on the right path though it’s pretty played. It factor and distant cousins was cool but not enough here

V/Des

Universe 11-06-2020 11:59 AM

Looking forward to this one... iSpaz is getting better weekly and Destroyer is coming off of a tough loss last week, but he always rebounds nicely.


Destroyer:

"Caught ur L last week... u ended bloodied like a tampon dude
u even came w/ twister bars & still couldn’t put one hand on blue
"

"got swords, knives, and poisons all designed for quick kills
So... adderall up and it equals me getting a spaz to sit still
"

"I stay blazed, kid. wax, oil or flower, there’s smoke on my breath
and this dopamine I feel a higher level of reward when I choke u to death
"



iSpaz:

"Not laughing with you, they laughing at you. They know I hit faster.
You a Clown to the site... Ironic how you won't EVER have the IT factor
."

"I'll fade this pussy. Fuck the internet we could settle this.
Come thru nd I'll let the knuckles fly.. nd it ain't sonic 3 sega genesis
."


I loved Des' playing with the drug/spaz angle. I thought that was brilliant and he did it well.

iSpaz, you took a little step back from last week's verse in terms of original content, but still a solid showing my man. Just not enough to overcome Des here.

Vote - Destroyer

evaD 11-06-2020 12:03 PM

Adderal
Mississippi flag

Vs

Extended fam

Des I’ve seen you come better but you had enough here. Forgotten bar we’ll just ignore lol. Ispaz you word things fine but the concepts are pretty dated like knuckles fly bars in 2020 aren’t gonna work. Good from both tho

Vote - des

Culture 11-06-2020 01:53 PM

dest
twister bar is fire
adderall was cool
5 years bar felt like filler
dopamine was ok, wp isnt crazy fresh
mississippi was a cool idea, but mag/magnolia is a bit of a reach
closer is ok

spaz
not feeling the opener, seen the same thing done verbatim multiple times
destro bar is decent
it was a cool idea but im not loving the wording
distant cousin is cool
not really feeling the knuckles bar
closer felt a bit light


destro started out really strong and tapered off a bit, but didnt miss much and overall did a decent job of being consistent. spaz didnt really have anything that stood out to me

v/ destro

UPN Zuch 11-07-2020 01:11 AM

Up over no shows

Smod of War 11-07-2020 04:30 AM

Caught ur L last week... u ended bloodied like a tampon dude
u even came w/ twister bars & still couldn’t put one hand on blue
nice opener Chad
got swords, knives, and poisons all designed for quick kills
So... adderall up and it equals me getting a spaz to sit still
good again
I’m highly ranked in line to champ. It’s light work to finish u
u been here for five years and we’re all still like who the fuck is this dude?
absolutely not
I stay blazed, kid. wax, oil or flower, there’s smoke on my breath
and this dopamine I feel a higher level of reward when I choke u to death
no
got a new piece just for this battle. it’s straight doom for this shifty fag
u gonna be the first to watch this mag blossom like it’s the new Mississippi flag
nice
des a real life shooter, while u just pretend to be
&&& the four got ten shots that will ironically ensure u remember me
guess what? I don’t understand this


Vs


Beat you once, bunch of years ago. Came back nd I was stunned.
..I would say your past ur prime, but it looks like you never had one.
ladies & genlemen, welcome to the year 2006!
GI Joe shit. Got the four fifth and I'm ready to peel at this whole place.
Lollllllllll @ Destro..Guess its fitting the way I'm puttin steel thru your face.
fire
Not laughing with you, they laughing at you. They know I hit faster.
You a Clown to the site... Ironic how you won't EVER have the IT factor.
this is bitten
And when I come you run. This inbred could wish it wasn't.
I'll have that clip extended fam.. shots for you and that distant cousin.
lmao yo this was tough, good shit
I'll fade this pussy. Fuck the internet we could settle this.
Come thru nd I'll let the knuckles fly.. nd it ain't sonic 3 sega genesis.
decent, had potential to be better but execution lacked
Yeah I came cold. I'll slump and fold you cuz ur my main trigger.
..And when I break all ur limbs before I shoot it's just to show you a pain killer.
nah


Pretty close battle, both had some good lines. Destroyer had 3 nice ones and iSpaz had 2 nice ones. Spaz definitely drops more to my liking but Des got this one.


Destroyer

hotdogvendorman 11-07-2020 11:29 AM

Destro had the opener which was solid and the flag line is cool... Overall a decent verse. Ur wording is good throughout

Spaz had that extended clip line which was cool as a personal but not much else stood out to me concept wise.. Not terrible just not nearly consistent enough

V destroyer

Wanderer 11-07-2020 01:09 PM

Des

Twister dope probably LOTB
Adderall ok
Been here for years was a decent personal although a bit plain
Mississippi flag ok

Spaz

Destro was ok
Distant cousin was cool

Des had LOTB and an overall decent verse. iSpaz has flashes of heat but for the most part used played ideas or fell flat.

Vote des

UPN Zuch 11-07-2020 05:21 PM

Des had one of his better verses here.

Twister, adderall, and Mississippi bars were my fav.

Spaz had line of the battle with distant cousin. Worded real smooth, but not enough fire power overall to contend with Des here


Nice guys


Vote Des

Dope girl 11-07-2020 10:54 PM

I'm stuck on who vote for
Because both had illy lines
I like Destroyer bars better He had deeper bars

Vote Des

Scout 11-08-2020 07:41 AM

Dest

Caught ur L last week... u ended bloodied like a tampon dude
u even came w/ twister bars & still couldn’t put one hand on blue

got swords, knives, and poisons all designed for quick kills
So... adderall up and it equals me getting a spaz to sit still

Forgotten almost hit
Who's Barc? @Destroyer referring to your vote
Because I see this in the mag as well. Wtf


Spaz

And when I come you run. This inbred could wish it wasn't.
I'll have that clip extended fam.. shots for you and that distant cousin.

It factor almost hit

Voting Destroyer

UserName 11-08-2020 03:45 PM

Des -

Caught ur L last week... u ended bloodied like a tampon dude
u even came w/ twister bars & still couldn’t put one hand on blue
got a new piece just for this battle. it’s straight doom for this shifty fag
u gonna be the first to watch this mag blossom like it’s the new Mississippi flag

Adderall was cool too, i think the wording is keeping it off my list of favs though. Cool verse man.

Spaz -

Not laughing with you, they laughing at you. They know I hit faster.
You a Clown to the site... Ironic how you won't EVER have the IT factor.
And when I come you run. This inbred could wish it wasn't.
I'll have that clip extended fam.. shots for you and that distant cousin.

Extended fam was dope. IT factor I've seen variations of, but seemed like a fresh flip of a dated concept. Cool verse overall.

Going with Des on this, Spaz the stuff I didn't like of yours was a bit dated man, using a sonic/knuckles/genesis reference in 2020 is probably just an overall no - just consider it played bud. still a cool little battle, but Des gets it for fresher material overall.

V - Des

Blue Bayou 11-08-2020 04:33 PM

Caught ur L last week... u ended bloodied like a tampon dude
u even came w/ twister bars & still couldn’t put one hand on blue
very played, even with the personal attempt
got swords, knives, and poisons all designed for quick kills
So... adderall up and it equals me getting a spaz to sit still
i like the flip to go at his name, but the wp has been done
I’m highly ranked in line to champ. It’s light work to finish u
u been here for five years and we’re all still like who the fuck is this dude?
cool jab w/ sting
I stay blazed, kid. wax, oil or flower, there’s smoke on my breath
and this dopamine I feel a higher level of reward when I choke u to death
this was smooth, cool
got a new piece just for this battle. it’s straight doom for this shifty fag
u gonna be the first to watch this mag blossom like it’s the new Mississippi flag
pretty cool
des a real life shooter, while u just pretend to be
&&& the four got ten shots that will ironically ensure u remember me
smooth enough i suppose, cool idea


Vs


Beat you once, bunch of years ago. Came back nd I was stunned.
..I would say your past ur prime, but it looks like you never had one.
played
GI Joe shit. Got the four fifth and I'm ready to peel at this whole place.
Lollllllllll @ Destro..Guess its fitting the way I'm puttin steel thru your face.
cool nameplay
Not laughing with you, they laughing at you. They know I hit faster.
You a Clown to the site... Ironic how you won't EVER have the IT factor.
nah seen to many IT/clown punches over the years
And when I come you run. This inbred could wish it wasn't.
I'll have that clip extended fam.. shots for you and that distant cousin.
dope
I'll fade this pussy. Fuck the internet we could settle this.
Come thru nd I'll let the knuckles fly.. nd it ain't sonic 3 sega genesis.
ehh seen sega/sonic/knuckle punches in the past
Yeah I came cold. I'll slump and fold you cuz ur my main trigger.
..And when I break all ur limbs before I shoot it's just to show you a pain killer.
not feelin



Spaz that extended fam bar was dope but too many old references and played ideas to be a consistent verse... Des was more consistent here with fresher concepts so he takes this one... props to both

Vote DEs


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