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Election Day
Shhh...speak in whispers, surrender your talk
Thought police patrolling, throw em off the scent n get lost They’ve taken our guns, freedom, they’ve defunded the cops In 2023 people don’t exist, we’re all grey, gender less blobs We’ve been hidin, anxiety’s at an all time high Tentatively picking at my lips till all I taste is iron Biden’s people at our door, Weapons loaded for Civil War We’re all just jesters dancing for the president, fools inside his court This is it, it’s hell, truly dystopia Can anything else go wrong? The Wonder Years just broke up?!? FUCK well then screw it, nothing else to live for, I throw up the cals I slid out the back, poppin caps towards the crowd… Damn liberals don’t believe in guns so they ain’t cappin back I escape into the fog, the mist being dyed red by impending MAGA hats Trump leads the charge dressed like Rambo, bandolier and the headband Flicking fields of golden weed off his forehead, his stare is a deadpan The two armies charge each other, I’m in the middle, is this the end of ‘Verse? Blood and limbs fly, the screams of dismemberment…..well who won?! Find out November 3rd |
It's a pretty cool and timely written here. Can't say I disagree with the message here, it's quite the spectacle. Liked the verse overall, the blobs and maga lines the highlights.
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You’re always going to encounter some resistance, flack or lack of general interest when it comes to political write ups. The obvious reason being, people are sensitive about their stances, but also, more common than not, is because we’ve all read and written them before, in some capacity or another. Still, a good piece, is still a good piece, and this, is a good piece.
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Good shit, Verse. You have a real knack for creative visuals and satire. Your mechanics are also above par. Thanks for the read. |
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