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UPN Zuch 10-24-2020 11:28 AM

WEEK 4: Allen Knight 0-1 VS Culture 0-0 CULTURE WINS
 
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Allen Knight 10-24-2020 02:57 PM

Here, goin 10.

Culture 10-24-2020 06:43 PM

ay

Culture 10-28-2020 04:01 PM

vs AK aka Kevin Rizzel

U that lightweight pussy at parties always wasted & sick
Three fifths n he go black & get counted out on some slavery shit
Already robbed u once.. u ain’t have a phone, a chain, or nickel
I’ve heard of traveling light but Einstein coulda wrote an equation with u
Ur girl seen me peep her out the shower, what she did was the foul part
Bitch lifted her leg & had that towel so high I thought I was in South Park
I put my home on the map - local hero throwing up big numbers
U put ur home on the map of every app tracking neighborhood kid fuckers
Try and press up on me, that shit gets u get murdered fastest
Show u Up & ur fam'll search for Kevin for years like the bird in that flick

Chamber 10-29-2020 10:49 PM

U spit lame shit to a Asian chick like u can speak her language, LOL at this goner
She'd neva fall for that fake Japanese, Culture...bitch rather have Death before Dishonor
i got millions in the bank, for a grand i can get u taken out
imagine what a Mildew, ya fam's blood'll be coatin the insides of a vacant house
Superpowers spittin game to ho's, pull ya girl..if she smiles I'm on it dawg
I'll take her Homelander in bed & titty fuck the slut till milk projectiles off a wall
Ya moms & dads are crackheads, they OD & rot in a corner
Shit i ain't Harvey Dent but ill sell to both sides of ya fam n make a killing off a quarter
Shoot ya slut while she sleepin, in this phonies damn face
Have the bitch on the bed spread out twistin in more positions than her Onlyfans page

TOP iLL DRAGSTER TWO 10-30-2020 03:58 PM

U that lightweight pussy at parties always wasted & sick
Three fifths n he go black & get counted out on some slavery shit
Already robbed u once.. u ain’t have a phone, a chain, or nickel
I’ve heard of traveling light but Einstein coulda wrote an equation with u
Ur girl seen me peep her out the shower, what she did was the foul part
Bitch lifted her leg & had that towel so high I thought I was in South Park
I put my home on the map - local hero throwing up big numbers
U put ur home on the map of every app tracking neighborhood kid fuckers

^^ I fucked with all that honestly


i got millions in the bank, for a grand i can get u taken out
imagine what a Mildew, ya fam's blood'll be coatin the insides of a vacant house
Superpowers spittin game to ho's, pull ya girl..if she smiles I'm on it dawg
I'll take her Homelander in bed & titty fuck the slut till milk projectiles off a wall
Ya moms & dads are crackheads, they OD & rot in a corner
Shit i ain't Harvey Dent but ill sell to both sides of ya fam n make a killing off a quarter

Nice verses guys. Real nice

Vote culture

UserName 10-30-2020 06:08 PM

culture -

U that lightweight pussy at parties always wasted & sick
Three fifths n he go black & get counted out on some slavery shit
Already robbed u once.. u ain’t have a phone, a chain, or nickel
I’ve heard of traveling light but Einstein coulda wrote an equation with u
Ur girl seen me peep her out the shower, what she did was the foul part
Bitch lifted her leg & had that towel so high I thought I was in South Park
I put my home on the map - local hero throwing up big numbers
U put ur home on the map of every app tracking neighborhood kid fuckers

lmao this was all solid af. closer was meh, but these were dope.

AK -

i got millions in the bank, for a grand i can get u taken out
imagine what a Mildew, ya fam's blood'll be coatin the insides of a vacant house
Superpowers spittin game to ho's, pull ya girl..if she smiles I'm on it dawg
I'll take her Homelander in bed & titty fuck the slut till milk projectiles off a wall
Ya moms & dads are crackheads, they OD & rot in a corner
Shit i ain't Harvey Dent but ill sell to both sides of ya fam n make a killing off a quarter

Dope little section here as well. This battle was fire, guys - sucks its being slept on a little.

I got Culture by a little bit, but props all around for the material.

v - Culture

Saint 10-30-2020 06:16 PM

opener, travel light, south park

pretty consistent verse

mildew, harvey dent, homelander was great concept but a bit off wording wise

good battle here, thought AK would win on paper
Culture an alias no doubt, had a solid verse, executed a bit smoother too.. less misses

Vote Culture

Destroyer 10-31-2020 09:30 AM

Dunno who culture is but it’s obv not barc because no horrendous wordplay
Verse was nice.
AK came nice too. Loved The Boys reference. Was a close battle. Think it’s pretty even in quotes but Culture’s fake personal focus was effective. He eked it out, if barely

V/culture

Victor. 10-31-2020 12:40 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Culture (Post 790578)
vs AK aka Kevin Rizzel

U that lightweight pussy at parties always wasted & sick
Three fifths n he go black & get counted out on some slavery shit
what nigga? the fuck is u talking about. hell nah
Already robbed u once.. u ain’t have a phone, a chain, or nickel
I’ve heard of traveling light but Einstein coulda wrote an equation with u
thats fireeeeeeeeeeee
Ur girl seen me peep her out the shower, what she did was the foul part
Bitch lifted her leg & had that towel so high I thought I was in South Park
ok thats cool. alot of words to get to the point here but ok
I put my home on the map - local hero throwing up big numbers
U put ur home on the map of every app tracking neighborhood kid fuckers
lollllllllllll ok
Try and press up on me, that shit gets u get murdered fastest
Show u Up & ur fam'll search for Kevin for years like the bird in that flick
what flick? Dont answer. No this is a riddle not a punchline

Quote:

Originally Posted by Chamber (Post 790683)


U spit lame shit to a Asian chick like u can speak her language, LOL at this goner
She'd neva fall for that fake Japanese, Culture...bitch rather have Death before Dishonor
lol u really set the scene with that setup. points for that, but the whole angle is forced literally from conception
i got millions in the bank, for a grand i can get u taken out
imagine what a Mildew, ya fam's blood'll be coatin the insides of a vacant house
cool wp I guess. Not really "working" either way. but u worded it with enough impact to pass imo
Superpowers spittin game to ho's, pull ya girl..if she smiles I'm on it dawg
I'll take her Homelander in bed & titty fuck the slut till milk projectiles off a wall
same as above. I like this one less tho. Maybe cuz u backed to back them
Ya moms & dads are crackheads, they OD & rot in a corner
Shit i ain't Harvey Dent but ill sell to both sides of ya fam n make a killing off a quarter
lmaooooooooooooooooo fuego
Shoot ya slut while she sleepin, in this phonies damn face
Have the bitch on the bed spread out twistin in more positions than her Onlyfans page
cool jab




good battle. Both showed good consitency imo. and brung it thru the verses and nobody really whiffed any lines. Allen had lotb to me but Cult out worked him with a few more lines that landed solid


vote culture

iSpaz 10-31-2020 02:39 PM

Already robbed u once.. u ain’t have a phone, a chain, or nickel
I’ve heard of traveling light but Einstein coulda wrote an equation with u


vs

Ya moms & dads are crackheads, they OD & rot in a corner
Shit i ain't Harvey Dent but ill sell to both sides of ya fam n make a killing off a quarter


damnn droppin straight heat with these...i think overall culture had more hits tbh, but it was close. v/culture.

Scout 10-31-2020 08:57 PM

Culture

Already robbed u once.. u ain’t have a phone, a chain, or nickel
I’ve heard of traveling light but Einstein coulda wrote an equation with u

Ur girl seen me peep her out the shower, what she did was the foul part
Bitch lifted her leg & had that towel so high I thought I was in South Park
I put my home on the map - local hero throwing up big numbers
U put ur home on the map of every app tracking neighborhood kid fuckers


Allen

Superpowers spittin game to ho's, pull ya girl..if she smiles I'm on it dawg
I'll take her Homelander in bed & titty fuck the slut till milk projectiles off a wall

Not close...
Allen had a lot of good ideas, but they were just thrown in there with some sloppy ass wording. Homelander JUST made it

Voting Cult

Cred 11-01-2020 11:26 AM

U that lightweight pussy at parties always wasted & sick
Three fifths n he go black & get counted out on some slavery shit
nahhhh bruh
Already robbed u once.. u ain’t have a phone, a chain, or nickel
I’ve heard of traveling light but Einstein coulda wrote an equation with u
I fucked w/ this
Ur girl seen me peep her out the shower, what she did was the foul part
Bitch lifted her leg & had that towel so high I thought I was in South Park
ok this was coo
I put my home on the map - local hero throwing up big numbers
U put ur home on the map of every app tracking neighborhood kid fuckers
nah
Try and press up on me, that shit gets u get murdered fastest
Show u Up & ur fam'll search for Kevin for years like the bird in that flick
didn't like this closer

vs

U spit lame shit to a Asian chick like u can speak her language, LOL at this goner
She'd neva fall for that fake Japanese, Culture...bitch rather have Death before Dishonor
nah, not feelin
i got millions in the bank, for a grand i can get u taken out
imagine what a Mildew, ya fam's blood'll be coatin the insides of a vacant house
this was good
Superpowers spittin game to ho's, pull ya girl..if she smiles I'm on it dawg
I'll take her Homelander in bed & titty fuck the slut till milk projectiles off a wall
nah
Ya moms & dads are crackheads, they OD & rot in a corner
Shit i ain't Harvey Dent but ill sell to both sides of ya fam n make a killing off a quarter
this was coo
Shoot ya slut while she sleepin, in this phonies damn face
Have the bitch on the bed spread out twistin in more positions than her Onlyfans page
decent closer

That Einstein joint was good but I didn't really like anything else besides that high towel bar and that wasn't even to direct and harsh enough imo. AK had some shit I jus fucked wit more.

V/ - Allen Knight


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