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UPN Zuch 10-24-2020 11:27 AM

WEEK 4: Resin MIC 1-0 VS Brokenhal0 0-2 RESIN WINS
 
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Minimum: 10

Maximum: 16

Verses due 11:59pm EST October 29, 2020 (Thursday)

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Good luck, gentlemen
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UPN Zuch 10-27-2020 10:31 PM

I need to know that you guys are alive.
@Resin M-I-C @brokenhal0

brokenhal0 10-28-2020 08:35 PM

Resin Got slaughtered, Im like goku defending his daughter
Your not on my level get a shovel and dig
ill turn your best flowers to wax
put your top 10 in a cartpen smoke them like crack
can't even get high cause your whole style is whack
now everything makes sense to you
I keep it real, these shots eternally dabbing your brain
bring that flame to your crops until only resin remains
in my universe every adversary gets slain
hybrids of pain diamond blade chainsaws divide your remains
All you fems will get nervous, keep fuckin around
you'll get stoned , like a bitch with a head full of serpents
i heard you like to lick feet matter fact your wifes a big cheat
she let me slide in this week its deep the shit I fertilized for your seed
im like the garden of eve your just food for the trees
the only M I see will never be this elite
Yea i know why they call you resin cause you can't afford any weed

Resin M-I-C 10-29-2020 10:02 AM

Aiyyo
Where’s ur content?. Our time is what ur bar’s wastin
African kid w/ flies on his face tried to feed off that verse & died of starvation.
Got that .45 tucked. Waitin til the spot calm..
then it’s a Headshot.. ya blood goes so far back it can rival Ancestry.com..
I’m violent. Res leavin ya mouth broken..
Oh u shy? i’ll rip your vocal cord from ur throat so now u considered outspoken.
The whole crew with shottys. Pearly gates is where i’m sending dude..
Mayan Calender.. shiiit I’m predicting these 20 12’s will be the end of you.
Maannnn I can’t believe how this lame drops..
Skillwise.. you just a brokenHalo & i’m about 3 dozen Gamestops.
When I kill this joke, no witness.. leave the whole fam in stitches
Hear the click.. when i see ur Mom and pop it aint a local business.
Mahfucka.
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Culture 10-29-2020 11:05 AM

gonna be real, brokenhalo was not good. theres multiple lines that dont even seem to rhyme with anything, so im not sure why there's line breaks going on after "shovel and dig" or "makes sense to you" or "keep fucking around". Even when it did rhyme it was simplistic and theres like maybe 2 semblances of a punch throughout that whole verse and neither was worth quoting

resin the african bar was funny, ancestry was cool, mayan bar, even mom and pop were all above average. the gamestop bar didnt really make a lot of sense the way it was worded but forreal resin could've dropped his first 2 lines by themselves and it wouldve been a clear W. The starvation bar is probably the best of the battle

v/ resin

TOP iLL DRAGSTER TWO 10-29-2020 12:38 PM

Brokenhal0 didn’t have anything I fuck with


Resin had several solid jabs. GameStop and ancestry were my favs


Vote resin

Orc 10-29-2020 01:04 PM

Not reading Halos verse

Res was cool when he didn’t have to be, Mayan line was nice, Ancestry was a nice flip, pop ya moms remind me of the Kris Jenner line from URL. GameStop was okay too

Vote Resin

Ajax 10-29-2020 02:00 PM

In terms of sheer originality, there aren’t many all time that can fuck with Resin. And he’s been doing it consistently since when I started, which I think only a handful of people can claim. If he’s not the best on here currently, he’s easily in the top discussion. He’s probably my personal favorite to read.

Verse was fire. Even when it’s not the craziest idea (GameStop, etc), it’s still worded incredibly well. And there were several really well thought out punches here.

I read Halo’s and it’s not as awful as people are going to make it out to be. I bet it’d sound good in audio. But, half the lines didn’t rhyme and when they did, they weren’t witty enough to pull it in text.

Plus, he was going against one of the best. Too bad for him.

Resin wins.

john hensley 10-29-2020 02:42 PM

vote Resin.

Adverse 10-29-2020 03:30 PM

Resin wins handily with multiple strong jabs Mayan Calender, mom and pop, and ancestry were all dope

Hal0 can sense somewhat of an idea for how this shit goes from you but you need to scrap your style and figure something else out. Watch the greats and study man.

V/Resin

Aero 10-29-2020 04:56 PM

Brokenhalo was undeserving of that mom and pop bar. Fire.

Resin the GOAT

Mac 10-29-2020 05:06 PM

resin makes it look so easy lol.. what a fuckin master

Wanderer 10-29-2020 05:45 PM

Feed off, vocal chords and Mayan calendar were all fire

Resin taking no prisoners

Appreciate the dope read even though it didn’t have to be

Vote resin

iSpaz 10-30-2020 11:56 AM

V/ resin. He had quite a few hits, I think mayan calendar was lotb. Wasnt a fan of gamestops tbh. Broken halo i feel like theres some good shit behind all the mess, work on wording and flow.

Eviction 10-30-2020 01:44 PM

brokenhal0
half your shit don't even rhyme dude, also what does getting high got to do with being whack? I can't find a line in here I can quote, work on your structure, rhyme schemes, and punches, thats all.

resin MIC
his first bar summed up his opponents entire verse and I think that was enough to secure the win, outspoken was cool, mom and pop it was a cool wordplay I liked that.

vote / resin

other guy didn't have any quotables, resin had a few bars, and a few bars that he obv didn't try on, still enough to win.

UserName 10-30-2020 04:16 PM

When I kill this joke, no witness.. leave the whole fam in stitches
Hear the click.. when i see ur Mom and pop it aint a local business.

ahahahaha.

V - Resin

Fracture 10-30-2020 08:05 PM

Resin in scary form

Ancestry, mayan and closer were bang

Kuality 10-31-2020 02:50 AM

Resin's opener swung down the other verse on one side

V- resin.

evaD 10-31-2020 03:57 AM

Halo had a couple things approaching good concepts like M I see and burned crops but they didn’t work. Resin was on fire here. Opener, Mayan calendar, ancestry and mom and pop all LOTW contenders

Vote - res

Destroyer 10-31-2020 09:34 AM

Res took this with his opener
Shit was hilarious
Broken hal0 had...nothing

V/resin


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