WEEK 4: Jayfresh 1-1 VS INF 1-2 INF WINS
 

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Jayfresh verse:


ya girl a freaaaak yo. but,
.
.
Fresh too gets rough n shaggy..
suffers separation anxiety when I 'pull out' she screaming "daddy, daddy"
His accomps fulla roast n cypher wins. Inf padding the truuuth
When ya stats more stuffed than pockets 60 secs inside a money booth.
knives open u up. Prove u a damn bitch
pull the blade outcha n comes back my shirt ironed with a ham sandwich
yo i get mad ladies, the bed stay hot when we fuckin
u barely keep the sheets cool.. bunch of dad jokes , jean shorts, & tuck ins
& i'll fuckin' razorblade ya face into a canvas
till ya forehead splits up, deletes all contacts n posts "new year new me" status

@INF feel free to edit your verse in

Praised Orc after you lost. that moves basic as fuckkk
We kno the Pie-scene; fishing for compliments is why Jayson Biggs up.
Slooow death to ya. muscle spasm when it's ur time to die
Eyes goin fast to a slow twitch prove WE ain't cut from the same Fiber Type.
Whole squaad aim sticks, blood & guts certain to trigger
Trump promised a 'Red Wave w/ the Poles' u'll be the first to deliver.
Ur styles choppy fuck yo girl lines, every week is a flop
Mag'll read: Hello Fresh -- another season w/ a recipe in a box
A Biden deal cant help Jay. Allll hype but nothin works
He's no Hunter -- just the energy money made it on been undeserved.

Fresh too gets rough n shaggy..
suffers separation anxiety when I 'pull out' she screaming "daddy, daddy"
Decent
His accomps fulla roast n cypher wins. Inf padding the truuuth
When ya stats more stuffed than pockets 60 secs inside a money booth.
this is ok
knives open u up. Prove u a damn bitch
pull the blade outcha n comes back my shirt ironed with a ham sandwich
Ehh
yo i get mad ladies, the bed stay hot when we fuckin
u barely keep the sheets cool.. bunch of dad jokes , jean shorts, & tuck ins
Lol liked this
& i'll fuckin' razorblade ya face into a canvas
till ya forehead splits up, deletes all contacts n posts "new year new me" status
Nice


Praised Orc after you lost. that moves basic as fuckkk
We kno the Pie-scene; fishing for compliments is why Jayson Biggs up.
Don’t what pie-scene is meant to double up as? Cool name flip otherwise tho
Slooow death to ya. muscle spasm when it's ur time to die
Eyes goin fast to a slow twitch prove WE ain't cut from the same Fiber Type.
Nice
Whole squaad aim sticks, blood & guts certain to trigger
Trump promised a 'Red Wave w/ the Poles' u'll be the first to deliver.
Noice
Ur styles choppy fuck yo girl lines, every week is a flop
Mag'll read: Hello Fresh -- another season w/ a recipe in a box
Cool
A Biden deal cant help Jay. Allll hype but nothin works
He's no Hunter -- just the energy money made it on been undeserved.
Nice


Bit of a style clash here. Jayson has witty style but kinda old fashioned concepts. Pulls it off well. INF goes way more technical, sometimes i don’t get it but when it hits it’s great. I thought inf had the higher highs here so going with them.

Vote - inf

jayfresh
first bar was corny to me, second bar first line was cool but it lead to no where, your other bars was more bragging than punching, and a lot of horrorcore type bars, try to be more creative with your punches.

inf
the american pie reference in first bar was smooth, first to deliver was cool, recipe in a box was dope... made it on been undeserved was killer.

vote/Inf

I got inf taking this due to landing better punches.

Damn INF brought it this week.


Jay- money booth and sandwich bars were nice


INF - American pie, trump, hello fresh were dope


Got INF in a close one

Fresh too gets rough n shaggy..
suffers separation anxiety when I 'pull out' she screaming "daddy, daddy"
not bad
His accomps fulla roast n cypher wins. Inf padding the truuuth
When ya stats more stuffed than pockets 60 secs inside a money booth.
hmm
knives open u up. Prove u a damn bitch
pull the blade outcha n comes back my shirt ironed with a ham sandwich
not feelin this
yo i get mad ladies, the bed stay hot when we fuckin
u barely keep the sheets cool.. bunch of dad jokes , jean shorts, & tuck ins
hah
& i'll fuckin' razorblade ya face into a canvas
till ya forehead splits up, deletes all contacts n posts "new year new me" status
not bad

vs

Praised Orc after you lost. that moves basic as fuckkk
We kno the Pie-scene; fishing for compliments is why Jayson Biggs up.
okk
Slooow death to ya. muscle spasm when it's ur time to die
Eyes goin fast to a slow twitch prove WE ain't cut from the same Fiber Type.
fire tbh
Whole squaad aim sticks, blood & guts certain to trigger
Trump promised a 'Red Wave w/ the Poles' u'll be the first to deliver.
cool
Ur styles choppy fuck yo girl lines, every week is a flop
Mag'll read: Hello Fresh -- another season w/ a recipe in a box
hah
A Biden deal cant help Jay. Allll hype but nothin works
He's no Hunter -- just the energy money made it on been undeserved.
cool

inf got this. fiber type was lotb. jayfresh wasn't hittin too hard for me

Inf got this pretty handily
Jay fresh concepts were a little.... dad jokes was cool
Inf had some mean bars in there
Fiber type lotb

V/inf

Fresh underdelivered. Inf I remember your wording being way different at one point. Or I dont know. Both you guys kind of thrashed around in this one

I really only liked one line and Inf got it


vote inf

& i'll fuckin' razorblade ya face into a canvas
till ya forehead splits up, deletes all contacts n posts "new year new me" status

vs

Whole squaad aim sticks, blood & guts certain to trigger
Trump promised a 'Red Wave w/ the Poles' u'll be the first to deliver.
Ur styles choppy fuck yo girl lines, every week is a flop
Mag'll read: Hello Fresh -- another season w/ a recipe in a box

This joint kinda hurt my head. We def need a clean up the wording on both sides. I get where u were going with that Hello Fresh joint, shit cuda been fireee. Poles was coo tho.

V / - INF

Fresh too gets rough n shaggy..
suffers separation anxiety when I 'pull out' she screaming "daddy, daddy"
His accomps fulla roast n cypher wins. Inf padding the truuuth
When ya stats more stuffed than pockets 60 secs inside a money booth.
& i'll fuckin' razorblade ya face into a canvas
till ya forehead splits up, deletes all contacts n posts "new year new me" status

sheets "cool" was an interesting concept but i didnt like how you executed it

vs.

Praised Orc after you lost. that moves basic as fuckkk
We kno the Pie-scene; fishing for compliments is why Jayson Biggs up.
Slooow death to ya. muscle spasm when it's ur time to die
Eyes goin fast to a slow twitch prove WE ain't cut from the same Fiber Type.
Ur styles choppy fuck yo girl lines, every week is a flop
Mag'll read: Hello Fresh -- another season w/ a recipe in a box
A Biden deal cant help Jay. Allll hype but nothin works
He's no Hunter -- just the energy money made it on been undeserved.

Red Wave was a coo flip as well but i'm personally over all the red/blue etc. color political concepts


Jay you had someincredibly lazy wording this week but "conceptually" what i quoted were pretty fire to me... closer was jokes , speeration anxiety was swagg
INF very solid throughout with some dope cocneptts....energy tie in made me quote the Hunter closer, Fiber type was flames

This leagues weird to me right now...aside from maybe User vs Dave this battle is the most impressive to me in terms of creativity and concepts...

Closeish but i have INF getting the W